I enjoyed this! I think that Kisekae is a great way to spice up erotic writing.
Either improving your english, or failing that, getting a native speaker to proofread would go a long way.
Oh, and a more descriptive gallery title is also very important, with the authors name and that it's a kisekae.
Base +7, Brobam +6
Posted on 14 November 2018, 22:59 UTC by: souske411
Score +7
It is hot but try having someone edit it before hand and try to not have the text underlined in red, maybe run spell check and if you are using a unique word just click ignore
Base +7
Posted on 15 November 2018, 09:23 UTC by: Buttermilch24
Score +2
Thanks for all your suggestions. I will try to make this change on my next upload. Also i try improve my english. Thanks guys