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What a conundrum for Yuichi. If you break things off with Hinako, Genki will swoop in. If things stay as they are, Genki will slowly capture her heart. I wonder if there's anything Genki can do that'll be a deal breaker for Hinako. Maybe his greed, maybe his antagonizing of Yuichi.

I just hope Hinako comes to her senses. Her character took a quick 180 these past few chapters. Kinda fucks up the story ngl. Yuichi should be the indecisive one, not her.

Also thanks for your continued work on this series!

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@Narc69

I think that her teasing (I might get stolen) becomes reality is what makes it extra hot tbh.

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Damn.. it use to be thrilling, because Hinako was smart decisive, and confident. Now, it's just basic NTR. I hope the ending is not shit, but I can only see a few ways out of this corner, and I doubt the author will take any of those routes.

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@anasurimbor
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Eh, its more her being so submissive that doesn't do it for me. If she matched Genki's energy more, than sure I could see it being hot to me as well.

I'm hoping Yuichi has some physical reaction to seeing those vids. Seems that whenever she sees Yuichi with a hard-on she amplifies the teasing and cuckoldry play more.

The sex is fine, but turmoil and chaos that Hinako provided was what hooked me. Glad to see people are still enjoying it tho!

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kinda sucks if it just ends with basic NTR when people got hooked on with the "did she or did she not" play, and its not helping that the author gave Yuichi a small dick too.

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A few clarifications for parts of the dialogue between Goda and Hinako that weren't totally clear:

On page 293, Hinako says "Absolutely not" in response to Goda telling her to choose him. For those wondering why Yuichi was reacting to her reply as if it was a sign that she's falling for Goda, even though she said "Absolutely not", which in English is usually reserved solely for a complete rejection, I will quote someone on fanbox who clarified it for another user:

"Rather than thinking of it as a word, it's easier to understand if you think about how it's used in other manga and anime. If she says "Absolutely not!" with an angry face or in a strong tone with an exclamation mark, she is usually genuinely refusing. If she says "Absolutely not" with an embarrassed face or by turning her face away and not showing any expression, she is often a simple girl who can't refuse if you make a strong demand. Of course, there are exceptions."

Also on pages 286-288, Goda says "Your body has completely fallen, huh. Even though you understand and are prepared for it, you still can't bring yourself to say 'Let's break up', huh? No... it's more like you can't say it rather than you won't say it, right?". This dialogue confused me, because due to an over-usage of pronouns and vague terms, it's unclear what he meant. What is it she understands and is prepared for? Break up with who, Yuichi or Goda? It's also weird that he corrects himself to "you can't say it" instead of "you won't say it", when there was no correction needed because he did say "you can't" the first time around. This might be a case of something being lost/confused in translation, but ultimately it was worked out in the patreon comments to mean "Even though you understand that your body has completely fallen for my cock, and you're prepared to break up with Yuichi if he finds out about us (regardless of whether he forgives you for it or not), you still won't break up with Yuichi as long as he doesn't find out about us, huh? Or rather, you feel like you can't or mustn't break up with him, instead of you won't break up with him." Basically, if she broke up with Yuichi, she'd have to give a reason as to why and the truth would come out and that would hurt him. As long as Yuichi never finds out, he'd never be hurt, so as long as she can keep up the facade she can't break up with him.

I have other thoughts, but I don't want to post another giant wall of text like last time, so I'll split it up into smaller comments this time around.

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waiting for mind break tag added on ch 4

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It's been foreshadowed in the previous bad ends that Hinako's whole cool teasing girl persona she showed to Yuichi is fake. And that in reality she is actually very submissive. I remember people getting mad at me for noticing this, people would just say it was just cause those where non-canon bad ends.

In my view, those bad ends where just teasing what would actually happen when she finally got fucked for real. Now we are here, with her acting just as submissive as the previous bad ends showed.

Fucked up thing is that it may be that it was Yuichi who never knew the real Hinako, and that the real Hinako is the crying punching bag that we see here. She was living an idealized version of herself with Yuichi, a dream that is now crumbling apart.

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@EHCASUAL

Indeed. I touched on that in the comments on kusso's patreon:

The story is told from Yuichi's POV. Outside of a few side-stories, we see everything through his eyes. Because Yuichi has low self-esteem and feels that Hinako is way out of his league, Yuichi (and by extension, the reader) see Hinako as this sort of Madonna - a near-perfect woman who's clever, scheming, and manipulative, and always knows exactly what she's doing. Yuichi views her as some sort of NTS mastermind, and because we see everything from his perspective, that's how she's largely portrayed in the series.

But, it's become quite clear at this point that she was none of those things. Perhaps she thought she was at some point, but it's obvious to see now that she's actually a bit of a pushover herself, and isn't nearly as good at planning things as Yuichi believed her to be. Any time a strong male makes a demand of her in the series, Hinako caves almost instantly. Takeshi tells her to touch his dick, and she does. Hebikawa tells her to let him fuck her tits raw, and she lets him. Goda asks her to give him a rimjob, and she obliges. A random student starts humping her offscreen in the BBS chapter, and she lets him have intercrural sex with her. The only times she's put up any sort of resistance is when Goda asked her to be his fuckbuddy and when Goda asked her for raw sex, and even then she caved eventually. Hinako is not some mastermind playing NTS 4D Chess. She's a dumb high school girl who thought she knew what she was doing, but ultimately got in over her head. The cracks in the facade were there all along, but after the events of sex edition pt. 2, now even Yuichi is starting to see her for who she really is.

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For the lazy (yes they are in order):

[She Is Being Targeted ]
Prologue - /g/2485018/ecd9229c3e/ or color version: /g/2494474/cd2365daaa/
Drawing Model Request - /g/2503662/f30746c19c/
With a Playboy - /g/2841386/2190a3c29d/
Takeshi Edition - /g/2489010/861763c123/
Hot Spring Date - /g/2806062/6738fe72d5/
Gynecologist Checkup - /g/2847540/a2b4255860/
Masturbation Cuckold - /g/2638298/2466e88a55/
To a Friend with a Strong Sexual Desire - /g/2784385/a00740de22/
3 Day Reward Life - /g/2734184/b902fbd048/
My Friend and My Girlfriend's Naughty Secrets - /g/2777841/fb69ace3e4/
Secret Bulletin Board - /g/2825682/69a4ea2b2c/
Yukino's Mischief - /g/2851331/def5d241b5/
My Friend Took My Girlfriend's... - /g/2881313/5c5e5622dc/
Sex Edition - Chapter 1 - /g/2910575/9986611129/
Sex Edition - Chapter 2 - /g/2952815/1c7ba1b625/
Sex Edition - Chapter 3 - /g/2981803/8d94f076e2/ >>>>>>(you are here)<<<<<<
Sex Edition - Chapter 4 - /g/3022595/7f491d8db1/

[Hinako's Secret?]
Gynecologist Checkup - /g/2848919/48f8c0316c/
3 Day Reward Life - /g/2734187/812889638d/
My Friend and My Girlfriend's Naughty Secrets - /g/2783610/44a2c8562e/

[Hinako's Mischief]
School Pool - /g/2485199/c9a9d81923/
School Hallway - /g/2620342/b1d6c1d52b/
~Men's Dirty Talk~ - /g/2931810/89243b76c7/
School Infirmary - /g/2489009/0ef14a9c1c/ (mislabeled?)
On The Train - /g/2825680/2a512d1b0f/
To a Sarcastic Boy - /g/2868994/619cf00822/
Hinako's Mischief ~To a Sarcastic Boy~ After - /g/2924902/bf44e41772/

[Hinako's Daily Life]
Sports Gym - /g/2485070/c84481f215/
Physical Examination - /g/2703407/1258126973/

[Report Of Voyeurism On Back Bulletin Board]
Report Of Voyeurism On Back Bulletin Board - /g/2624559/5bffbd5e24/
Report Of Voyeurism On Back Bulletin Board 2 - /g/2629561/96df492e87/

[Extras]
She Is Being Targeted ~EXTRAS Compilation~ - /g/2933590/687bfdb24e/
Extra Edition ~Illustration Collection~ - /g/2868995/2ef8f270d7/

[What If]
Hinako's Secret Account? - /g/2616384/99923ff654/

[BADEND]
She Is Being Targeted ~BADEND Compilation~ - /g/2933591/1884551ff8/

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@baconpie Okay, if you want a young woman getting in over their head, or anything with that sorta of "realism" (except where the MC doesn't have a micro penis, and the Netori guy isn't a magical big dicked virgin that can mind-break women despite having 0 experience) then there's plenty of other works that fulfil that itch, but better. But that Isn't what most people like about this series, nor is it what people liked about Hinako. Most people read this because they WANTED the 4D chess playing, sadistic, teasing woman, who teasingly but confidently loves her partner. Instead we get stock NTR where as soon as she finds a big dick, her entire persona/personality crumbles, and she becomes a slave to pleasure, it's such a tired concept man...

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@So....*fap*

First off, great username.

Second, I totally agree. I'm not explaining all this because I'm in support of it. I feel this series has been on a downhill slide since the Secret BBS chapter, when the NTS -> NTR transition really started intensifying. I want my boy Yuichi to be happy, so these last few chapters have been incredibly unsatisfying. I fully agree with everything you said. Just read my comments from the previous chapter. I talk about it at length. Incredibly long length. Like, way too much length.

@sartan

You're the real MVP. I wish I could upvote you and comment at the same time. This system where commenting excludes you from voting is stupid af.

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this is way better than the ch2. We really need Hinako PoV. Also Yuichi sounds like he's gonna a get a heart attack.

