This work is a rewrite of this one : /g/1596130/74ce3cd7e7/
The font used is Anime Ace.

I hate it when futa / yuri work is spoiled by mentions or appearances of male, while I want to see only girls. So I did my best to transform this doujin so that it was flawless.

Fuck rewrites, especially ones made for petty reasons like discovering a recently made translation someone put actual work into and instead focusing on how you're pissed off with the story the author was tryiing to tell and you need to have it "fixed "cause you have undiagnosed OCD. It's not even a rewrite, it's censoring someone else's translation.

Last edited on 28 March 2020, 13:34 UTC.

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only Incest Trash nothing more

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@sunshineandlolipops
At no time you are obliged to share my opinion. That said, I am the one who put the English translation online, who did the editing job, etc. and I first put the simple version, faithful to the author. This rewrite is a bonus, but I hope it will influence some: what could be more normal, when you make a yuri, make a 100% yuri, there are so many yuri fan sacrificed!

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Hi I don't want drama but I was not asked nor did I give permission for a rewrite. First version wasn't "faithful to the author", as admitted in original upload comment it was "adapted slightly" from my script (also without permission). Wasn't going to say anything because I don't want anything to do with this now but the most recent comment made me pretty frustrated. Really unhappy about this whole situation, will be much less likely to share my translations in the future.

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@doubleecchi
Sorry, I respond to you on Twitter...

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