[Arai Kei] Tourou no Su | The Praying Mantis' Nest [English] {desudesu}

Posted on 07 December 2015, 04:11 UTC by: tkhang

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Alright! This has been on my list forever. I thought someone would eventually translate it but I guess not. Good thing I'm here I guess. I love the story. So many question. How does the real mother look like? How the mother go from beating him to fucking him? Why the father remarried when he clearly caught his first wife and son fucking? Would you blame the son for fucking his new mother when the father now clearly knew that could happen? Crazy right? Honestly I wouldn't mind having another story where the real mother comes back.

If you read through all that thanks for read!

Translator: desudesu
Editor: Ran-Zu

Now Enjoy!

Posted on 07 December 2015, 04:18 UTC by: Wilfriback

That's some deep stuff right there.

@tkhan
Maybe is she a magician?

Posted on 07 December 2015, 04:44 UTC by: h-e-r 021

i was thinking of something to say but nothing comes to mind,
I dont even know if this counts as ntr or not since the guy got "choked".
Is this what they call a passive yandere?
@tkhang
Guess that means dont fuck what is not your´s. But i kinda get it, the kid was fucking is new mom because thats what he did with is previous mother but was not of desire to have her it was just to have sex so when she wanted more then that like being ntr the kid just wanst turned to that side and pushed her away, would like to know how would she have lived after this because the father got home saw a kid and another disapered, so more "justice" to that, wife gets arrested for murdering a kid.
Crazy story.

Last edited on 07 December 2015, 05:15 UTC.

Posted on 07 December 2015, 05:03 UTC by: tkhang

@h-e-r 021

It's call "JUSTICE!

Ha ha, okay joke aside. Yea, ending was kinda crazy. "

Posted on 07 December 2015, 05:24 UTC by: ranwolf

how oblivious could the husband be for 9 months?

Posted on 07 December 2015, 05:57 UTC by: IosonoOtakuman

Uhm....shouldn't there be a "yandere" tag?

Posted on 07 December 2015, 06:08 UTC by: shamful7

A hentai with an Amazing story and amazing art, this is like a freaking unicorn.

Posted on 07 December 2015, 06:27 UTC by: manongmorcon

I rather want to see some scenes where the kid fucked his twintail classmate in that 3 months

Posted on 07 December 2015, 06:31 UTC by: destroyingtime

@ranwolf he left on a overseas trip to do research/job for 1-2 yrs

also that kid got what was coming to him lol the excuse he gave her really made her snap.

Posted on 07 December 2015, 06:40 UTC by: KoroshiXLelouch

Enjoy prison and losing your husband.

Posted on 07 December 2015, 06:40 UTC by: Loki The Flameshield

Well. That happened.

Posted on 07 December 2015, 07:53 UTC by: Asarta

Wow that was fucked up on so many levels.

Posted on 07 December 2015, 08:13 UTC by: thefourkingdoms

One of the best endings ever!

Posted on 07 December 2015, 08:47 UTC by: Demonlogan

Akitoshi seemed like he knew he fucked up after that call. And instead of doing damage control like oh-yeah-neither-of-his-parents-taught-him-how-to-do-that, he ran away for a few months like this-kind-of-sounds-like-the-father-doesn't-it(?) and somehow thought being at home alone with her could possibly end with them going their separate ways alive and probably-not-that-mentally-healthy.

The last thing you ever consider doing to someone who you-know-from-previous-experience-can-and-will overpower you is reject their offer to be together forever.

Trust me, I'm not a doctor.

Posted on 07 December 2015, 09:04 UTC by: Super Shanko

I don't feel bad for that kid, because I feel like this is a nice little bit of turnabout on the usual "Hey, I'm some punk, and I'm going to totally make a sex slave out of this fully adult woman" (I'm looking at you HH), with the hilarious switch that he ended up pulling this with a crazy bitch, which he should've known better since she's younger than the father.

All in all, the only thing this is missing is a Crypt Keeper type fellow dishing out horror puns and a moral of the story.... That would've made an excellent credit page to this.

Posted on 07 December 2015, 09:05 UTC by: bakasora

Dem soft looking boobs

Posted on 07 December 2015, 09:09 UTC by: chcommunity

when i was a kid i once saw discovery channel about praying mantis. when a female got pregnant they tend to be cannibalistic and eat her male. and her male got somewhat resigned to their death and didnt resist.
and now i've read this i just kinda remember that orz

Posted on 07 December 2015, 09:11 UTC by: Leopold Stotch

ITS FINALLY HAPPENING

Posted on 07 December 2015, 10:04 UTC by: b1324590

A long winded Viagra commercial

Posted on 07 December 2015, 10:06 UTC by: pihip

...you know, when a kid says that he wants to meet girls just to fuck them (this when he was already fucking his mom and, after her, his stepmom), you're pretty much assured he's gonna be a dirty scumbag. He already was anyway, so good riddance.