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The Yukino chapter felt like a turning point. They never confirmed it in the story, as far as I'm aware, but Hinako definitely wasn't hanging out with some friend. She was with Goda. She got dressed up in the slutty outfits Goda likes, and spent time committing intimate acts with Goda behind Yuichi's back. She never confessed to Yuichi about it afterwards, either. Couple that with Yukino saying how Hinako had been talking with Goda on the phone every night, and started masturbating while thinking of Goda, and it's clear that at some point between the love hotel date chapter and the Yukino chapter, Goda had made a breakthrough in his relationship with Hinako, to the extent that Hinako began harboring a strong physical and slight emotional attraction to him. It would make sense that she told Goda about Yuichi's NTS fetish around that time, perhaps as a subtle hint to Goda that she's okay with him trying harder to steal her away. That's why Goda's behavior and attitude toward Yuichi changed from the blowjob chapter onwards. And it wasn't just Goda who started acting differently around Yuichi after the Yukino chapter. Hinako began treating him differently, as well. There isn't a single instance of Hinako acting kind, reassuring, or comforting towards Yuichi after that. In the past, the chapters would start with Hinako being a normal, loving girlfriend around Yuichi, and she'd change her behavior only when the prospect of performing NTS was brought up. But Hinako starts off the blowjob chapter pretty much ignoring Yuichi and chatting with Goda while he gropes her ass right in front of Yuichi's face. This behavior began back in the love hotel date chapter, but Hinako would still pay some attention to Yuichi back then, and in that chapter and the related Hinako's secret chapter, you could tell that she was mostly annoyed by Goda, and still cared more for Yuichi, at least emotionally. But from the blowjob chapter onwards, she starts only interacting with Yuichi to tease him. Even kusso_megane (the TL for this series) himself mentioned how terrible Hinako was acting towards Yuichi in the sex arc pt. 1. She seemed happy that Yuichi decided to send her to go fuck Goda, but looked disappointed when he asked her to have sex with him before that. She didn't even say "I love you" back to Yuichi when he desperately called out to her before she left to get fucked by Goda.

I mentioned in the comments for Chapter 2 that Hinako's speech/confession to Goda on Day 2 might have actually been a message from NnT (the author) himself to his readers, particularly the readers who are upset at the direction things are heading in. Having her say that up until the night of Day 1, she'd been doing all of it just to make Yuichi happy felt like a retcon, and contradicted what us as the readers saw in her behavior leading up to this point. To quote myself:

>What if Hinako's guilty confession to Goda on Day 2 was actually meant as a message from NnT to his fans? Here are the things Hinako says to Goda on Day 2, and the possible correlations to NnT's message to the fans:

- "My plans might be ruined.": NnT might not have expected any backlash from the previous chapter, and it might have caused them to tweak/reconsider their plans, or at the very least feel a little bad for letting down some of their fans.
- "Everything for Yuichi.": NnT essentially retcons all of the previous chapters, revealing that Hinako genuinely did it all for Yuichi and wasn't at risk of getting stolen away at all. This might be NnT's way of saying "As an apology for those who would prefer things stay the same between Yuichi and Hinako, I've retconned all previous chapters so that they are now all entirely an act by Hinako to make Yuichi happy. Please enjoy the older chapters from now on, knowing that the earlier NTS formula that I had established was intact all the way until this current arc."
- "You can't have a happy ending anymore" (said by Goda): This could be NnT telling the readers they just finished apologizing to that "While you're welcome to enjoy pure NTS in the previous chapters, please understand that from this point forward things will be changing from the established formula."
- "Please go easy on me": NnT hoping the fans don't get too mad for what they have planned, both for the remainder of Part 2, and whatever they're cooking up for Part 3.<

Regardless of whether that theory is right or not, I personally reject Hinako's statement that she was doing it all for Yuichi up until that point. She was definitely doing it for her own enjoyment, as well as for Yuichi. Taking what she said at face value contradicts the visible evidence of her behavior so much so that it would be a borderline plot hole if it were true.

Somebody in the fanbox comments during one of the sex arc chapters mentioned how Hinako claimed to be doing the NTS stuff to make Yuichi happy, which means that doing NTS stuff for Yuichi was her way of expressing her love for him. But in the three months following the typhoon, she doesn't do any NTS stuff for Yuichi anymore. Obviously, there are several reasons for this, the biggest one being she was spending all her free time away from Yuichi getting dicked down by Goda. But there must have been moments like the train molester chapter, where she was alone with Yuichi in a scenario where she could tease him with another man, and she still didn't do it. This might be taken as a sign that her love for Yuichi has changed, if not faded almost completely. Spending three months with Yuichi, without any sex, without NTS teasing, and without confessing that she's been having an affair pretty much means her relationship with Yuichi has been downgraded to just a close friendship at this point. It might be possible that the guilt she feels in this newest chapter during and after sex might be purely from her knowing that what she's doing is morally wrong, rather than actually feeling bad for cheating on the one she supposedly loves. In my mind, Hinako already wants to break up with Yuichi and become Goda's woman, and she's just staying with Yuichi for now out of obligation, or because she wants to avoid having to confess her infidelity to him, since doing so would basically be admitting out loud that she's a terrible person. Her saying she would break up even if Yuichi forgives her sort of confirms this. She's just looking for a convenient way out at this point. If someone offered her a way to end her relationship with Yuichi that didn't have any negative repercussions for all parties involved, she'd take it in a heartbeat.

@Narc69

It might be possible that Yuichi confronts Hinako and just tells her "I know about you and Goda. I also know you told Goda that me finding out means you'd break up with me. But I just want to see you happy, and being with Goda makes you happy, so it's okay if we break up and you become Goda's woman instead." That would actually be kinda GOATed and Sigma af if he did that. It would be great if he throws in an explanation of how he only asked her to have sex with Goda in the first place because he didn't feel like he could satisfy her as a man, and he just wanted her to be happy, and how the two of them reached this point because of a series of misunderstandings and miscommunications. Just air out all of his thoughts and feelings for her to see. It probably ends with her choosing Goda in the end anyway, but it would feel cathartic for both Yuichi and the readers to have Yuichi and Hinako finally be on the same page about their relationship, even if it ends up being fleeting.

But who am I kidding? Yuichi's going to clam up and suffer internally while things only get worse for him, and Goda ultimately gets Hinako pregnant.

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Yes I was also hoping for something different until we got the Blowjob chapter then the announcement of the Sex edition.
Unfortunately there were signs Hinako could have been doing 4D chess and only bad ends were for NTR.
And I guess NNT hesitated for long time. The same happened with Nt00 with « there is something loose in her head ». Wanting to do something vanilla but being pushed to NTR by the Patreon members.
But at the end of the day NNT choses to go classic. And his number of subscriptions of Fantia is way higher when he does NTR. His main target does not like the strong 4D chess woman unless she is losing to the cock of an ugly bastard.
I honestly think that Hinako was first capable of saying no and not a dumb highschooler . But her character was modified to make more money…
Yuichi got cucked by his girlfriend and his author…

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By the way, Hinako's excuse for not having sex with Yuichi is kinda bullshit, too. If she's worried about Yuichi noticing her pussy feeling looser, she can save up money, buy herself a Goda-sized dildo, and take a picture of herself using it. When Yuichi fucks her and says "Hey babe, how come your pussy feels like I'm sliding a hotdog down a hallway all of a sudden?", Hinako can put on her dumb squinty-eyed NTS face and say "Tee-hee, maybe I was fucking Goda after all", and when Yuichi starts doing his Darth Vader cuck breathing schtick, Hinako can show him the pic of her punching her cervix with the Black Mamba XXXL and say "Just kidding, I bought a massive dildo because your micropenis doesn't do shit for me."

Of course, that plan won't work NOW, because Yuichi already knows she's getting her organs scrambled on the regular by Goda. But it would've worked for those 3 months she was cucking him on the low.

@Aiboru974

Somebody on fanbox commented that the author should keep in mind that while there are a lot of people complaining in the comments, that those complaints are a vocal minority. I replied to them with the following, which I feel relates to your sentiment (which I agree with, btw):

> Let's say there was a band. The band played polka music. They were successful as a polka band, but they wanted to attract a larger audience. So they started incorporating pop music elements into their polka songs little by little. At first, everyone was happy with this. Fans of their original polka sound find the fusion of pop music elements with the traditional polka sound new and exciting, and pop music fans are attracted to the band because they are interested in the pop music elements. Both old and new fans want more pop elements in the band's future songs.

Over time, the band's polka songs began to incorporate more and more pop music elements. Their music began to sound less like polka and more like pop music. Some of the band's older fans start to worry that the direction the band is heading in musically is different from what attracted them to the band in their early days. However, the pop music audience is much larger than the polka audience, so the band has many new fans. The number of new fans now outnumbers the old fans, and the new fans all want the band to continue adding more pop music elements to their upcoming albums.

The band releases a new album, but it is entirely focused on pop music, with little or no polka music elements remaining. The old fans are disappointed with the album, saying they liked it better when they were making polka music. However, the new album is a huge success, and now the band has achieved superstardom. The old fans are now a very small minority, and are vastly outnumbered by the new fans who are crazy about the band because of the pop music songs they make. In this scenario, it is accurate to say that the fans who complain about the new album are a vocal minority, but it is also important to remember that they are only a minority because the band's genre shift attracted a ton of new fans from a more popular music genre. If we only considered the opinions of the old fans, the complaints may no longer seem like a vocal minority.

Replace the band with the author of this series, polka with NTS, and pop music with NTR. Yes, technically, those who are unhappy or dissatisfied with the last few chapters are a minority. But that may be because the gradual transition from NTS to NTR attracted many new fans to the series who liked the NTR aspects and wanted to see more of it, leaving fans of the original NTS aspects behind. Since the fanbase of NTR is much larger than NTS, it is clear that moving in this direction would attract more fans to the author and bring them more success. It's just a shame if doing so would come at the expense of NTS fans (and by extension, Yuichi). <

So yeah, I too feel like NnT kinda sold out a little. But in the end, a man has to pay rent, and NTR fans have deeper pockets I guess. So if NnT wanted to cash out his series and get that bag, I don't blame him. I just wish it didn't have to be this way.

@melumisium

I agree with pretty much everything you said apart from the first line. I know you're just joking, but NnT has put in almost 3 years of their life into this. I think they do care about the story, and they're genuinely trying their best to create the best story/art they can within the limits of their monthly deadline and the need to appeal to the largest audience they can. It just so happens that their vision for the series is at odds with what the NTS/Yuichi fans hoped to see.

I think I've passed the denial, anger, bargaining and depression phases with these last few chapters. I'm at the acceptance phase now.

