Base +6, bunnygunny -25, 12davi7 -7, niobethatgirl -6, fuzz12 -9, Shepardus -19, vincentarclight -6

My only two complaints to this are first it has no end and second the time skips were completely unnecessary, unless you are going to show how the time in captivity is effecting the person or show pregnancy there is no need to skip so much time.

Base +7