back at it again with Hirno-sensei work. the art have really improve, the line are more sharp.
seem like these gonna be like a series of 'Silvy's adventure'' which is good news that it will be more to come.

put alot of work on this one. specialialy the clean up on page.17
and seem like i improve abit since other first work i had translated.
still, im a amature translator doing this to pass time.
i even redraw it with grey and a black outline letter to match the original/the heart.

hope you guys enjoy it :)

fap away, my fellow men of culture

After reading through it, I would recommend a proofreader/QC; lots of small grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. :)

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You need an editor. I see grammar issues like subject-verb agreement (e.g. "It seems" rather than "it seem") proper verb tenses ("I'll get kicked out" instead of "I'll get kick out") etc.

Obvious spelling mistakes:
"dose" should be "does"
"mayby" should be "maybe"
"gose" should be "goes"

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>defeated and turned into seedbed by a mutant slime
>want to experience it again
now what we see are female elves and their natural mindset

RAW:/g/1580659/5a63464520/

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Press F to pay respects.

Slime died doing what he loved doing the most..

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