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@Baconpie
I wrote out a brief summary of what I would do if I were the author in a removed raw version of this gallery.
There's a manwha called "my secret war" it starts with something like NTR, and the MC being a bit of a loser. But the main character goes through a training arc and winds up happy(after he steals the most of netori dude's harem.) It's a pretty decent read for a pornwha, and the art is a cool style to me.
I think Yuicihi breaking up with Hinako+Blocking her and Goda on all things, then him running into the concerned Mom, Yuichi confiding in the mom, and the mom teaching Yuichi how to please a woman, would be a GOATED pivot. Yuichi could train his body, and go through a bit of a growth spurt(don't have to make his dick a monster, but please make it more than a medical condition), Hinako can continue to explore her love of sex but find that she is not being emotionally fulfilled by the guys who seek her for her body, Yuichi could get trained to be exceptional at foreplay and good at using his (normal/slightly smaller than average) tool. Then, after they both go through their journey they could run into each other, Hinako could cry and apologize to yuichi, and yuichi could cry and apologize to her(for pushing her to fulfil his fetish then abandoning her when she got in over her head). Good ending would be them being in a happy relationship, with their sexual needs met, but involving other people every now and then to satisfy their kinks(With solid boundaries that they both respect). I'm not upset at the story per-se I'm upset that this story has/had a lot of potential to be really good, but it's probably going to end like any other copy pasted NTR plot.

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@So....*fap*

I like what you're cooking there. I don't think Hinako's mom will be much help, though. She's a size queen NTR victim herself: /s/4fa51bc317/1977903-112
That whole family's messed up.

Honestly, the only two endings I see for this arc (and the series as a whole, really) are NTR/pregnancy with Goda, and some crazy deus ex machina nonsense that magically restores the status quo between Yuichi and Hinako, which would frankly be worse than the NTR ending because it would make no fucking sense. It's a shame that I can read your version of how the ending could go and think to myself "Nah, NnT wouldn't do that because the writing is too good/realistic." When the thing that attracted me to this series was the good writing paired with a somewhat realistic interpretation of how a teasing-style NTS relationship would work. I've kind of lost faith in NnT's ability to come up with a satisfying conclusion to all of this.

Surprise twist ending: it's pregnancy, but Goda gets pregnant instead of Hinako. NnT loses his mind, and tries to lure in the zoomer gooner audience with an mpreg plot.

...I'll see myself out.

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Hinako's pensive nature, her hypocritical plea to end the relationships if things go any further than she'd like, despite everything already spiraling out of control, and Goda's... unbelievable ignorance to the situation. Dude's as dense as a gas giant. This is just unpleasant to read, damn. Hinako is basically ready to break up at any time, and Yuuichi knows it. Considering Goda gave him no push in any direction, Yuuichi has to make a decision for himself finally. There's no more coercing from Hinako, no pleasure he has to feel, and the loss is imminent. Yuuichi's choice will be his own for once.

Side thing; I want NNT to write Yuuichi out of character as well. Give him the cuck training arc to re-dominate Hinako. Make him unpredictably stronger than Goda. Or just to throw a curveball into space...
Make him a legendarily petty motherfucker in the end and have him post Hinako's sex vids on the Bulletin Board. Denounce her with a "She's yours now" and then just never see her or Goda at school again.

As always, thank you Kusso.

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@baconpie
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Is that CG collection confirmed to be Akiho (Hinako's mom)? I think that was just a stand-alone work.

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Raw sex still no kissing?
Just be his GF at this point...

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@Narc69

Dunno if it was ever confirmed by NnT, but a lot have people have said it about either that CG collection or another one. It could be BS, but if so where did the speculation originate? Take it with a grain of salt. I choose to believe, because Hinako being the offspring of an NTS to NTR relationship is peak irony. It's like poetry, it rhymes...

@Cannar

Isn't that Terasu MC story still ongoing? That guy isn't exactly known for writing happy endings.

@B00mt00b

Excellent analysis. Your summary of the current situation in the storyline was insightful and perfectly succinct. If you've seen any of my comments, you know I have a problem with brevity. You nailed it. Some things I'd like to comment on from what you said:

You made me realize how incredibly annoying it would be if Hinako ends up being the one to end the relationship. You could say Yuichi shoulders some of the blame because he kept giving Hinako away to Goda, despite numerous warnings from Hinako and others that one day Goda will steal her away if things continued down this road. But the fact is the majority of the blame still lies with Hinako for the relationship falling apart. One could argue that it was largely Hinako, not Yuichi, who pushed this entire netorase agenda onto their relationship, with Yuichi going along with it because he's too weak-willed to say no, and because his body does react to it in a sexual way. While it's true that Yuichi was turned on by it at first, it is also true that he's certainly not turned on by the latest happenings, and even back when he was getting off to the NTS there was a clear disconnect between how his body reacted to the NTS vs how his heart/mind reacted. The fact that he seemed totally content with the three months of normal dating after the typhoon shows that NTS was never something he needed in his relationship, and debatably never even wanted.

Even if you disagree, and feel that Yuichi was totally capable of saying no at any point, but kept agreeing to being cucked to satisfy his own selfish desires without considering how Hinako felt about it (I think the truth falls somewhere in the middle, personally), the events of the past 3 chapters still seem cruel and unfair to him. The punishment does not fit the crime here. Especially since this time, Yuichi only asked Hinako to sleep with Goda because he felt he was not manly enough to make her happy. A sentiment that was instilled into his mind by Hinako's constant teasing. He wasn't trying to get his rocks off this time, he was trying to give Hinako the pleasure he knew he couldn't give her because he felt inadequate as her partner.

Like I said in the comments of the previous chapter, after the first night of sex with Goda, Hinako could have chosen to reject Goda for the rest of her stay at his place during the typhoon. She could have come clean to Yuichi about what happened, and what she felt, and how it was different from before, and that she doesn't want to do that sort of thing anymore because it scares her to remember that kind of pleasure that Yuichi could never give her. They could have discussed it and worked through it. But she didn't do that. Coerced or otherwise, she made the decision to allow Goda to fuck her brains out for 6 straight days with little rest. She made the decision to give in to Goda's request to become his sex friend. And worst of all, she made the decision to keep all of this a secret from Yuichi and lie about what happened, and then have cheating sex with Goda for 3 whole months behind Yuichi's back.

To have her commit all of this seemingly irreparable harm to her relationship with Yuichi, only to have her be the one to break up with him because having Yuichi find out about her affair makes her feel guilty would be infuriating. She doesn't deserve to be the one ending the relationship. She's hurt Yuichi enough already.

Good call on this being the only time in the series where Yuichi's decision is not being influenced by someone else. It'll be interesting to see what he chooses to do. Considering he's probably not used to deciding things on his own, maybe he'll reach out to somebody for advice, like his Mom, Yukino, or Akiho-san. Barring that, I'd wager his most likely choice is to not choose - to feign obliviousness around Hinako and suffer internally as she drifts further and further away from him over time.

A lot of people are hoping for Yuichi to undergo some sort of transformation. Whether it be the same magic cock growth that Goda went through, or hitting the gym and puberty and becoming a gigachad, or undergoing some sort of hyperbolic sex training to learn how to please Hinako. But I don't want Yuichi to change. Everybody else already changed. Goda went from a humble yet horny goofball to a generic netorare antagonist with a horse cock. Hinako went from an unshakeable NTS 4D Chess Grandmaster, to a dumb high school girl netorare fodder whore. If Yuichi transforms as well, there will be nobody left who still acts the same as they did back when this series was enjoyable and not depressing. I'd rather Yuichi stay the same and lose than win at the cost of being a completely different person.

...Once again, I've rambled on for far too long over some dumb drawings of booba.

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The conversation about the creampie sex being Hinako's first 'real' sex is the kind of thing that would have worked great as one of her teasing discussions with Yuichi. I don't mind a switch to NTR - part of my attraction to the series is the secrets Hinako keeps - but the way it is being done means these conversations won't happen any more. In fact, there are quite a few missed opportunities that can't happen without a retcon.

You might think this is because sex leads to a natural conclusion but that's not the case. Hinako/NnT could have kept Yuichi/us unsure if sex had really happened or not. There could have been scenes of Hinako's family appearing to know more than Yuichi - and teasing him. We could have seen Yuichi not wanting to notice Hinako's developing pussy. Hinako's used condoms. Hinako's pills. Hinako's swollen belly.

I think NnT made a strategic error. Rather than being drawn out, the sex arc actually rushes the series to an unavoidable conclusion, losing potential that has been created through years of hard work and character development. Hinako being stolen is an ending that would always have been possible no matter what chapters we got in the interim. It even could continue being explored in bad ends. But this route is the 'truth'. Once the button is pressed, there's no going back.

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Thanks @baconpie, I do find Hinako to be an annoyingly contradictive character. She asks for alot from someone who was genuinely unwilling and even vocalized his displeasures from time to time. Her tip-toeing over the line three times prior even led to her spilling the beans about Yuuichi's fetish, which wasn't a well-kept secret but it was usually done at Yuuichi's discretion. Yuuichi had a number of boundaries set across the series that were often times followed until the last several chapters. Hinako on the other hand has largely stopped setting boundaries in her own encounters and now she has them set for other people who don't even know the terms. Why tell Goda that Yuuichi's knowledge of this escapade is the catalyst to her life falling apart?

Also, you mentioned how she should've rejected Goda but... well, he raped her for 5 days. Like, I can't even pose that otherwise. She didn't want it, he persisted, and she felt like she was unable to say no. Of all things to be the karma in Hinako's life, it's Goda crossing the line right over her. And the lesson went right over her head. Yuuichi would confront her about wanting to stay together under any circumstance when he was all but sure that she had sex out of his sight. She couldn't even offer the same to him to protect him from "getting hurt".

Despite their crumbling relationship, Hinako will never leave the opportunity to decide or even to think in Yuuichi's hands. She is lying there in a bath tub, making the decision for him. Can't even give him the option to say what he wants to her, to be the one to choose if he wants to stay the course or burn that bridge. Look at Goda! He's considering the idea of Yuuichi even forgiving in the first place. He asked if they even had sex in the last few months! Imagine the NTRman in a story proposing that the stolen GF can maintain the relationship with her BF since it was working before. And -then- he does the usual "I can make you happy" etc etc.

Yeah, arguing about three fictional characters and their writing in an NTS-turned-NTR CG gallery is the most nontroversial thing I've taken part in in the last few years. Haha

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As some folks here said already :it's very underwhelming how Hinako as character got basically destroyed.

Her being a queen and 4D chess master was what made this series special, what's even left now that she has become a generic braindead netorare heroine?

Heck, nnt had to do a massive plot induced stupidity move for this to work somehow and had to make yuichi unable to do anything at all while simultaneously giving Gouda a penis surgery to make him massive and inject liquid viagra to replace his blood LMAO.

What's even going on through the author's head that unlike many other authors refuses to give his own afterwords like Terasu, Takeda, etc? Afraid of criticism much? Lame.

