p.1 why he already had a girlfriend > missing words here. "why did he...", maybe? p.1 I'm... not the worst > you mean the opposite? in JP, stuff is often phrased in the negative, but it means the opposite. ex: "I'm just the worst, aren't I?" p.1 has a nice booty > in JP it's body and not booty, but sure p.2 they ripe with sweet flavor too > they are. also, this makes no sense. p.2 she already soggy wet > she's already soaked p.2 a sexy lingerie > cut "a" p.2 what kind of erotic plans she has with the student she slept with? > what kind of naughty plans did she have p.3 to have such a teacher like this > redundant