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Somehow the boyfriend moaning "uha my frenulum" stood out the most for me.

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Thanks for sharing this English version!

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Frenulum is obviously a frequently used word that needs to be in every highschoolers vocabulary.

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It's come to my attention that there have been some identified issues
with this translation. These can be fixed by me.

- I take it 'frenulum' (only added as that is what the guy actually said) is simply
weird. Would changing it to 'tip' be acceptable?

- The 2nd page is missing (not part of the narrative technically) but I
will include it.

Are there any other issues? I'm still learning and this can be a useful
opportunity for helping create better translations.

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She looks a lot like the girl in Kemigawa Mondo's Daraku Reijou, same schoolgirl clothing, blonde, big boobs, and let's not forget the NTR part. :P It's barely NTR though, you only get a very short glimpse of the boyfriend.

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Finally, some good fucking food. Light on the NTR so it's palatable.

"Dom't rape it back, rape it forwards" -Glenn Quagmire

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its cheating not ntr, translation isn't good but it gets the point across.
Thanks

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Too bad she was a slut and used goods. Stories where the girl isn't a virgin isn't any fun. Why would I care about a story where a girl gets raped if she wasn't a virgin to begin with? If a girl isn't a virgin, storywise she doesn't lose anything in a story when she gets raped... so the whole point of the actual rape in the story is lost. As is, this story wasn't even a netorare story... the whole story was just that her uncle had a bigger dick than her boyfriend and that she was a whore for his big dick.

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So, you are charging $1.20 a page for this quality, huh? Good luck with that.

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People who put major importance on virginity are just weird... Sure, there's a certain sense of satisfaction at the thought of being a girl's first, and rape might be slightly more traumatic for a virgin, but to say that she "doesn't lose anything" if she's fucking RAPED just because she isn't a virgin is just ridiculous. Whether she's a virgin or not doesn't change the emotional impact all that much.

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