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@B00mt00b

I totally get that what Goda did to her during the typhoon was rape. To quote myself from last month:

> She asked him not to have sex with her anymore. She withdrew her consent. Goda refused and had sex with her anyway. Before anybody chimes in and says she enjoyed it, it doesn't matter if she enjoyed it during or after. When they initiated sex, she did not give consent. She only relented when she realized she was trapped in the house with him for at least 3 days, and he would not take no for an answer. She tried to negotiate with him, asking him to at least be gentle. Goda couldn't even do that. She was screaming out Yuichi's name, hoping to be saved, begging Goda to stop, saying she didn't want this. Goda continued anyway. That's rape. Fuck Goda. <

What rubs me the wrong way is how little resistance she put up to being raped. I get that saying "I don't want this." should be enough, and I even mentioned last month that she realizes she's trapped there, and that Goda will not take no for an answer, but it's a little strange that she put up no physical resistance at all. Why not lock herself in the bathroom at some point? That would've bought her a few hours at least if the lock was weak, and a few days at most if the water was still running in the house. She could've said to Goda something along the lines of "Goda, I don't want this. If you force yourself on me right now, when this is all over, I will let everyone know that you raped me. I'll let Yuichi know. I'll let your parents know. I'll let everyone in school know. And I'll let the police know." Even women in real-life rape scenarios who submit to the rapist to prevent getting hurt will put up some physical resistance involuntarily. It took 4 pages to go from her saying "no" to her getting fucked again. She didn't struggle, she didn't try to create distance between herself and Goda, she didn't try to stall in any way. She just starfished and took it. It's like her mind didn't want it, but her body did. The fact that she was squirting all over the place right away supports that. If you take into account the whole theory that she's not a 4D Chess master, but just a dumb high school girl who got in over her head, that scene to me felt like her mindset at the time was "I feel guilty for betraying Yuichi, so I'm going to ask Goda to stop the whole time and call out Yuichi's name, but at the same time, I loved getting dicked down by Goda last night, so I will let him fuck me as much as he wants and get off to it while I'm vocally protesting." Maybe I'm victim-blaming a little here, I dunno...

Good point about Yuichi forgiving her during the Playboy arc. Hinako knows from experience that if he discovered she had a genuine affair with another man, Yuichi would still forgive her to preserve their relationship. But she chose to keep it a secret anyway. To me, that says that even right after the typhoon, Hinako had already decided that she cannot give up the dick. She was already lost before the 3 months of cheating sex.

You're right about how Hinako is indirectly influencing Yuichi's choices and removing a lot of his options. She's pretty much left him with three options:

- Dump her
- Confront her and try to convince her to stay with him/forgive her/appeal to her heart, and likely end up getting dumped
- Pretend to be oblivious, and have her get stolen away by Goda eventually

That said, it's still the first time his choice isn't being directly influenced. He's not being pressured to choose only one option like he usually is. Granted, all three choices are not great for Yuichi. But at least there is a choice.

It was pretty funny to see Goda basically tell Hinako "Hey, it's totally okay to let Yuichi know about all this. He'll forgive you, and then we don't have to hide it anymore. Also, you should probably let your bf fuck you every now and then", only to have her reply with "Nah, fuck that. I only want your dick from now on. I'll dump Yuichi if this relationship changes in any way."

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That last bit of your comment @baconpie actually sounds a lot like a case of bad writing the author let slip out of his mind without realizing it in time.

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@jesus1237890456

I just checked the prologue again. Yuichi pulls out, just like Hinako said.

/s/687c605ea8/2494474-22

All the other times they had sex, Yuichi seems to be wearing a condom.

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I write using a translator. If you don't understand, please point out.

You won't find such enjoyable discussions anywhere else. I'm glad that an English version has been released.

Regarding the word rape, let me give my opinion: Goda did not rape Hinako.
Before having sex for the second time, Hinako asked, “Is there an option not to have sex?” Although I said this, I think this is a [suggestion], not a [rejection].
Goda declined [the offer] and they started having sex. Hinako said “no” and “I don’t want to,” but this was just Japanese conversation.
In Japanese porn, the words "no", "no", and "stop" are often used, but they don't really mean rejection.

I want to write more after work. :)

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@eclairer

I can see your point of view, however I do disagree with it. Cultural differences can attribute to a different understanding of "No" in response to a sexual advance.

@baconpie

The way the scene is written in chapter 2 showcases the powerlessness of the victim. To put it plainly, I really don't like it in doujins, and fiction overall. It is just a bit too realistic of a reaction. Ultimately, it's why I felt bad for Hinako in chapter 2; she was genuinely in over her head like you mentioned. Had the storm not come, she would've left after one time and maybe things would have fallen apart differently. It wouldn't have been a happy end since she would have been afraid to tell Yuuichi about it anyways.

This all makes me wish for an end sooner rather than later.

By the way, @Wilfriback, you are damn right about "Afterwords". Where the hell have they gone? NNT doesn't publish anything outside of posting the pages monthly. There's not even a mention or reaction to good or bad reception in any of the subscription services.

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If we want to understand why Hinako couldn't refuse sex, we can use food as an example and dopamine as an example.

first. food
Hinako only ate uncooked, boring food. (Yuichi)
And for the first time, Hinako ate foods with added sugar, salt, meat fat, and Msg. (Genki)
And it was the most delicious food Hinako had ever experienced (the pleasure of sex and the finishing orgasm).
Since there is no safe food to eat right now, I ate that food (isolation due to the typhoon).
Hinako knows that spicy foods that are sweet, salty, and full of fat are not good for the body (3 months of cheating).
And Hinako became obese because she continued to eat unhealthy, delicious food for three months. (Ntr now)

Second, dopamine
Assuming the average is 100p, Conversation or contact with a lover is 120p
Drinking 150p. Game 175p. sex 200p. Orgasm 240 (male), Orgasm 480 (female). Gambling 800p. drug 1200p.

Hinako had never had an orgasm with Yuichi. And Hinako didn't even get 200p of pleasure from sex with Yuichi. For her, 480p must have been a huge pleasure. It is not impossible for a girl with little life experience to become addicted to orgasms. (Examples include people who are addicted to games, animation, alcohol, and drugs.)

After six days, at first Hinako was motivated to keep the secret, but on the other hand, she wanted pleasure (dopamine), so she slowly became corrupted.

This is only my understanding of Hinako's situation and feelings, but this is not the correct answer. What is certain is that it is not an impossible setting

@B00mt00b
I also respect your opinion.

Korean can translate Japanese in more ways than English.
(I hope this is accepted as a difference, not discrimination.)

I haven't read the English version, so I don't know how it's expressed. But Yuichi doesn't think Hinako was raped. And Hinako also doesn't think she was raped.

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@eclairer

I understand you clearly. You're good o/
Your examples are good, but both food and drugs have another influencing factor; manipulation.

You can eat a good meal with a complimentary drink. You can also be served salty food that encourages you to drink.(Sex can feel good, but preventing the orgasm can make Hinako crave more.)
Healthy eating can be good for the body. The price difference in cheaper take-out may convince someone to eat unhealthily. (Maintaining a relationship is better for the heart, but the quick sex gives Hinako immediate satisfaction, followed by some level of guilt)
Technically, the choice was always yours to eat elsewhere. (Technically, Hinako always had the chance to stop seeing Goda.)

Hinako felt like she had no choice but to give in to her own desires and Goda's manipulation did not help. Her [refusal] was treated as a [suggestion] and now she is hooked. For someone who has never been on the receiving end, Hinako is experiencing pleasure she has never seen before. She is lost at sea.

Regarding the English translation, the word is never brought up. To be honest, it is seldom used even among fan translations over it's heavy connotation. That is perfectly reasonable because these are doujins, they shouldn't be taken seriously. (Lol) Translating into English is usually met with plenty of interpretations and occasionally a misunderstanding of tone. Another person's perspective from a language I do not understand myself is certainly welcome.

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@ baconpie Let me borrow the word you used. ("Absolutely not" )

Panbox is not a good atmosphere for exchanging opinions. Some people even want to change the current story to bed end or if. If that happens, it is not a good choice because it creates a problem of trust in the work, not the character. First, I will wait and see, and I will write my opinion here before posting it on Panbox.

If there is a 5th sex episode, or if episode 4 is not the final, I think the conflict will be at its highest in the 4th sex episode.
If the story starts after yesterday's video, it will be at 10 or 11 PM. Will Yuichi go to Hinako's house?Will he contact Hinako? I imagined that Genki would be at Hianko's house, but it was late in the evening and the family was home together. If we didn't sneak into Hinako's room together, I think the story will start tomorrow.

"絶対いやだ" , "Absolutely not"
A strong rejection that Hinako used for the first time in her work. and Yuichi thought there was an implicit meaning to this. However, Genki does not take this seriously and continues the conversation playfully.
I guess Genki probably knows what that means. What if Hinako wasn't the first to use the phrase "Absolutely not"?
2 months ago - I want to cum in pussy - "Absolutely not" - 2 months later - approved
yesterday - be my girlfriend- "Absolutely not" - There is a possibility. It is expected that Hinako's guilt will decrease and little by little she will act as Genki wants.

