Hi
This is my first translation, so if you have any tips be sure to tell me.

/g/2935215/2a120fa104/ raw/original
/g/2939551/109216c6b9/ Korean

Good stuff, thanks for all the effort and sharing :)

Base +57, Mandraken -6, Dave2810 -17, kleroop +2

Center your typesetting for starters.

Base +9, isoknight +7

this might help with your typeset

https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/the-idiots-guide-to-editing-manga/guide/main
https://nekyou.com/2020/01/06/typesetting-tutorial/

Base +9, isoknight +7, wowz098 +10, _Zap_ +12

Thanks. Keep it up bro.

Base +6, fattius_pattius +7, wowz098 +10, PsychicDoom -7

I don't really mind with this typesetting actually though..
Because no one else has translating this.

Base +6, kleroop +2, wowz098 +10, Aelth +7

Good first effort - there are some quibbles but it's overall solid. As others mentioned, put a little more work into the typesetting. @kanoon48 posted some good guides, but the basics are typically centered text blocks, standard manga font. It fills the bubbles better when coming from Japanese.

Base +14

It's crazy that no one's even done the 3/3 sister fuck day yet.

Base +6, thatonesaxplayer +6, Aelth +7