Posted on 07 December 2015, 10:55 UTC by: PregnantWhoreFucker

*Tells her to get an abortion*

*Calls her an old hag*

What a catch this guy is!

Posted on 07 December 2015, 13:46 UTC by: Nekohunter33

Lmao why does shit like this never happen in NTR stories.

Posted on 07 December 2015, 15:06 UTC by: gianvalgian

Daily reminder to stick your dick in crazy.

Posted on 07 December 2015, 16:20 UTC by: greed2

@ pihip
No kidding, seriously. I feel sorry for his biological mom; he likely didn't bother to defend her when he was the one that raped her. Then he corrupts his step mom and karma occurs in the end.

Posted on 07 December 2015, 16:30 UTC by: Jag90

Ah finally I've found it, a NTR stories where the girl/woman was broken the right way instead of the nonsensical ahegao.
What a fresh development, a shame that it was not longer.

Posted on 07 December 2015, 16:34 UTC by: Madaoke

No! This can't be happening! I'm supposed to be in charge here!

Posted on 07 December 2015, 18:14 UTC by: holy_demon

this is actually more realistic than most mind break stuffs out there.

After all, when you reduce a human being to "animal", stripping her off all morality and rationale, you're left with an apex predator. Sexual gratification is actually a very high-level function. People would sooner pull out your innard with their bare hands, than beg for cocks with a silly face.

Posted on 07 December 2015, 19:27 UTC by: vixtor7

5 Stars!!!

Posted on 08 December 2015, 03:01 UTC by: Comrade Claus

the male mantis is eaten, to feed the eggs, his children, as they grow inside the mother, once the male impregnates the female, he no longer needs to live

clearly, this only works in short lived, fast maturing species w/ massive birth rates

indeed, i wish his real mom had been shown, & i wished that big belly pregnancy would be shown

Posted on 08 December 2015, 03:12 UTC by: Thud

The take-away is to remember to wear a rubber, especially when banging your step-mom.

Posted on 08 December 2015, 05:55 UTC by: Chup@Cabra

Well, this had a 'twilight zone' ending I didn't expect 0_0

Also, the moral for this tale: Use A Fucking CONDOM, Idiots!!!! ^_^

Posted on 08 December 2015, 06:19 UTC by: Love1sWar

what, the authorities forgot to tell the dad his son went missing for a year? lol

Posted on 08 December 2015, 07:36 UTC by: Yuukeepo

Dumbfuck deserved it. WHY THE FUCK DO YOU NOT WEAR A CONDOM??

Posted on 08 December 2015, 08:27 UTC by: Infinipede

surreal hentai is the best. came for the preg tag but stayed for the mindfuck.

Posted on 08 December 2015, 09:13 UTC by: knucklesluigi

Damn she offered him a life where all he had to do was love her; no work at all, and he refused? Wow.

Posted on 08 December 2015, 19:37 UTC by: yadua

@greed7 it depends, for all we know that situation with his real mom could be like this. She was abusing him and beating the shit out of him for no apparent reason and as a revenge he raped her or coerced her into having sex, we don't know. Regarding his most probable death, well i think it was a bit too much. Cutting his dick off? Sure. Breaking some bones? Sure. But killing him? And on top of that in the house of friend? That classmate of his will surely have some strange dreams now.

Posted on 08 December 2015, 23:15 UTC by: jin21

She is a MANNNN EATER err SHOTA EATER .... karma tis a bitch

Posted on 09 December 2015, 03:01 UTC by: Soluc

Well.... weird stuff, but at least the title makes sense now,

Posted on 09 December 2015, 06:51 UTC by: Lorisor

Considering it's been 10 months minimum since the boy's death the likelihood of prison decreases as time goes by.(unless some bullshit 'Cold Case' appears which I'm not sure Japan does that...)

This story is actually pretty much Mindbreak gone wrong since the lil dude actually only fucked her ONCE and the STEPMOTHER came back all the subsequent times without coercion(doesn't make the first time right though but still).

I wouldn't say he 'Got what he asked for' because of the semi-forced(more like strong coercion) scenario but rather because he stuck his dick in crazy...despite not knowing she was crazy but it was forced AND INSIDE THE HOME so he had options to weigh, if he wanted YOUNG then he could've went out and scouted young but being a lazy horndog he got stuck with a bad end.

He did go out of his way to say "I love you" which I mean he could've done without saying, probably was thinking about that in hindsight as faded from this mortal plane.