KISS
Hinako cannot control her body because of the pleasure she gets during sex. It's been 3 months and he still can't move his lower back during the cowgirl position. Because I feel the pleasure from sex too strongly. If Genki had tried to force Hinako to kiss him, Hinako wouldn't have been able to refuse. Why didn't Genki kiss Hinako?
1. Genki only wants the pleasure of Hinako’s hole. 2. Genki was rejected for a kiss and is looking for an opportunity. 3. Hinako is depraved and waiting to be kissed herself.
4. It will be used by Hinako to forget her sadness after breaking up with Yuichi. 5. The author's final weapon to mind-destroy Yuichi
++Genki no longer sucks Hinako's breasts and pussy. Does Genki really only want the pleasure of Hinako's hole? (It is expected to be used in schools.)

character's attitude
If the story starts after yesterday's video, it will be at 10 or 11 PM. Will Yuichi go to Hinako's house?Will he contact Hinako? I imagined that Genki would be at Hianko's house, but it was late in the evening and the family was home together. If we didn't sneak into Hinako's room together, I think the story will start tomorrow.
-Yuichi
Hinako completely fooled Yuichi for three months.But will Yuichi, who knows the whole truth, be able to deceive Hinako with the same feelings as usual? Yuichi needs time to make a choice. Until Yuichi chooses, he must deceive Hinako with lies. Can you hide your painful feelings? Perhaps Yuichi may end up accepting the result without being able to choose anything.
Until then, it will be painful to see Hinako acting false.
-Hinako
Hinako will feel guilty and act to deceive Yuichi. However, he notices Yuichi's mood is different from usual.
1. In order to protect his secret, he treats Yuichi more lovingly and breaks Yuichi's heart. 2. The fear that Yuichi may know the secret causes him to become dependent on pleasure and become corrupted more quickly. 3.Genki's behavior at school makes things even more difficult. 4. After Yuichi reveals the secret, the two break up and become sex partners with Genki (for a while)
-Genki
Knowing that Yuichi and Hianko will break up no matter what outcome is chosen, Genki now has nothing to hide. Genki had asked Hinako to help him masturbate at school. Now I will have sex, not masturbation. Genki will realize all the Bed Ends where sex was held in schools in the past, such as empty classrooms, restrooms, locker rooms, school rooftops, nurses' rooms, etc.
After Genki cums on Hinako at school, Yuichi might see the semen flowing out of her gym clothes or panties. Genki will take even more drastic actions to force Yuichi to make a choice.
1. It will corrupt hinako with guilt toward Yuichi and the pleasure of sex. 2. Genki finds Yuichi sleeping in the infirmary. They have sex in the nurse's office in secret from Hinako. While Yuichi is pretending not to notice or is suffering, Genki opens the curtain and shows them having sex. 3. [Situation comedy] Yuichi sees and hears Hinako having sex at Genki's request, saying the worst things that could hurt Yuichi. (Yuichi runs away from the scene, crying. Hinako despairs or gives up.) 4. Other students at school find out about Hinako and Genki’s cheating. (New NTS story)

Personally, I find it both painful and enjoyable to see Hinako and Genki becoming emotionally closer.
1. Hinako explains why she arrived at the motel late. And he brought Genki his favorite food and drinks.
2. Hinako does what Genki wants without complaining. The two talk about the judo club. Hinako doesn't complain about dirty dick.
3. Hinako sighs when Genki asks for bathing service, but when Genki asks for sex-related requests, she listens to his requests without saying anything. And then she acts.
++Genki used all his pocket money to buy a camera. So, do you use Hinako’s money for motel fees, food, and contraceptives pill? I hope the next work explains Hinakok's lack of pocket money.
(Love hotels in Japan are expensive for a student to use every day for a month.)

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Imagine he clap the mom and sis too

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Since I've already recycled pretty much everything else I said on fanbox and patreon already, I might as well recycle the rest of it and post it here, too:

Random predictions of things that might happen next chapter(s):

> 1. Goda starts hanging out with Yuichi and Hinako again in the mornings and lunchtime. - He probably only stopped because he didn't want Yuichi to get suspicious of them. Since he's shown Yuichi these videos, he feels his victory is inevitable. So, he probably no longer sees any reason to not spend as much time with Hinako as possible now. It's not like Yuichi can do anything about it. He has to pretend to be oblivious, or Hinako will know that he knows and break up with him. Speaking of which...
> 2. Yuichi plays dumb and continues going on sexless dates with Hinako. - Keeping up appearances is the only option Yuichi can choose that keeps him and Hinako together. That said, Goda knows he's basically won at this point, so...
>3. It becomes more and more obvious during Yuichi's dates with Hinako that her heart is beginning to fall to Goda. - Hinako might start showing up to the dates late, looking disheveled or exhausted from sex with Goda. She might get a text on her phone, leave Yuichi to go to the bathroom in the middle of the date, and come back looking like she just had a quickie. Or worse yet, she might make up an excuse and cancel a date with Yuichi to go have sex with Goda instead. And Yuichi will find out about all of this because...
> 4. Goda sends Yuichi more photos/videos of himself with Hinako. - In addition to pics/vids of Hinako having sex with Goda mid-date, or in lieu of a date, Goda will continue meeting up with her regularly for the normal fwb meetups. Goda will pressure her during every meetup to break up with Yuichi and become his instead, and Hinako's refusal of the proposal will grow less and less adamant over time, ultimately leading to...
> 5. Goda and Hinako kissing. - Hinako finally decides she loves Goda enough to allow kissing during sex. Goda, of course, is so good at it (despite having zero experience) that it drives Hinako wild. She ends up wanting to kiss him all the time afterwards, and maybe even stops kissing Yuichi on their dates, thus ending all intimacy between herself and Yuichi. And with that penultimate hurdle cleared, all that's left is...
> 6. Hinako leaves Yuichi for Goda/Hinako gets pregnant. - I'm not sure which one would happen first, but both are likely to happen eventually.

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It all went downhill as expected - sad but not unpredictable. I guess this is how it’s bound to be.

As always I appreciate your thoughts Baconpie, you’re probably the one person in here I trust cares the most about the story - even more so than NNT, sometimes. You and a few others, at least.

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I could edit one of my previous comments, but i'll just make a quick comment. I know cuckolding play can be harsh and devistating to the recipient (in this case Yuichi), but isn't reaffirmation kinda needed? Correct me if i'm wrong but I don't think Hinako ever really gave him that. Maybe in passing like in the chapter were she was texting the school playboy, but that's all I can recall.

I know Hinako loves Yuichi (Even with this chapter), but she never professes it like Yuichi did in the first chapter of the sex edition.

I might not like the direction the story had headed, but Hinako's and/or Yuichi's possible decision on their relationship would certainly hit my emotions like a mac truck.

All those things not said, no more dates and in person meet-ups. Osananajimi and NTR is a deadly combo 💀

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When Hinako said she's doing all this for Yuichi in Part 2, I was seriously pissed. Like, really? You're letting some other dude go down on you at school FOR MONTHS, and you're saying you never got any pleasure from it? Fuck off. She's clearly lying, and it totally killed my interest in the whole plot. Since this isn’t NTS anymore, I’m not as invested. Reading this as an NTR story, now I just want to see Hinako's downfall. I want her to be utterly degraded and used. Let her be the school's cum dumpster for all I care. But I bet the ending of this series will be just like the author’s previous work.

NnT mentioned they love bittersweet endings where "the heart comes back, but the body doesn't..." But compared to their previous work, Karen is written way better than Hinako. For example, when Karen was pleasuring herself in this panel /s/ae9b8a7451/2895907-13, she was thinking of her husband. Unlike Hinako, who’s fantasizing about Goda (if Yukino’s telling the truth). So if NnT plans on ending this series like their last one, it’s gonna be a shitty ending.

On a funnier note, I saw a comment on NnT's fanbox that said Yuichi should just hang himself and let Hinako live with the guilt and despair forever. It’s dark, but damn, it’d be a satisfying ending. Imagine Hinako getting PTSD whenever she tries to have sex with another guy. That’s way more satisfying than all that “Yuichi should man up, dump Hinako, and become an alpha/sigma male” cringe endings.

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@warpvortex

At this point, I think that Yuichi breaking up with Hinako would be the least unsatisfying route this story can take that still fits the character. Yuichi has shown in the past that he's willing to sacrifice his own happiness to make Hinako happy. He forgave Hinako when he thought she had cheated on him with Ryosuke (Playboy chapter), and he sent her away to get fucked by Goda because he thought she wasn't happy with their sex life and knew Goda could pleasure Hinako in ways Yuichi never could. I could totally see Yuichi thinking or saying something along the lines of "I just want Hinako to be happy, and being with Goda makes her happy, so it's okay if we break up and Hinako became Goda's woman instead."

As far as whether or not Yuichi should reunite with Hinako afterward or not, it depends on how the author approaches Hinako's character after the breakup, and what she says to Yuichi when she asks to him to take her back. Let's split it into three categories - GOOD, NEUTRAL, and BAD. Good being things that would make it okay for Hinako to get back together with Yuichi, and bad being things that would make it not okay for Hinako to get back together with Yuichi:

GOOD
- Hinako shows/expresses genuine regret for her past actions. There's a lot for her to be regretful for. It's not just the cheating sex. It's also the lack of communication with Yuichi that led to them not understanding each other's feelings. And the lack of aftercare/reaffirmation after the acts of cuckoldry that destroyed Yuichi's self-esteem. And the constant pressuring of Yuichi to commit NTS stuff with no regard for whether he actually wants it. The constant breaking of the established rules and boundaries Yuichi set for Hinako during the cuckolding acts. Constantly withholding information from Yuichi. Hooking up with Goda multiple times, having late-night conversations with Goda, and masturbating while fantasizing about Goda, all without telling Yuichi about any of it (Yukino chapter). Committing sexual acts with Goda that she never did with Yuichi (analingus, and now creampies). And then, on top of all that, the horrible, horrible things she did from Chapter 1 of the sex arc onwards. She doesn't have to state regret for all those things individually, but the more things she mentions regretting, the better. And regretting the sex arc stuff is mandatory.
- Hinako is shown to not enjoy sex with Goda (or any other guy) as much after breaking up with Yuichi. If it's made clear that the loss of Yuichi had a significant impact on Hinako's emotions, to the extent that she finds it harder to enjoy things like sex, then that would be a good sign that her heart did still belong to Yuichi after all.
- Hinako breaks up with Goda completely. No secret relationship on the side. No negotiating with Yuichi to be Yuichi's bf while still getting to fuck Goda. If Hinako wants to be with Yuichi, she should be with him exclusively, without any more NTS stuff. Yuichi has suffered enough heartbreak and humiliation already.

NEUTRAL
- Hinako enjoys having sex with Goda after the breakup with Yuichi. While having her not enjoy the sex would be a good sign, having her enjoy it would not necessarily be a bad sign. It's expected that Goda would continue to be able to make Hinako's body feel good. As long as Hinako eventually realizes that sex alone cannot make her truly happy, or that she'd be happier being with Yuichi and having terrible sex than she would being with Goda and having amazing sex, it's fine if she still enjoys sex with Goda. The important thing would be Hinako choosing Yuichi over Goda for once.
- Hinako sleeps with other guys besides Goda. A lot of fans have been requesting this on fanbox and other places, so NnT might try to deliver on this at some point. It doesn't really matter who or how many guys Hinako fucks, as long as she drops all of them and chooses Yuichi in the end.
- Hinako and Yuichi remain friends after the breakup, Hinako hooks up with Goda, and Yuichi has to be around/witness Hinako and Goda being lovey-dovey with each other when they all hang out together. While this would certainly be painful to see happen, it still wouldn't necessarily matter if Hinako dumps Goda and chooses Yuichi in the end.

