This writing is atrocious. It's not like most hentai isn't ridiculously written, but there's something particularly off about this one. Just how many twins there are in this town alone would make some institution study whatever the hell is happening in the area. Oh but I definitely dig Becca and Rebecca. They seem to have their priorities straight.
Yeah, I really liked Chapter 1, but in my opinion it went downhill from there. Just too many characters doing the exact same thing without any of them being actually developed. I feel like I'm watching variations of the same scene over and over.
I don't really think it's the writing itself (I've read way worse things that were still fun), but the lack of focus and clear storyline. It's just so all over the place it stops being enjoyable.
Base +5, ExecutorBill +10
Posted on 23 September 2022, 03:41 by: Chiefdefender
Score +6
Wtf, how many pairs of twins are there in this school? You could cut out half of them and lose nothing.
Base +6
Posted on 24 September 2022, 03:37 by: altmedz11235
Score +6
Something in the water in this town... So many twins. Not that I am complaining. The mother and aunt are the hottest.