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The CN scan that I used had its page 15 missing, so I used the inferior JP scan for that page.
Sorry for the inconvenience.

Thanks for this, good job.

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9 is my preferred UMP sister

Base +6, green-kun +7, pdadac +6, jaypea +6, ryuikari +6

Continuation fucking WHEN

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:3 UMP9 :3 family desire takes over once again.

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The UMP Family is a great group of girls in Girls' Frontline!
I find it hard to pick a favorite.
I'm always one to welcome more quality translated Girls' Frontline doujins.
Especially when they're as cute and wonderful as this one!
Thanks SO much, spicaworks!

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The translation is a bit shaky in a few places grammatically, but that aside I dig it. Good work.

Base +6, DJ_Puchuu +12

UMP45 sequel when?

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:3family!:333getting bigger:3:33

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oh no oh fuck family is spreading

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Very nice, but the grammar isn't perfect. On pg. 3, show should be shown, take should be takes, in context order should probably be orders, pg 4 reward should be rewards. While technically correct the phrase ""you don't have to be worried that much" is a bit awkward and very wordy as opposed to something like "you don't have to worry so much", pg. 7 needs a "the" before cafe, pg. 23 should have commemorated and "I'd" instead of commemorate and "I'll". Everything else is excellent, thank you for your work.

Base +6, DJ_Puchuu +12, Ezzezze +6

Kalina jumping straight to a 2for1 Oath Ring special amused me greatly.

:3

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Tagging poor grammar.

Page 1: '9?! What is it!? (An?) Urgent report' bubble 3 'That's exactly why I came here, to replenish my supply of commander' odd style bubble 9

Page 2: 'Who is the bad girl who didn't show up at the appointed time?' Again odd style, it doesn't seem like a natural sentence. 'I wonder?' In this case should end with a period. It isn't a question. 'What are you doing here I wonder, 9?' Again odd style with two questions in the same sentence. 'Listen here, I'm the one who take responsibility, make sure to obey my order properly.' Just ain't right. If we're really going in deep. 'Now now' should be Now, now. 'I want my share too. Like extra day off.' A word's missing here.

Page 3: 'Make sure to prepare plenty of reward(s) for me.' Dropped a plural there.

Page 7: 'I've prepared cake, just head to (the) cafe later' (dropped an article there)

Page 10: '"You're" keep going at my breast. (You keep going)

Page 12: 'Yours' (Unless this commander has multiple penises, it's your. It's not I want yours penis, correctly it is, I want your penis.'

Page 13: 'Okay, I'm putting in' (What? "It," would be fine here.)

Page 14: 'My hip won't stop.' (Unless, this man's doing some odd twisting motion, that'll probably result in a bad back pain later. It's Hips.)

Page 23: 'You wring me out.' (Wrong tense. Past tense would be wrung.) ' 'I will eat all the cakes that (were) supposed to be yours. (Dropped a word.) 'You got nothing. Got it?' (Replace got in the question with get. Present tense.)

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