Posted on 09 December 2015, 07:08 UTC by: Demonlogan

@Lorisor

Consider that the very reason she's his "new" mother is because he got caught doing the same thing with his actual mother, and that arguably things were going the exact same direction (he mentions she would beat him and didn't look particularly off-put by that). And considering that, it's not terribly mindbreak-y at all; he suggests she's sexually frustrated, she grabs onto that and takes advantage of his offer to relieve it.

Kid's an ass who just took what he thought he wanted without looking at the price tag or the No Refund policy.

Posted on 09 December 2015, 13:37 UTC by: PKLove23

And the Moral of this Story: Don't rape and break sweet, lovely women into nympho sex slaves, because they will go crazy and kill your ass when u try to leave them. That smug little bastard deserved his fate.

Posted on 11 December 2015, 16:21 UTC by: The Captain Falcon

This guy. Is this what they call "You reap what you sow?"

Posted on 15 December 2015, 11:16 UTC by: KaInEvIL

Pregnancy is a dangerous business :P

Posted on 29 December 2015, 02:09 UTC by: Snotnose9001

Man. I'd honestly prefer it if more mind breaks end with a killer than a slut. Mix things up.

Posted on 09 February 2016, 12:09 UTC by: Aloque1

The character development in this is amazing, was not expecting that ending! I don't know if i would call this Yandere or even mind break, i mean if the woman fell in love with him and he broke her heart while she was pregnant and right after they had sex of course she is going to be emotionally unstable. She also commented that it was 'her first time' and that 'she wanted to give it to the person she loves' and that she had 'imagined having meals like the one they had with her children' meaning that she had hoped to have some but then she says she had kind of given up on having them. So she ends up falling in love with him, gets impregnated by him, and fills up her doki doki bar to full and then he just completely breaks that doki doki bar it begs the question of what that kid thought would happen given the circumstances.

But to say that is yandere? I mean she didn't get jealous when he said he had already eaten with friends but rather showed concern, she was ready worship him for the rest of her life but he was not, and it is my humble opinion that one should not have sex with someone unless they are prepared to take responsibility, it is also my humble opinion that you should not get in the way of a relationship unless you are invited by both participants! The kid did not follow these cardinal points of mine and so I can not say I feel sorry for him, I do feel sorry for the mother though. Just not sure if it should be counted as yandere, I mean the plot is so believable, and the story is quite riveting. 5 stars well deserved.

@fridge845

I know I call him a kid as well but that's purely because he is the son of the father and the step son of the mother, he is actually studying to enter into a university so calling him a 'kid' as in an adolescent or a child is a bit much, he is a grown man and seems not to even have a job! Instead he's just banging his father's wives and mooching off the income that father provides while not even being emotionally attached to either familial or intimate relations and seems rather apathetic and condescending to both. He also raped his step mother, and though she may have enjoyed it it still counts, you can see her struggle and repeatedly asking him to stop, so yeah he did deserve to die and eventually one of his victims would have probably done him in, he only got lucky that his first two were sexually frustrated women who couldn't out him or risk the dissolution of the family naturally being mothers they already had a motherly affection for their little bird and he took advantage of that to, to do all of that and not even be serious about the relationship that formed out of his debauchery he is the worst type of person. He called a beautiful lovely lady with a mind blowing body an old hag and proceeded to break her heart... and for that I hope he goes to the special hell.

Posted on 17 February 2016, 06:02 UTC by: Albireon

This guy wants to fuck young girls while he already has the cutest yandere? Like honestly, at least give it a try..

I would give her the promise to date her a couple of month, if she aborts the baby, lol
and if it turns out to be boring, I can try and find somebody for her
I mean, seems like she just wants to fuck.. really not a deep relationship..

Posted on 18 March 2016, 03:46 UTC by: truefire

Karma is definitely a thing with this one, but I honestly feel like what he was alluding to with his biological mother was that she sexually abused him, and not that he seduced her. Let's assume that the first marriage was very much like the second. At some point in time, the workaholic father who is also rarely home and barely intimate with his family became impotent, and the first wife kind of took her frustrations out on the son, physically and sexually. That alone will mess a kid up. The father finds out about the relationship, ditches the first wife, and then six months later (seriously? who does that?), despite being impotent and despite what happened with his son, gets himself a younger second wife. This tells me that the kind of woman he looks for in a marriage is a trophy wife/ babysitter. So, without considering the son's feelings or mental state and simultaneously bringing a new wife into a loveless marriage, he just goes back to business like his marriage is an afterthought. Maybe the son seduced his stepmother out of resentment for what happened to him. Maybe he wanted to feel like he was in control for once. Or maybe he wished that if there was someone he had to call mother and have sex with, it was the kind, meek woman he'd only recently known before he made his move. Either way, I feel like whatever happened with his real mother greatly influenced how this story concluded. Once his stepmom started eagerly initiating sex, I suspect that it reminded him of how his real mom treated him, and that would explain why he chose to run off and live with a friend for a few months instead of either facing the issue head-on or embracing the relationship he started. Basically, there were no winners here, and it all at least indirectly comes back to the father not tending to his family in any other way than financially.

