The Obedient Cosplay Doll ~by~ Groggy-chou (Guro Tsuki)
陽キャくんは言いなりコスプレ人形 ~by~ グロッキー帳 (グロツキ)
YouCha-kun wa Iinari Cosplay Ningyou

orginally posted:
https://forum.ashemaletube.com/forum-topic/manga-translated-34691/page-1/#postNum11

Anyone can't stop this guy?

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03: a illustrator => an illustrator
05: days go by as i held
- inconsistent tense => days went by as i held
07: i was stunned [...] thoughts arise
- inconsistent tense => i was stunned [..] thoughts arose
07: at that moment devilish thoughts
- verb needed, maybe a subject also
08: came
- explicit subject => you came
09: phtotos => photos
11: Did you just take that out!
- not interrogative
15: emough => enough
15: know what i mean?
- explicit subject => (Do) you know what i mean?
17: get use to => get use to it
22: lower resolution
36: weat => wear

Also:
- upper case inconsistencies
- lack of punctuation
- many dialogues can be more complete (missing articles, pronouns, verbs)

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Last edited on 15 November 2023, 18:22.

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what is the thing of the last img?

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@Sarptos The uploader's baby dick.

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please typeset better and stop showing everyone your dick in the signature, really not classy

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Can someone translate this properly LOL

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Garbage tier translations, dickpics that nobody wants, and creepy private forum shilling. Great.

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Goddamit , i expected that this would be a good translation, but this seems bad on purpose ??

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Good story. Nice that the “stunt dick”/protagonist wasn’t a fat, stinky old man.

Translation is reasonable. Certainly better than some.

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His dick is so tiny. He should be ashamed showing that mini pelvic thumb around

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