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Gotta admit I tough Hinata would be harder to convince. Feels so out of caracther is like bad porn with a look-a-like

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Normally I'd be ecstatic to read something that will involve a threesome with Hinata, Naruto and Ino, but going by the other nonsensical crap this guy has put out recently my expectations couldn't be lower.

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@Iron Vegetarian Idk, seems about right to me.

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Always knew Ino was a closet slut

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Naruto first sentence needs an question mark at the end, and the last sentence of page 3 could use an exclamation point.

And where are the periods?

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great, finally one of naruto and ino.
I like it.

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Hey Felsala, are you basing this comic from this idea? It's good regardless.

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@Iron Vegetarian

Her husband literally coined Harem and Reverse Harem jutsu, and is often in doujins associated with One-Man-Gangbang jutsu. The Hyuuga clan as a whole (or mostly, anyway) has the innate ability to peep through walls at anything lewd going on within range of them.

It's always the quiet ones, all I'm sayin'.

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>Ino
>CLOSET slut

She never made any secret of it. These ninjas get to -choose- how they dress.

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