Artistically speaking, it is quite good; just needs to be cleaned up and sharpened for better visual clarity, if not colored as well. So kudos to the artist there :) .

Text-wise, I give it 2 "meh" out of 4 "meh" -_- .

[UPDATE EDIT]: Did not know the art was being ripped off. I retract my kudos :( .

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welp I enjoyed it and from the text at least it seemed like the artist knew the dc universe, although I don't read the comics I only watch the movies so I can't say much but if there is a part 2 coming I'm excited and thanks for the upload

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I was all like, " aww yeah, Flash gonna kick some ass. Turn back time, PARADOX BITCH" and then he caught an Omega beam to the chest...

Art was damn fine though.

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Damn he fucked them up.But why pt2, I mean wonder woman broke so easily he took the fun out of it.
The only way pt2 going to be good is if he's breaking other dc women in my opinon.
Art 5/5 story 4/5

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to be honest, it's very in Izayoi Seishin's style. Im a little suspecious about the artist.

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This fucker riped off Izayoi Seishin's art.

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This was the hottest thing I've read in a long time. Superhero BDSM with psychologically-cosmic-powered orgasms.

Story 10/10
Art 10/10
Panels 9/10 (Doggy style POV pls)

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If you people are going to say he's ripping off the work of other artists, you should be able to back up your words.
Here, let me do it for you!

http://imgur.com/LYEgrul,GtRtG21,C4p40cq,CXPtz77,aHnajjB,0yyoUMF,RLORGeN#0

As an aside, Anti-Life is not Death. That's a gross over-simplification and shows a complete lack of understanding of both the concept (of Anti-Life) and the character of Darkseid.

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The artist is Pegasus of WWOEC forums.
http://www.wwoecforum.com/showthread.php?t=15695&page=6
He also posts some similar erotic fiction.

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My childhood just got murdered/raped...

*Cry's*

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Izayoi Seishin is my number one favorite hentai artist. You can see it a mile away he copied Izayoi Seishin... stole various poses and altered them a little. I might be going over the top but this freaking pisses me off a lot. What a damn fraud. This shit should be taken down. I don't mind parodies of anime/manga/comics but don't go stealing other people's work and calling it your own. Fuck this guy.

11 vs /s/d8067b790d/286460-38
13 vs /s/ce875295b0/286460-65
16 vs /s/70358c17b3/286460-182
17 vs /s/bc0949e471/286460-197

Please don't share anymore of Pegasus' ripped off works.

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10/10 tracing skills.

Darkseid gains the power of Anti-Life and stabs Superman with a knife...so apparently when you gain the power of Anti-Life you lose all creativity.

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Shit was good. I enjoyed it.

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Do we have a plagiarism tag?

EDIT: Ha, look at all these downvotes from people who dislike an artist getting called out.

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Not a fan of the rape genre. But I do think I found a new favorite artist.

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superman die stabbed with a knife? yeah right.

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I used to be a speedster like you.

But then I took an Omega Beam to the chest.

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Thanks a lot for updating

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@Necronomicron - Holy crap! Is this "artist" some sort of Greg Land of hentai? Sonuva... using a drawing style of another artist is perfectly fine, outright tracing is just pathetic.

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canon ruined ................

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No confirmed visual of Batman being killed. "To be continued" because Batman is preparing HARD, and NOTHING can stop a FULLY prepared Batman lol (^__^)

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Hablando de Parodias Eroticas Oscuras sobre los más conocidos "Superheroes de los DC Comics" mis camaradas. Esta es una de las más Oscuras si duda. Gracias.

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Wonder Woman's sword is supposed to be mystic (at least in Kingdom Come it is) so yes, it can kill Superman.

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>Superman gets killed with a sword
I guess if it's magical, magic being superman's weakness, it'll kill him

Kill superman with magic, kill Hal with ease(he's an idiot so it's ok), rape diana. But Flash is too fast to be hit with an omega beam. Total bonerkill zzz

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Porn is Porn, so lay back and enjoy it.

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