BAD
- Hinako and Yuichi reunite off-screen/after a time skip. This is unacceptable. We have to see what happened. We have to see the conversation between Hinako and Yuichi that led to their reconciliation.
- Hinako gets pregnant with another man's child. This is an absolute dealbreaker. I don't want another ending like "7-nichikan no Netorase Kiroku". Even if NnT tries to make it unclear who the father is, like if before the breakup Hinako and Yuichi have sex one last time, and Yuichi gives her a raw creampie, and then Hinako returns a few months later looking pregnant, and she says the baby is Yuichi's, but Yuichi and the reader know she's been getting raw-dogged by Goda this whole time. That would still be a no-go.
- Hinako wants to keep Goda as a sexual partner while remaining Yuichi's boyfriend. No deal. The NTS stuff needs to end. If Hinako can't live without Goda's cock, then she'll have to live without Yuichi companionship instead. She has to give up something in this relationship. Especially after everything she's done.
- If Hinako was the one who broke up with Yuichi in the first place. If Yuichi isn't the one to end the relationship the first time around, and Hinako tries to take him back after dumping him, Yuichi should tell her to kick rocks. She doesn't deserve to be the one who decides when their relationship starts and ends. She's the one actively destroying their relationship. She has no right to keep Yuichi on a string like that.
- Hinako shows little to no remorse or regret for her actions. If Hinako doesn't feel bad about all the shit she's put Yuichi through, then Yuichi deserves a better partner than her. Even having Hinako's thoughts about what she did to Yuichi be kept a secret from Yuichi/the reader would not be acceptable. She has to regret it. She has to feel bad about what she did.
- Hinako drops hints that she'll continue doing NTS stuff to Yuichi if they get back together. Dear God, no. The NTS/NTR stuff needs to stop. Completely. Hinako is not good at it. She will take things too far and get in over her head again, and Yuichi's mental state will deteriorate further the entire time. Give it a rest already. Find a new kink. Just start pegging Yuichi instead or something.

Now, all these things don't need to happen/not happen. There just needs to be a lot of the GOOD stuff, and in a worse-case scenario maybe one thing maximum from the BAD stuff. If too much BAD or not enough GOOD things happen, then it would be better if Hinako and Yuichi did not get back together after they break up.

Oh god, I've only replied to the first paragraph so far...

Fully agree in thinking that Hinako and Yuichi aren't even boyfriend and girlfriend at this point. Their relationship seems more like close friends/besties to me. To quote myself further up in the thread:

> Spending three months with Yuichi, without any sex, without NTS teasing, and without confessing that she's been having an affair pretty much means her relationship with Yuichi has been downgraded to just a close friendship at this point. It might be possible that the guilt she feels in this newest chapter during and after sex might be purely from her knowing that what she's doing is morally wrong, rather than actually feeling bad for cheating on the one she supposedly loves. In my mind, Hinako already wants to break up with Yuichi and become Goda's woman, and she's just staying with Yuichi for now out of obligation, or because she wants to avoid having to confess her infidelity to him, since doing so would basically be admitting out loud that she's a terrible person. Her saying she would break up even if Yuichi forgives her sort of confirms this. She's just looking for a convenient way out at this point. If someone offered her a way to end her relationship with Yuichi that didn't have any negative repercussions for all parties involved, she'd take it in a heartbeat. <

So yeah, Hinako's love for Yuichi might just be platonic at this point. She's staying with Yuichi as his girlfriend because she doesn't want to come clean and hurt his feelings, but she'd much rather be Goda's girlfriend instead.

Skipping the chapter 2 confession stuff since I've already shared my thoughts on that. It's totally non-canon in my mind, and it's crazy to think otherwise.

It looks like there were four cameras set up in that room: The side/profile view we see used in the beginning (and is visible in the low-angle blowjob shot), a low-angle/closeup shot of the bed (the camera seen in the background on the left when Goda was fondling Hinako's boobs, shown for various sex scenes, p170 being the most obvious), the high-angle shot of the bed (the camera seen in the background on the right when Goda was fondling Hinako's boobs, shown for the scenes where Hinako was licking Goda's cock between rounds on p222), and the low-angle blowjob view, which was probably used as the "roaming" camera and moved around a lot after the blowjob (It could be the one that recorded the scenes where Hinako washed Goda with her body, for example). There's also the camera on Goda's phone, which might have been used for the closeup shots of Hinako's creampie leaking out as well as the cowgirl scene (he could have also just used the roaming cam for those instead), and the camera recording their bathroom convos, which was either hidden, or was the roaming camera, and Goda somehow set it up to record in secret without Hinako noticing (I definitely agree that Hinako was not aware she was being recorded in the bathtub scenes).

So yeah, four cameras is a lot, but this is the guy who bought 100 condoms for what was supposed to be only one night of sex. And even though Hinako is used to being filmed to show Yuichi, she had no reason to believe Goda would risk ending his fwb relationship with her by violating the one rule she gave him (don't show Yuichi). Plus, Goda has shown in the past that he's a big fan of taking pictures/video of his sexual encounters with Hinako. He's probably been making recordings of his fwb meetups with Hinako this whole time. He just went overboard for this one because he knew it was gonna be the first creampie sex. I can totally see Hinako not being suspicious of Goda and all the cameras at this point in the story. She just didn't take into account that by admitting that her body has fallen for him, that he would no longer have any reason to follow her one rule anymore, since she likely would still stay with him no matter what at that point.

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The signs were there from the start. I don't get why we all thought this series would be any different. What really sold this series was Hinako's domineering nature. She was a mischievous schemer, and that was her charm. I remember when she teased Yuichi during their cuckold reports, playing with the idea of whether she was just a "normal girl" or not, hinting that she was "not like other girls." But the recent chapters have made it very clear that she's actually just like any other "normal girl".

The "Hinako's secret?" chapter in the love hotel was also pretty confusing. NnT said that the description for the "Hinako's secret?" series was that it contains a mixture of truths and lies. Yet, in chapter 2 of the sex arc, we now know that the rimjob was canon to the storyline. So then, what were the "lies" in that love hotel chapter? What scenes didn't actually happen? Are we looking at another potential retcon from NnT?

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Nobody cares more about this story than you guys because NNT evidently doesn't.
I always read you coming consistent and sound logc scenarios about handling the work and despite it makes me happy it also makes me sad seeing how much of a wasted potentail got away from it's own author.

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I lost interest in the series and even left the fan club where I stayed for almost 3 years.
The entry of many fans and excessive communication may destroy the content.
I think the author will make a rough living with this series and then disappear.
I hope other creators will take over the initial concept that was attractive.

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Take it with a grain of salt (actually, just use the entire salt shaker for this one), but according to a few 4chan posts, NNT has been bleeding subscribers for a while now before this arc began. While [She's being targeted...] has been well received in many areas, the ongoing posts solely dedicated to it grew stale to some subscribers, I suppose. Just a thought, but it has been 15 months since anything except [She's being targeted...] has been drawn and posted by NNT.

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Hi, y'all. Been away for a few days. I got shingles and nearly lost an eye, but I'm better now. I won't bother reacting to everybody's comments because I'd be here all day, but I'll sum it up by saying it's incredible how something as niche as an NTS hentai can develop so many passionate fans from around the globe. The analysis, predictions, and ending takes have all been great to read, despite the comments from some here who for whatever reason decided to broadcast their illiteracy to the world, despite nobody asking. Now, on with the show: I'll be sharing a few more random thoughts I've had, along with a couple of personal takes on an ending to this arc.

A while back, I said something happened between the Yukino chapter and the Blowjob chapter that changed the relationship between Hinako and Goda. I think I might've been wrong about that. Upon rereading the Hinako's Secret for the Goda date chapter, I think their relationship had already changed back then. Going off of memory, I recalled Hinako being somewhat annoyed and dismissive during that date, clearly only doing it for Yuichi. But I don't know if I just had rose-tinted glasses on, or if viewing it with the context of the current arc allowed me to see things I hadn't before, but it's fairly obvious to me that Goda had already won her body over in some part even back then. Her denial of being completely absorbed in her erotic acts with Goda on p.3 was a weak one, and on p.13 she chose to continue ignoring Yuichi to engage in more intimate acts with Goda instead. This is the first time in the series that Hinako chooses another man over Yuichi for reasons that didn't involve teasing Yuichi further (touching Takeshi's cock in the hot springs was mostly done to tease Yuichi further, although it can be argued she also did that because she wanted to please the stronger male in Takeshi). She willingly admits to Goda that he's superior to Yuichi sexually, and gives a long hesitation before turning down Goda's offer to become his woman. None of this was being recorded, so she had no reason to put up an act here. She agrees to give Goda a rimjob without too much hesitation, and from p.50-53 you can see she really gets into it. She agrees to give Goda rimjobs whenever he wants from then on, which is the first time in the series she agrees to doing something erotic with another man for reasons other than teasing Yuichi (despite saying she did it to tease Yuichi in the sex arc chapter 2 confession on Day 2, the fact is if Yuichi never asked Hinako for a rimjob, which he never did, he'd never know she was doing that to Goda, making it a sex act between herself and Goda she was keeping secret from Yuichi). At the end of the chapter, Goda starts touching Hinako while asking for another date and if she wants to be his woman again. We don't get to see a straight answer from Hinako in the chapter, but her face on p.83, coupled with the events during the Secret BBS and Yukino chapters tell us everything we need to know the answer for ourselves. That night, Hinako agreed with Goda to go on more dates with him in the future. That's what she was doing during the Yukino chapter when Yuichi called her. Even back then, after just a couple off months of giving Hinako oral sex, Goda had made Hinako become physically attracted to him. At the end of the Goda date, Hinako shows Yuichi a photo of herself and Goda in the bath together after the date. Something I never noticed at the time was that it wasn't just a photo. Hinako had set that picture as her phone wallpaper. Now of course, she could've done so just to further tease/provoke Yuichi, but what if that wasn't the only reason? What if she did it to remind herself of the great time she had with Goda that night? What if she actually kept that as her phone bg afterwards?

