Better version.

This is great you should make a full blown comic out of this

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that seems like a really difficult way to hold someone

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It's not very smart to flee *after* being discovered as being a demon, while loudly announcing where your destination is. As a powerful demon, I'm more than sure she was capable of...You know, locking the damn door? Use a spell that prevents people from flipping the door open?
If she'd fly away while being undetected, who'd know it was the work of a demon?

And no, I have no idea why this specific work bothered me so much when it came to...."Logic". For some reason I just cannot apply porn-logic upon this piece. Being carried by the asshole was fittingly absurd, though.
It may be a good thing for the author, albeit it's a bit of a double-edge sword.

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A demon isn't necessarily smart. It might be too full of carnal desire to actually focus on what's the smart thing to do, instead of raping the first person they see.

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This needs continued definately

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the end:
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