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Thanks Mrsuperhappy and samael101 for the edits!

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page 2 has 'minch meat' and page 4 has 'mince meat' both of them should be 'minced meat' (with a d at the end, mincemeat is a fruit and spice mixture, like in a mince pie)

@samaeel101, True, though mincemeat has not had actual meat in it for....a very long time like hundreds of years, and I'm fairly confident in the context that the orc guy is referring to the purely meat version, i.e grinding her up into meat, not ground meat mixed with spirits and fruit.

Shepherds pie is called such because it is meant ot have lamb/mutton in it, being the animals that shepherds own.

Last edited on 09 May 2016, 18:22 UTC.

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Orcs must die

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That's one realistic hentai orc.

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That escalated so fast...

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@Mrsuperhappy: Actually mincemeat could be used in both instances. As an expression meaning utterly destroyed and simply meaning minced meat. (b.t.w. Traditional mincemeat had finely chopped meat in it, as it was a way of preserving that meat, hence the name. Shepherds pie, thankfully, has always been free of shepherds. ;) ).

Still, shakuganexa you can leave it as it is now.

Some errors or small mistakes:
page 1 "...so I want to know; Where are your hideouts?..." "...defiant looks in the face of torture..." "...you brought this onto yourselves..." "...don't take us too lightly..." "...no matter what you do we will never surrender..." (surrender could be changed to submit, but that's more a matter of preference.)
page 2 "...flat chested..." lose the "like", it's implied, and sounds more natural."...If you talk to me the way your sister..." also lose the "a" in "like her here, fucking minced meat for the pigs to eat".
page 3 "...masters enemies are my enemies..." "...your reward, you will be impregnated with my..." "...is as nothing compared to it..." "... fill my stomach with..."
And on page 4 change "is" to "are" "Your fluids are coming out" "...could have had a lot of fun..." final panel "to" should be "into" "before I turn you into minced meat"

Hope this helps, (and that I didn't make any errors.)

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Why can't we have reverse for once? Like an ugly female orc with a family getting gangbanged by elves maybe?

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I had a boner....... It's gone now.

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"Always be wary of a man that keeps a pig farm." - Bricktop.

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Should have at least expected the possibility

When you have 2, you have redundancy.

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Still better than Twilight.

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Aww yis, it's time for some sister ffm. Time to fa-

Wait. What? Wasn't the orc supposed to mindbreak both of them and have a threesome? Wasn't it supposed to show the mindbreak scenes?

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That... escalated quickly.

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This was an interesting read. The sister sold out her comrades pretty damn fast when she realized what was at stake.

This could have been amazing if it was:

1) less violent
2) a lot longer

That said.....I kinda enjoyed it? I mean, I'm sure as fuck not fapping to any chicks getting murdered. BUUUUUT, female soldier selling out her comrades was hot(I like context, leave me alone).
But the ending dialogue total killed it.

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Not so proud.

Not so proud now, are you?

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Talk shit, get hit

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I love Terasu's art, but it's a shame that his works are so short.

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Its not very fappable but it is pretty funny.

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You Coward.

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The last place I'd ever expect to receive an etymological lesson.

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Now i understand from the beginning terasu was a piece of shit abilty to draw doesnt mean that you cant be a piece of shit

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THIS SHOULD NOT EXPAND DONG

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Death is such a crappy way to put fear into someone. Every time you use it you have to kill somebody! Torture is a much more sustainable method of producing fear.

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