Fast-forward to this chapter, and you can really see how much stronger her physical attraction to Goda has become. It clearly outpaces her emotional attraction for Yuichi by a considerable distance. So much so that it's bled over into more than just a physical attraction at this point. Everything about that final video felt less like a reluctant Hinako meeting up with Goda for an obligatory friends with benefits meetup to keep Goda's mouth shut about their having sex, and more like a boyfriend and girlfriend meetup at a love hotel to share their desires for one another. The way they spoke so comfortably with each other, the way Hinako would perform certain sexual acts on Goda without even needing to be asked, doing it seemingly of her own volition (touching Goda's erection over his pants in the beginning, and the numerous cleanup blowjobs between rounds). In fact, outside of the part where she used her body to wash him and when she was lying on the bed exhausted at the end, Hinako's body remained in contact with Goda's cock the entire time they were alone together in that hotel. She couldn't keep her hands off of him. Even after the sex was over, she was lovingly caressing and licking his cock, as if she was worshipping it and thanking him for giving her so much pleasure. I don't know if NnT plans on a 4D Chess ending (I highly doubt it) but if they do, I won't buy it one bit. You can't fake what she was doing. Those feelings were real. They were genuine. She has fallen.

I noticed that the concept of Hinako's confession being non-canon/a message from NnT to his fans is something only seen with the Western/Non-Japanese fans. Everybody else takes it at face-value. That seems crazy to me, because if you take what she said at face value then that confession scene is the point at which this series truly switched over from a hentai with good writing to a hentai with bad writing. If she really did do all that stuff before the Typhoon just for Yuichi, that's a tremendous retcon. There are several things that we are shown Hinako doing/thinking that contradict her own testimony. Taken at face-value, Hinako's confession introduces plot holes and inconsistencies that one might see in the work of a sloppy writer taking over a canon work that they are not fully familiar with, like when a new head writer takes over a western comic book series like Batman and starts doing things that contradict the established canon. It's sloppy and amateurish, and is the first example in the series of objectively bad writing from NnT. It also makes Hinako's fall way too sudden if taken at face-value. Rather than the more realistic fall that occurs gradually over months of being pleased by Goda physically ever since he first appeared in the story, Goda somehow makes her fall in just six days. It's a weaker, less believable storyline if Hinako's confession is canon. For the author's sake, I choose to write off Hinako's confession as a note from NnT to his upset fans, because the alternative makes the entire story much, much worse.

And now, the "fun" part. Here are two possible endings for the sex arc that I've come up with. Spoiler alert: none of them are happy endings for Yuichi. I just don't see my boy getting a happy ending at this point, which is sad.

False hope ending

- Yuichi confronts Hinako, and shows her the videos Goda sent him. Yuichi tells Hinako that he knows she plans to break up with him now that he's found out, and says that he is okay with that if it means she'll be happy.
- The combination of Yuichi selflessly giving up his relationship with Hinako just to make her happy, coupled with Hinako being upset with Goda for breaking the one rule she gave Goda (don't tell Yuichi) temporarily breaks the spell Goda has on her. She cries a lot, apologizes to Yuichi for everything, and says she'll choose Yuichi over her own selfish desires after all. They have a happy reunion, and Yuichi gets to have sex with her for the first time in forever, during which he notices how much Hinako's pussy has been stretched/transformed due to constant sex with Goda. Hinako looks happy afterwards, and says she's going home for the day. This happens on a Friday evening.
- On Saturday, Hinako doesn't answer her phone when Yuichi tries to call and text her. Feeling worried, Yuichi goes over to Hinako's house, but she's not there. Hinako's mom/sister says that they thought she was at his place. Yuichi suspects something's wrong, but doesn't know what to do.
- Hinako doesn't respond to calls/texts the entire weekend. On Sunday night, Yuichi gets a video call from Goda. Yuichi answers the call, only to see Goda fucking Hinako.
- Hinako looks at the camera and says she visited Goda to yell at him for breaking her rule, and to break things off with him, but when she arrived Goda convinced her to have sex with him one last time before breaking up. Hinako says she remembered how unsatisfying sex with Yuichi was on Friday evening and agreed to Goda's request. But Goda was so good at fucking Hinako at that point that he made her realize she can never leave him because the sex is just too good. Hinako apologizes to Yuichi and breaks up with him, and then kisses Goda for first time to seal the deal.
- Ten year time skip happens. Goda and Hinako are married with five kids, and Hinako is pregnant with a sixth kid. Yuichi is in a nice, normal relationship with a coworker. Yuichi still regularly receives videos from Goda of him having sex with Hinako, which Yuichi secretly masturbates to. The story ends with Yuichi's new gf catching him masturbating to the cuckold videos, and putting on the same face/smile Hinako used to have when she would start teasing Yuichi, thus signifying that the cycle is about to begin anew.

Yuichi suffers ending

- Yuichi confronts Hinako and basically says "I just want you to be happy, and Goda makes you happy, so let's break up." Hinako cries a lot, and apologizes to Yuichi for being a terrible girlfriend, but ultimately accepts the breakup as they both know she's fallen for Goda at this point.
- Sometime later, Yukino invites Yuichi to her room. Yukino says she wants to become his girlfriend. She strips him naked, and starts teasing him with her foot. Yukino says she'll never let him actually fuck her, but she'll help Yuichi get off by telling him stories and showing him videos of her fucking other guys. Despite Yukino's best efforts, Yuichi can't get it up. After everything that has happened to him, Yuichi is simply no longer into NTS. He rejects Yukino's offer. He doesn't want to be someone's toy anymore.
- Meanwhile, Goda and Hinako hook up, and share their first kiss.
- After some strong pressuring and convincing via intense sex, Goda convinces Hinako to allow him to share the videos he made on the Secret BBS, so that he can brag about how he stole/conquered the best girl in school. He posts the videos, and warns the other students that Hinako is now off-limits. Everybody laments losing their chance to do things with Hinako anymore, as nobody is foolish enough to incur the wrath of a tournament-winning Judoka.
- In school, Yuichi is subjected to stronger bullying than ever after everyone finds out his girl got stolen. His final year and half or so of high school are an endless nightmare.
- Fast-forward to graduation day of high school. Yuichi is confronted by Goda and Hinako, whom he has not been in contact with since the breakup. They discuss their post-graduation plans. Yuichi got accepted to a good university. Goda is going to work at his father's job doing some sort of trade work. Hinako reveals she's pregnant, and says she's going to become a housewife for Goda, showing off her positive pregnancy test and engagement ring.
- As they walk away, Yuichi has a mental and emotional breakdown over the contrast between the idyllic life Goda and Hinako have experienced together over the last year and a half, compared to the endless bullying and harassment Yuichi had to endure over the same stretch of time.
- The story ends with Yuichi's first day at university. Yuichi gets recognized by Hiroshi Ijima (or some other high school bully), who was accepted to the same university. Ijima spreads the word throughout the University about how Yuichi is a loser who got cucked in high school and got his girl stolen. Yuichi realizes that his past will follow him everywhere he goes, and he's destined to a life of endless bullying and harassment for being born as a weak male.

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@lopsm

To me, that moment was during the Goda date Secret chapter, when she puts down her phone to continue doing naughty things with Goda, instead of texting Yuichi back, despite knowing he already waited seven hours for her first reply at that point. She wasn't being recorded, and Yuichi was not around to see her do anything. There's no reason for her to choose pleasure with Goda over Yuichi in that moment if her goal was to tease Yuichi, since he wouldn't even know about her making that choice. That means when she put the phone down, it was the first time she chose another man over Yuichi for reasons that had nothing at all to do with teasing Yuichi. At best, keeping Yuichi waiting a few hours more would add to Yuichi's feelings of anxiety slightly more. But he already had waited seven hours to get a reply to his first messages, and already reached the conclusion that Goda is keeping her too busy to answer the phone, so leaving his second set of messages on Read for four hours wasn't going to do that much in the grand scheme of things. She definitely wasn't thinking of Yuichi when she chose to put the phone down. She wanted to get back to feeling good with Goda. All of her denials of Goda from that point forward in the story would always follow a suspicious pause. And after that date, she began doing things with Goda behind Yuichi's back, like continuing to pleasure him while Yuichi was out sick in the Secret BBS chapter, and having all-night text chats with Goda, masturbating while thinking about Goda, and going on secret dates with Goda and lying about it to Yuichi in the Yukino chapter. The Hinako from before the first Goda date would never do things with another man behind Yuichi's back, since the old Hinako only did things with other guys to tease Yuichi. The post-date Hinako no longer does things just to tease Yuichi. That's the turning point.

In my mind, from that point forward in the series, Hinako was doing things with Goda because she wanted to do those things for her own pleasure, and was using the whole teasing Yuichi thing as a convenient excuse. She still loved Yuichi at that point, and might still love him at least a little at the current point. But she was no longer doing cuckoldry stuff to make Yuichi happy. She was doing it to make herself happy. And as time went on, Yuichi's happiness became less and less important in her pursuit of experiencing pleasure with Goda. She panicked after her first time having sex with Goda, because I think she realized at that moment that she was starting to fall completely, and she wasn't sure she wanted that. If not for the Typhoon, Hinako might have been scared straight after her first time with Goda, and ran back to Yuichi because at the time she still didn't want to leave him. But sadly, the Typhoon kept her trapped with Goda for six days, and after three months of being his sex friend, it seems like she's made up her mind about what she wants.

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I'd argue she has made up her mind. She told Goda that her body belongs to him. She said that as long as Yuichi doesn't know about them (or pretends to not know about them, which I'm pretty sure is going to be a thing in the next chapter), she'll stay with Yuichi while having sex with Goda. If Yuichi finds out, regardless of what he says or does, she'll break up with him. But no matter what happens between her and Yuichi, she'll stay with Goda. She denied wanting to hook up with Goda after breaking up with Yuichi, but it was a weak denial, given while lovingly licking his cock. Regardless of the outcome, Hinako has chosen to be Goda's woman, even if only physically. So, she has made up her mind. She chose Goda. In her mind, it doesn't seem to matter what happens to her relationship with Yuichi. That's not the relationship she cares about anymore. She'll stick with it as long as it's convenient for her to do so. But the moment she has to confront Yuichi for her choices, she'll just ditch him and continue with the relationship she actually cares about.

And yes, she is a garbage person. I agree.

Anywho, with that said, let's move on to more speculation.

