Those are some mighty large balls. Also, it took me a moment to realize this was left to right for some reason, despite being western. I guess the japanese SFX threw me off a bit. …I wish if they were going for the manga look that they'd at least make a full commitment instead of doing things in half-steps. Still, that's a minor nitpick and I appreciate the effort that was clearly put into this.
There's some pretty neat coloring work here, too.
Feels like there needs to be another page between 8 and 9 though. (Edit: yep, there was a page missing, the update fixed that. Thanks)