Wow. Didn't think it'd be translated this quickly. It's always cool to find out what's being said in these things.

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Hehe this is frigging great!

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That's a biiiig turd if you ask me

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Agreed Axl... woulda preferred things being left to the imagination in this case. This hardly feels as cool as when I thought it was just smutty talk.

...Or perhaps you were addressing that dump that managed its way out of Lightning's ass?

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Stop with scat pls ...

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I'll never look at Lightning the same way ever again.

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lighting looks hot, that fatso is lucky.

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I love Amano Ameno's work
bakuman FFss etc
I think original will be gooooood too

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Scat is about humiliation

The dialogue doesn't make sense most of the time.

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Lightning is so hot~ wanna fuck her

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http://www.doujinshi.org/book/361051/FFXIIIM/
RAW: /g/294875/46aa5a650a/
Korean Translation: /g/649802/72971f43a4/
Chinese Translation: /g/526981/4466943678/

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@ bakasora
Not necessarily, it's about loving the woman more than the regular man in my opinion :P,,

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Too bad about scat because that panel when she slowly go down to start sucking dick is legendary to me.

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I wish they had shown when he started training her and deflowered her.

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