Translated and Edited by Stopittarpit
Commissioned by CRC3737

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Raw can be found here: /g/1284144/a2df90735a/

Thanks so much for translating this!

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Is a period at the end of declarative sentences too much to ask for?

Edit:
Thanks for fixing it.

Last edited on 28 December 2019, 03:43 UTC.

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Finely this one gets some attention

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This turned from a tragedy to a comedy. Didn't even fap as just laughed at the end with the development and character responses to the situation.

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Is this artist still active? His work is incredible.

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Still would rather see to continue the EROSION he made

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And another day in Cucksville comes to an end.

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I feel like I'm taking crazy pills! - MC of Sennou Yuugi - Brainwash Game

hope this one gets translated next /g/1109651/dfd5844ecc/

edit: what was shinnt's problem?

Last edited on 29 December 2019, 01:30 UTC.

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What's the point of complaining about hypnosis in a story centered around hypnosis? That's the entire point of the story, that's the main fetish at play here, more than the ntr. The point of it is to use hypnosis to distort the whole situation, fuck with peoples sense of "normal", change how reality would normally play out.

How is that somehow inferior to some dude with magic aphrodisiacs or a dick 3x the size of the mc fucking a girl for ~3 pages and she's suddenly a cock-hungry slut that only cares about dick?

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@GypsyBastard, I agree I wish he finished EROSION. I used to do it in the past but I was only one person. Go to all his recent posts in his blog http://otonanodowa.blog79.fc2.com/ and comment in Japanese for him to finish EROSION; if you can't read/write Japanese just use google translate to make the comment then copy and paste. Maybe if more people comment, he might finish EROSION

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Thank you very much

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Some translation errors here and there. The youngest sister speaks in third person so you should keep that in English. You can't seem to tell who is talking when she speaks.

For example:

Pg 34:
できれば千夏女の子がいいなぁ
"Can you do that? I mean you are a girl~"
> "If possible, Kazuna wants to have a baby girl~"

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Well , well, well, would you look at that . Even though my comment had nothing objectionable some power abusing cunt admin deleted it just because it was getting upvoted and he disagrees with it. I made this objectionable comment specifically for you so you can delete it with comfort. You are welcome cunt.

Last edited on 04 January 2020, 07:13 UTC.

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At some point, I favorited it, but then I removed it.
I had some hopes, but full netorare killed it for me.
Maybe because netorare is not my thing (though I can tolerate it depending on how it is made), or because I played too many games where that would clearly be a bad end I would have avoided with a walkthrough.

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I need something more like this.
This was complete strike to what I loved to read.

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