https://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/TheKite

oh damn the drama is getting good! also who would guess Pokemon could speak so fancy & elegant? damn

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expected porn.... got A tier Drama... nicu~

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I no longer read this for porn. I read it cause it's fucking adorable

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I'm just waiting for the Hex Maniac to show up again.

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Hm, i initially passed this by, but judging by the comments and current rating maybe I shouldn't have.

Edit: Yep, worth reading. Glad I waited so long though, so there's more of it!

Last edited on 07 April 2020, 14:36 UTC.

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Searched for female:posssession, found this tagged under the Spanish translation (as this doesn't have the tag). Looked interesting in the first couple pages and found this. Ready to fap and such gave it a read. Put vibrator away and sat up to enjoy reading the story more. 10/10

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I don't remember any other artists working on this with me...

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Came for the porn. Stayed for the plot

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That was just the Prologue? Ohhhh, this is gonna be good.

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Fucking PROLOGUE end? All of this was a PROLOGUE? You better not be blueballing me on this, I swear to god.

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Wait what, that was the prologue? holy heck!

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We in for a long one folks, strap in!

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Really nice to see Pokemon smut with this much worldbuilding about the adult elements. Hope this isn't the kind of thing the artist burns out on because I'm dying to see more.

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There are an awful lot of 'people' speaking pokemon, aren't there? And yet the incredibly intelligent Mawile can't?

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There is only one of them:
Lena, Pixie, Eerie, Homura, Reika all speaks Pokémon language exclusively.
Aya can understand Pokémon speech, which allows her to universally communicate with Pokémon.
Lou can "understand" Eerie due to their long standing bond, and has said that she more or less is deducing what is being said.
Lou can't understand Pixie's skree-ing, but Pixie is able to write human language, which she uses to communicate with Lou (as long as another method they worked out as the writing method limits communication).

Literally only Elsa speaks human language. :p

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@ssj782 Read their pokedex entries xD

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Wow, that is a LOT of dead children. Seems like the perfect place for a porn shoot!

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Its official. Even the dead pokemon are perverts, lol.

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WOW.

The mythos of the trainer classes that was added in the last few page is, AMAZING!

Like the original Gundam, Pokemon opens up a great world when worked around in the minds of the fans.
The girls are cute, that helps.

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“I once tried to become a Beauty, but the Trainer Registration Service laughed me out of the building.”

:feelsbadman: SHE IS VERY GORGEOUS TO ME!

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Oof, seeing depressed and almost suicidal Lou hits close to home

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"what will happen to my pokemon if i kill myself"
o no

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@Rexic There are no double pages. Two of the three "doubles" are alternate art pages, and the third is the same scene from Gardevoir's perspective.

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Why does a story about a gardevoir becoming a pornstar so fucking good?

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Oh, so she's thinking of having a bit of Hex Maniac fun in her production? I'm 100% behind that as they are thicc as all hell.

Also, loving how a comic that's meant to be about porn has some really good world building and story telling in it..

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I'm liking this mc better without her head shoved so far up her own ass she can't see anyone else.
Side note: In the world of pokemon, where animals you find in the woods can literally cause the weather and landscape to change at whim, why the heck is she surprised about snow out of season? Some pokemon change the weather by existing...

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I want to see more Yuri Porn Action. <3

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Show 👏Me👏Them👏Hex👏Maniac👏TIDDIES👏

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Just gonna be another one of them "came for the porn, stayed for the plot" peops in this loooong comment thread XD

Not to mention the "OH SNAP" (i actually yelled that out loud) when Lopunny mega-evolved on the spot

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I CAME HERE FOR PORN, WHY I'M STAYING FOR DRAMA? 10/10 would be sucked in again !

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I feel like adding an extra pokemon after you've registered with only 3 for a battle is cheating.

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All I can say is the mother must certainly love the taste of crow she has to eat now. Ultimately it’s lose lose for her because she was a total bitch in the past

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@swifty995: Well it has to do with the way I wanted to unravel the story; rather than a "linear" story", I thought it'd be fun to try and tell the story in reverse, starting with situations that already happened and giving info as to why it happened and the context it happened in progressively in a breadcrumb way

So that may indeed leave with confusing situations and missing contexts until you get the info xD

The fact that I didn't want to do an Alfie-long comic (bless you Incase, but I have no idea how you ever had the patience for 900 pages) and set a definite set of pages for the entire story may have forced me to adapt a pace that may not allow me to properly set the context; I kinda had to "rewrite" part of this chapter to extend it because it would have been too fast and too confusing NOT to have deeper context ><

Anyway, please do tell me if you have suggestions it; readers' impressions are important to how I can improve the comic going forward. :3

Please be polite and constructive about it tho lol

@everyone else I don't always reply to: Sorry if I don't always reply, but I do appreciate your comments, support, and feedback!

