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Tracing MelkorMancin

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Did you have any concept for this story whatsoever? First the cover implies slutty Hinata and Tsunade shotaconing Boruto, which sounds amazing. Then it starts with flashforward to adult Boruto and Himawari engaged in good old incest, which is perfectly fine, maybe building up to a harem. But then you sideline Boruto and introduce the generic "manipulative son's friend", which, if you ask me, is pretty meh in itself, and, with the expectations already built for incest, borders on ntr. Just where is this going and who is your target audience?

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封面怎么一股jo味

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This little brat has no idea who he's messing with. So when is Hinata gonna turn the tables?

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I doubt she will, it's seems like it's just going to become some generic ntr trash.

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Lol the cover image is a tracing of a brazzers thumbnail

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