Thank you! For a Carey Carter story, it isn't rapey enough, and there's no necro, but there's plenty of snuff and dismemberment (including de-breastification), if that's your thing. In the alternate ending, I loved the girls in the theater getting excited that the footage of Carey dying made it into the movie. I wish they had gone a bit further though, and been more derogatory and mocking towards her, laughing that the stupid bitch got what she deserved, and maybe even touching themselves and saying something like "Yeah! Die, you worthless cunt!" as she passes away. Maybe one girl even screams it out and is embarrassed that everybody in the theater heard her, but everybody just laughs and claps. Afterwards, the girls might excitedly talk about how they wish they could've been the ones to snuff her. Maybe make it even more degrading by having one of them wear a Carey Carter Fan Club hat or button she tosses in the garbage on the way out. Or maybe it's a tee shirt she pulls off, leaving her in a bra, and she casually tosses it into an alley she walks past, where a bum relieves himself on Carey's picture on the front of the shirt. Or the bum pulls it out of the trash and masturbates with it. Maybe the girls talk about how one of them is the president of the fan club, and how she's going to upload all the footage from the movie and change it to the Carey Carter Snuff Club. But I digress. It's a solid enough Carey Carter story, but not one of my favorites because it doesn't push the sex and degradation far enough. The watermarks are pretty intrusive, but you can only work with what you've got, and at least they're only on every fifth page.