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This is quite possibly one of the very few moments where you came for the porn, but stayed for the plot.

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I just wonder if the rest of the stadium can hear what they are saying. I mean, they are quite apart from each other, so either they are yelling or the mics are on.

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ohhhhhh snapppp these plot twists get me more eager than all my other drama series and anime combined. The need to know what happens next is soooooo stroooong.

Addendum: I actually needed to see Calida in regular form to guess that was a mega blaziken lmao.

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For a second, I totally forgot this started as anthro Pokemon porn.

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@Lexander: I'm not really going to dignify this with an answer to the "critique", because there's nothing there except a random who thinks that because they don't like the story it's automatically badly written, and that presumes that my uploading rhythm is something they are allowed to complain about when they're reading this for free, on a site I don't update my comics on and generally don't owe you anything. You haven't provided a single morsel of argumentation to your ad personam spiel despite me citing in this very comment thread that I was open to any criticism or suggestion so long as they were constructive or at least polite. In short, you're not forced to read this, fuck you, you're a minority with that mindset and your opinion is not one I plan on caring about. You can fuck off, go read something else, and show us how great YOU are at scripts. I'm sure you'll find a willing artist with that attitude. Or perhaps you are a liberal arts major. With that way of "critiquing", it would'n't surprise me.

@WatsonJohn: It's my fault with the early comic AND the new Shorts. When I did part 49, I wanted to imply that they had a relationship that was physical indeed, but that it wasn't a serious one, and Lou thought that Aya pretended to be serious so they could have another physical relationship again. I've got a proofreader that also script-doctors it since the beginning of chapter 1, because while Lexander likes the smell of their own farts, they're somewhat correct in the fact that being both an artist and writing the script is hard, as you're generally better at either one of these skills and rarely skilled at both. I'm trying to improve in both, but there may be incoherence I miss here and there as I try to build on what I wrote prior to the post prologue reread and expansion of some aspects of the story. :3

Which is why proper reader feedback is great and useful!

@Meta-Snake: We're reaching the crescendo in a few pages, both in the past, the present and the "future" and regarless of the outcome, I hope it'll at least be a satisfying one, whether I end up going with the outcome you didn't prefer or not. :3

Edit: BTW for everyone else and for the ones who are wondering where the porn is and when it comes back: Soon(ish)! You have a few more pages of drama to tolerate (or timeskip :P) but we're reaching the end of this chapter, which is heavily slanted on backstory.

Last edited on 15 January 2020, 21:51 UTC.

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@ The-Kite Sigh, I think you really missed the whole point of the schedule thing. The problem isn't the periodicity of your release schedule, it's the writing. You're not in comics, you're in webcomics. You're not releasing one manga chapter, or issue, or album at a time. You're releasing one page at a time. And you're not actually writing this with that idea in mind.

When you write a comic you divide the script into pages - at least I hope you do - then the pages into panels. What you have to do in webcomic that you don't have to do in more traditional avenues is ask yourself how each individual page reads without all the pages that follow in your script. Each page has to be entertaining on it's own, it has to further the story thus far, but it must not depend on pages yet to come.

Don't get me wrong, this is not just a you problem, and not just a webcomic problem. I have a hardcover Metabarons omnibus behind me and reading that all at once sucks because it was written to be released as a series of albums over several years. Each album starts with a recap of the previous one and the story thus far. Great if you read it when it came out originally, really annoying if you're trying to read the entire story at once and have to read periodic recaps of stuff you just finished reading.

You don't seem to have written this as a webcomic but as a traditional comic that you are releasing one page at a time - which makes it a badly written webcomic.

I hope this was clearer.

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Ok...that part with team Rocket and everything was a bit too convoluted...

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Called it. Froslass is the dead lover.

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I actually would love to know how weird it got.

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file name: page 106(numbered 108 here)

we all hear ya, Flare Blitz. we do.

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I find the concept of unique variation like the various Gardevoir into Gardevoice or Gheishtevoir to be a really cool idea.

Last edited on 23 March 2020, 12:48 UTC.

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If everyone hassling the author could just shut the fuck up forever, that would be great. None of us are *paying* them for this, it's something they are doing because they *want* to.

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@Nightmare Shifter - There's a little note on the latest page that says the author is going into hiatus whilst they prepare everything for the next chapter.

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Wish they got rid of, or moved all the filler images and whatnot. Actually finding the new page is irritating the jumbled up way this is set up.

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I don't even know what is going on

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The Kite says trans rights. :D

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@Rikimaruve
Here, take this: https://pbs.twimg.com/media/ETU7O7KXQAAEZKm?format=jpg&name=4096x4096

In Short: Shit's going crazy

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Pg.122 is pixie crying?

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@orezz Cringe.

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