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(C84) [Rapid Rabbit (Tomotsuka Haruomi)] Hakutei no Sho (Touhou Project) [English]

(C84) [急行兎 (ともつか治臣)] 白帝乃書 (東方Project) [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2013-08-21 06:01
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Language:English  TR
File Size:44.75 MB
Length:41 pages
Favorited:171 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.37

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Posted on 21 August 2013, 06:01 UTC by:   Bigbigfool    PM
Uploader Comment
This one is just awesome, just as wonderful as this serie's first doujinshi!
The ‘awesome’ I mean here, is that it could make you shed your tears and another type of fluids both...
Hope everyone enjoys it! This should be the best doujinshi on Aki sisters till now.
Posted on 21 August 2013, 15:07 UTC by:   SCSS    PM
Score +68
Aaand you still didn't bother polishing your editing skills, I see.
Edit: How strange. If you don't have time, then how did you manage to publish this?
Posted on 21 August 2013, 06:53 UTC by:   Phobos_lan    PM
Score -7
Thanks for the translation of this wonderful doujin
Posted on 21 August 2013, 07:03 UTC by:   Hakrei    PM
Score +50
The grammar and the editing could use some work, but
the concept of the story is very good. However I
couldn't enjoy how everyone spoke like Yoda...
Posted on 21 August 2013, 10:03 UTC by:   Treia    PM
Score +105
If you're going to make a "translation", how about knowing the language, or at least running it through an editor? Typesetting inside the bubbles helps, too...

It's not like either of these skills is particularly scarce, and many people will gladly offer their volunteer work in exchange for translations. In fact such help has been posted on all previous "translations" you've posted here and you have not improved at all.
Posted on 21 August 2013, 10:14 UTC by:   asdrub666    PM
Score +24
@bigbigfool
I see you can translate to Chinese too. That's nice.

In the forum you can find some useful links to some tutorials:
https://forums.ehentaihip.com/index.php?showtopic=68725

Or try this site:
http://csdgn.org/inform/manga-editing
Posted on 21 August 2013, 11:29 UTC by:   Super_Hornet    PM
Score +31
Dude... same old same old, no improvement whatsoever.

Use Photoshop next time, mate.
Posted on 21 August 2013, 12:02 UTC by:   Deathmatcher    PM
Score +20
And then, Reimu beat the crap out of them.
Posted on 21 August 2013, 14:52 UTC by:   chivo_expiatorio    PM
Score +20
How can you care so little about the quality of the work that you won't even put words inside the damn bubbles?
Posted on 21 August 2013, 22:16 UTC by:   Ripsmash    PM
Score +24
I knew this was going to happen.
For fuck's sake, dude.
Posted on 21 August 2013, 22:27 UTC by:   JukanX    PM
Score +26
First thing to do: center align your text. It will make your releases look 100% more professional.
Posted on 22 August 2013, 02:54 UTC by:   Zaphod H    PM
Score +77
Beautiful artwork.
Text: obscure, ungrammatical, and poorly laid out.
Posted on 23 August 2013, 03:26 UTC by:   saitemaru    PM
Score +32
someone please edit this
Posted on 23 August 2013, 21:20 UTC by:   Qardo    PM
Score +31
well wasn't bad...but...really need to run through someone to proofread and edit tye grammar issues. Yet besides that. Good story.

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