Request of @JaisenRei

Tagged with poor grammar, should list grammatical errors, but I will be pretty much listing images with text instead:
20: should be "to" instead of "until"
24: it's hard to tell, the "m...maybe" seems out of place, but after having read the rest, it feels like the weirdness could come from bad grammar
59: "three hio", what is a hio? Something went wrong here. "a human dildo" should be "human dildos" after "you three", or "you three" should be removed if "Hio" is a character name.
Assuming that later interpretation, "for give to this" should be "to give those" or maybe "to give these"
61: "abilityes" should be "abilities", "you are only a simple" is probably a bad translation and supposed to be "you're just" or "you're merely". A "that" after the ',' would be needed, "I I told you" should be "I allow you to" or something.
63: Need to know the text before translation because it's extremely weird. Maybe the character spoken too moved and the reaction is supposed to be "Did I tell you to move or talk? You can't move or talk unless I tell you to", but I'm not sure without the original text
69: Image 65 being cleaned without text being readded, can't be sure of the context, but it's likely to be wrong. Also 70 is also cleaned without readding text, another clue to how to fix things lost.

Base +28, Na2CO3 +6, Asmither -4

Ok, thanks for the details

Base +8