by Zero Identity. All credits go & belong to him/ her, I'm just a person who likes this stuff. Visit zeroidentitycreations.blogspot.com for more of the creator's stuff, he/she's awesome.
Posted on 09 February 2013, 19:05 UTC by: kadashzzxx
Score +13
Schoolmate 2 ?
Base +8, shichiseiken +5
Posted on 10 February 2013, 02:57 UTC by: Zero Identity
Score +209
oh god how did this get here i am not good with computer
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Base +1, D u b b y +12, zykyne +6, 3012010 +2, amped +28, IsolatedSilverWind +5, aloc1234 +25, Herp in your Derp +19, Sumegeno +8, vooekt +7, Tonny666 +7, Eleclight +7, anonym654554 +8, and 8 more...
This is pretty good, Is there any other work by him/her, Cause this is good, It's like a mix of "I am a girl now", "[Date] Subute Wa Boku No Mono", and "Dulce Report"
Base +7
Posted on 16 February 2013, 01:05 UTC by: Sage Windu
Score +20
The dialogue and concept is nice enough, but the narrative itself could use some work. It's like the writer couldn't decide whether to use first- or thrid-person PoV so he/she decided to combine the two. As such, it ends up reading kinda awkwardly.
If the creator sticks with, my opinion, third-person PoV, this could be fucking awesome.
@Sage Windu: I definitely noticed the same, but I also noticed some parts were italicized and most of them seemed to be Steven's thoughts or emphasis. What I figure is that some of those lines weren't italicized and that's what makes it jarring.
All in all, one of those things where I found it too interesting to fap, if only because it's clear the main would kill to be a guy again.
Base +24, anonym654554 +8
Posted on 22 February 2013, 22:57 UTC by: JakeRowling
Score +14
I read it for the story. Looks like the plot is finally unfolding now.