Edited by Stopittarpit
Translated by Stopittarpit, CrowKarasu and =WhiteSymphony=

Commissioned by anon and Stopittarpit

Contact address: [email protected]

I sincerely apologise to everyone who saw the initial
English translation of this piece and were disappointed
with the way it turned out.

After commissioning the very helpful CrowKarasu and
whiteSymphony to take a look at certain pages I can
clearly see where I went wrong. It has been made
clear that these need to be taken more seriously.

I don't believe this is a rewrite, I believe we have
created a proper translation for you all to enjoy.

Thank you for reading and please enjoy.

Fueta Kishi's milf designs are incredibly sexy and top-tier,
even despite this artist focusing on the blackmail/ntr genre instead of the vanilla genre I remember from this artist
Thanks for sharingh

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Even though I saw the NTR tag, I was instantly hooked by the cover design and the beautiful MILF~

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...I feel like we’re missing a bit of context here lol

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So this has a prequel?

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I am 90% positive this has a prequel, I don't know if it was TL'ed though.

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Is this a sequel?

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an NTR doujin with positive comments from people? a step towards world peace, i guess :D

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he looked like the dude that got cucked in Touchuukasou 6 lol
feel like it some kind of wierd spin off lmao

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Many thanks for the translation.

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Either there's a prequel where we're lacking context, or everything is completely jumbled translation-wise for the backstory.

Edit: From what I can gather from Page 4 and Page 9, he fucked the sister-in-law and got her pregnant (who was working to help her younger sister despite having an older brother with a store). This is who the "daughter" he mentions should actually be since there's no way Kaori has a daughter at a fuckable age especially when Shinji is infertile.

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It's a rewrite, I've read the raw, he went weird with this one.

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MILF Makoto?

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@suratkabar Anything he makes at this point would be a relief from that bald headed shit kid and the retard sisters.

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Theres no prequel guys, its most likely due to the translation not being properly done that the backstory part seems off

Last edited on 05 February 2020, 12:23 UTC.

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This is breath of fresh air, his bald headed asshole 'friemd' and the dumb slut sisters are getting stale, he should end it but it is popular to readers.

Also, the translator kinda went weird with this one.

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I do indeed admit the translation on this was sloppy,
especially on page 4. Could somebody please
point me in the right direction for a group of other translators
that could help? Like a particular discussion board or a discord
server? I do still want to improve.

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I don't know how to feel about this.

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@stopittarpit thanks for translation either way and it's nice to see you want to improve even more. looking forward to more of your work

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Generic af. Fuetakishi's works are getting worse and worse.

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"I'm doing this for you Shinji" Yes, I'm sure he would love the idea of financing some other guy's genetic legacy for at least the next 18 years.

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Is no one going to point out how the MC has the fucking byakugan

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I miss his stories about highschool elfs. Not these NTR things.

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So there is actually a person who paid money for this shit quality translation. I'd get it if this was for free but this is a rip-off. Instead of writing what you won't accept to translate try being more honest and say you are shamelessly charging $1.20 per page even though your Japanese is meh at best.

Last edited on 08 February 2020, 11:17 UTC.

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"Well compared to your husband, won't you say my cock is more useful ???"
> "no answer / oh yeah i didn't think about cock size before"
"You are taking pleasure from sex !"
> Oh no ! No ! Don't say that ! Noooo !

Women in hentai are weird...

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So the blonde on page 4 is the same person in all panels right? because the panels suggest that the first one shown was a part timer, and the second one is the little sister?

Sorry, maybe I'm confused here, this still doesn't make any sense to me

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the blond part timer is different , look at the hair design.

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You can read the much better translation here.

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