TL;DR: This has been your daily dose of reading too much into porn.

Posted on 30 August 2017, 10:15 UTC by: hebelele

No, the real Moral of the Story is: If you fuck your stepmom and get her pregnant, don't call her an old hag and to abort the baby. Also use a fucking condom.

Posted on 08 September 2017, 14:52 UTC by: Forgunia

Nice karma. The asshole son is dead and she'll sooner or later ends up in prison when the truth is discovered.

Though, realistically speaking, she shouldn't have been able to choke him. A male of that age should already be strong enough to physically resist a woman.

Posted on 27 July 2018, 05:26 UTC by: Pyramidstation

damn. I'm glad e-hentai gives me a dose of reality once in a while.

Posted on 14 August 2018, 07:11 UTC by: lusterjoker

everyone here seems like this illusions of a very myriad "reality" that this story has which is none.
why?
first I don't think the Father how proud he is on his stand on society will ever let the son stayed at his house, eating his food and spending on his expenses and by the background delivered by the author about the Father character as some Intellect person of a science aspect in this planet aka a Professor, the most possible way he will send his son to some psychiatric first and the least chopped him off to pieces after getting caught him fucking his wife.
the only possible way the father let the son stay can only make sense if the father is having a background as a sexual deviant and low intellectual capable person.
second The fact that he's got re married with far younger women to take care his son as a reasons contradict the previous mentioned fact.
third the Father goes abroad for 2-3 years while having an experience as bad as having caught his wife and son having sex and get divorced then let the son stay while getting remarried to sexually frustrated younger women as a wife really can't helped us to questioning the Father character emotional and intellectual values.
fourth it's another damn ridiculous plot armor that forced just to fit the story.

anyway since apparently "Justice" is something Non-Existent on any NTR+Cheating manga either that hentai or mainstreams that popular. this story really tick that little petty zealous inside us all.

Posted on 03 September 2018, 00:20 UTC by: boag

Ending was perfect.

Posted on 06 September 2018, 02:49 UTC by: SyriasX

wother fucker be tripping fuckin balls. like yeah shes older than you but you know who else is older than you......MOST WELL KNOW PORNSTARS!!!!! the idea that this fucker gets such a hot piece of ass (that hasnt gone through surgeries or does drugs or is fucking guy that would make you question why she hangs around you) and would dump her because he wants to date an 18 yr old is fucking dumb. also pro tip for all those players out their with enough braincells to rub together *ahem*..........dont try to shut the girl down WHILE YOU HAVING SEX or when she is in contact with you/close to leathal objects talking about getting serious.

first: if your training a girl like in hentai she basically no longer has morals or at least she has enough to fain normalcy in public so she is above cutting yo bitch ass.

second:if you happen to not be; a black man/old man/gyaru (gyar-oh i dont fuckin know)/a rich shit/a fat socially awkward weirdo that no one like or any combination of these chances are you are less likely to have drugs,magic,hypnosis,mind control or basically anything that gives you control over the girl so if you train her you create a sociopath with a fixation on her love interest and the willingness to kill that which she cares about so you made a yandere without a leash......good job retard

third: if you are in the yandere failstate then the last thing you want is to turn her down unprepared. you need the essentials:
distance; these people may be stronger than you faster than you or posses a weapon that will put a stop to you easily so dont be to close,

protection; you cant be 100% on anything so it doesnt hurt to protect yourself,

location; never play on her turf get her somewhere that is at best in your ball park and at worst as close to neutral ground as possible,

intel; that right fucker ya gonna have to learn up on your foe and where they make their bed BUT and this is a big but... you must chose your battles with this as the girl may have fallen for your sweet talk
or blackmail but in this case they wont be stupid if some of these yandere 'girls' have secrets that if they find you catching on to they will preemptively attack leaving you with no way to realistically survive
as this is a 99.9% kill scenario but if you want to effectively set your protection and location you need to take the risk,

lastly support; lets face it you might die or have your life ruined so if need be you need backup and behind the scenes support as strength in numbers and all that but this means you will let other people in
on your relationship and this has its own subset of out comes Aa: your support takes the girl for themselves and you get off scot free Ab: a mass murderer is now tailing you and they know your reason
those bodies showed up to their door B: you get the support your looking for and possibly lose a few friends or Ca: no one helps you Cb: a potential murderer is tailing you

if ya dont fuck up you can get out of this without you head being stuffed in a gym bag (who gets that reference?)

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[Arai Kei] Tourou no Su | The Praying Mantis' Nest [English] {desudesu}

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