Rumor has it that chapter four is NOT the final chapter of the sex arc. Below is my prediction for what might happen in chapter four if it is indeed not the finale (borrowing heavily from earlier predictions I made in the comments):

Yuichi plays dumb and continues going on sexless dates with Hinako. Keeping up appearances is the only option Yuichi can choose that keeps him and Hinako together, and Yuichi knows it. That said, Goda knows he's basically won at this point, so he turns up the offensive on Hinako, asking her to meet up with him more frequently, even before or during her dates with Yuichi, forcing her to make a choice between Goda and Yuichi. It becomes more and more obvious during Yuichi's dates with Hinako that her heart is beginning to fall to Goda. On one date, Hinako shows up late, looking disheveled and exhausted from recently having sex with Goda minutes earlier. On another date, Hinako gets a text on her phone, and excuses herself to go to the bathroom in the middle of the date, only to return twenty minutes later looking like she just had a quickie. To make matters worse for Yuichi, Goda continues to send Yuichi more videos of himself with Hinako. The videos confirm Yuichi's suspicions that Hinako was having sex with Goda prior to and during her dates with Yuichi on those two occasions. One day, Hinako texts Yuichi, saying she can't make it to their planned date that day, because she's not feeling well. Yuichi is suspicious, but also thinks that perhaps having so much sex with Goda lately has weakened her constitution and left her fatigued. Yuichi texts her back, wishing her a fast recovery. About an hour later, when Yuichi's now-cancelled date with Hinako was originally planned to begin, Yuichi receives a text from Goda. Instead of a video, the message from Goda is a link. Yuichi taps the link, and is directed to a private live stream showing Goda and Hinako together in a love hotel, having sex.

GODA: Dehehe. Sorry you had to miss your date with Yuichi for this, Hinako.
HINAKO: *in between moans* You're not sorry. You did it on purpose to force me to choose between you or Yuichi.
GODA: Maybe, maybe. But still, you're here, right? That means you chose me over Yuichi.
HINAKO: *guilty/angry face with lip bite* ...Shut up and move faster already.
GODA: Sorry, sorry. Dehehe. *fucks her harder, making her cum*

They have sex, and Yuichi watches, and cries. The chapter ends with Yuichi declaring to himself that he cannot pretend to be oblivious anymore, and that he will confront Hinako the next day.

From there, you can transition to one of the two endings I came up with in an earlier comment (either the "False Hope" or "Yuichi Suffers" ending) for chapter five. Done deal, series over. NnT, hit me up for a collab. Or just steal my ideas. I won't even be mad...

EDIT: Something I've seen in the fanbox comments is a prediction that in the next chapter, rather than witnessing Hinako's infidelity on his phone, Yuichi will see Goda and Hinako having sex firsthand, directly, in-person. They offerred setups for this such as Yuichi hiding in Hinako's closet, or hiding in a locker while Goda fucks her in the school locker room (he is in the Judo club, so he would have access to the locker room late in the afternoon-evening), or Goda has sex with Hinako in a public space somewhere like a public restroom, or in a secluded area of a park, and Yuichi is hiding somewhere nearby to spy on them.

I have a way to fit that scenario in my prediction. It's a little convoluted, but I can see how three straight chapters of Yuichi staring at his phone could get a little stale. Plus, there are some benefits to this alternate route, which I'll go over later. The alternate, in-person witness route is as follows:

Everything up until Yuichi gets a link sent to him by Goda remains unchanged. The difference here is that when Hinako says she's staying home sick, they put in a throwaway line about Yuichi being worried about Hinako being sick all by herself at her home, since Yukino and her parents are away for the weekend for... some reason. Now, when Yuichi opens the live stream, instead of Goda and Hinako having sex in a love hotel, they are having sex at Hinako's house.

HINAKO: *in between moans* I can't believe you made me cancel my date with Yuichi just to have sex in my house.
GODA: Aw, don't be mad, Hinako. This is such a rare opportunity, what with your sister and parents usually being home at this hour. I couldn't pass this chance up. Besides, you always could've said no and gone on your date with Yuichi instead. You chose me over Yuichi.
HINAKO: *guilty/angry face with lip bite* ...Shut up and move faster already.
GODA: Dehehe. Sorry, sorry. I'll make it up to you by making you cum extra hard tonight. You won't be able to spend any time in your house without thinking back to the pleasure I'm going to make you feel tonight. *fucks her harder, making her cum*

At that point, Yuichi puts the phone away and rushes over to Hinako's house. From here, it gets a little convoluted. How does he actually get to see the sex in-person without Hinako finding out? Well, if it happens in her bedroom, maybe Yuichi climbs a tree and looks into her window or something. Or maybe Goda decides to fuck Hinako in the living room, and Yuichi can peep into the front window. Or maybe Yuichi discovers a spare key and stealthily lets himself inside, or he sneaks around the back, and the back door happens to be unlocked so he can get inside. There are plenty of options. None of them are great, but they are at least passable.

Now, as I mentioned earlier, there are some benefits to this version over the live stream version. One is that it breaks the monotony of Yuichi staring at his phone for three straight chapters. Another is that, depending on the exact scenario, and Yuichi's position relative to Hinako and Goda, NnT might be able to reincorporate some of his older tactics of withholding information from both Yuichi and the reader. If he's watching through a window, for example, Yuichi might not be able to hear the dialogue between Goda and Hinako. So we could see, things like Goda saying something to Hinako, and Hinako reacting strongly to whatever he said in some way (blushing, cumming, holding him tighter, looking guilty, etc.). Another advantage is a posssible change to the ending of the chapter. Instead of Yuichi finally deciding to man up and vowing to confront Hinako at the end of the chapter, maybe Yuichi's phone could go off at the end, and Hinako and Goda can catch him spying on them. That would be quite a cliffhanger.

Another common prediction is that Hinako and Goda will finally kiss in this chapter. You can easily shoehorn a kiss into either version of my prediction. The most impactful point would be if Yuichi is seeing them have sex in-person, and his phone goes off right as Goda and Hinako are sharing their first kiss, or maybe even right before their first kiss, cutting it off and thus delaying it for the next chapter instead. Just some thoughts I had. See you in two days!

Last edited on 29 July 2024, 06:52.

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Welp, the preview dropped on their paysites. Hinako wearing a see-through dress which... *checks notes* hasn't been seen since near the beginning of this whole series. If that's not an endgame move, I'mma be pissed.
Real talk tho, she wore this explicitly to tease Yuichi about potentially being knocked up by the art class boys iirc. And this is taking place outside at night, perhaps the same night he saw the vids. This has gotta be it.

~24 hours remain~

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If we're going all in Hinako better be the sluttiest cock hungry HS girl ever, if we don't have kinky NTS stuff anymore I hope we at least get some good raw sex all over the place. She's sexy as hell so I hope she will exploit this to her maximum. RIP all your fanfic and prediction it seems

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updates pliz

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Finally it is the last chapter, I see that they are going to talk since it was the most logical thing, we will have to wait what explanations the whore will give, if it will make her even more of a whore or if there is some salvation because it is really the fault of "both" more than one part than another but oh well.

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@ jesus1237890456
Why is everyone saying this is the last time?

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It's not over until they kiss... Right guys?

Who has the copium? M-maybe it was f-fake cum like before.

I could see Hinako falling for the cock, but falling so hard she doesn't even need to be secretly recorded anymore? Really? Even after knowing how much Goda likes to show her off and even discovering how Goda shared photos of her with every boy in school only after being confronted by Yuichi? She can't be this cocksmitten. It's almost like she wants him to show Yuichi. If she simply wanted a big cock she's already had another boy that she's broken boundaries with, Hebikawa, she could cut ties with Goda and cheat on Yuichi with him instead. At least she could still go on dates and in her view make Yuichi happy while getting her back blown out every day in safety. These facts alone would suggest something is up. But the likely answer is simple. She's just dumb, or willfully ignorant, and insatiably cockhungry. "I can't help it. I'm a girl after all." What we thought was high IQ NTS play back in the good ol' days was a fluke. Icarus flew too close to the sun, or Hinako falling too close to the cock if you will. This could be one of the best portrayals of cuckolding without strict boundaries. A cautionary tale for NTS enjoyers all over the world. "Me sharing my pussy with your friend, I bet it'll feel really good~".

You would think having countless creampie orgasms will bring you to your senses. Sage mode. Nope. "I'll break up with him." Hinako you just gave recordings of all of this to Goda and he asked you what would happen if Yuichi found out. Yeah. This has to be on purpose.

Reading Hinako at this point is like reading tea leaves. She's demonstrated extreme cunning in front of Yuichi but at the drop of a hat her mask slips and she's shown as a braindead cockslut. I think that's why people have been so frustrated. She has shown to be extremely intelligent and impervious to advances, yet if you get some cockstink under her nose she's defeated. She really is a different person.

When she leaves him and Yuichi ropes just memoryhole it brothers. Hinako will always love Yuichi. When the dagger finally drops on his frail body just rip out the page and replace it with this, /s/187027f502/2638298-17

Yuichi is going to need a miracle.

"That felt great, didn't it Yuichi? The pleasure of a depressed ejaculation was amazing, right?"

>Welp, the preview dropped on their paysites. Hinako wearing a see-through dress which... *checks notes* hasn't been seen since near the beginning of this whole series.
There it is. The bow is being wrapped. Gentleman, it's been a privilege.

Bacon's already presented some fine predictions but they're too silly so I'll tell you what's actually going to happen.
Hinako is a sadist, we know that. But what we don't realize is that shes actually the biggest sadist known to man. And while she loves being used and abused and only recently discovered her love for big toys what she loves even more is to hurt Yuichi. Chasing the high of his pained expression that only she can conjure, the peak of which she will soon reap the rewards of. Three months. Three months of chastity, not a peep about NTS, all while going on nice dates and pretending everything is back to the way they were. Did you think she had a gynecologist checkup for fun? No. Foreshadowing. She lied about using the pill. She was actually impregnated by Goda. During Yuichi's confrontation she reveals a test and breaks up with him. He clutches his chest so hard his heart stops, then he faints, and we're given the biggest smile from Hinako that we've ever seen. She proposes to him in his hospital bed. It was all planned. Goda isn't even a real person and is a figment of Yuichi's imagination.

Kissu 70%
Hinako cries 60%
Yuichi cries 100%
Goda cries 0%
Hinako breaks up with Yuichi 50%
Yuichi grows some balls 1%
Pregnancy 30%
Goda uses judo on Yuichi 10%
A new character 5%
THP revenge 1%
It was all planned copium 0.01%

"The sight of my cheating on you and getting aroused by another male... Burn it into your retinas~"
"Little by little, I will be taken away by a superior male. Please watch me carefully, okay?"
"Let us fall together. I will lead you. I will take you even deeper."
"Maybe I'll discover a woman's happiness that I couldn't experience with Yuichi. Maybe I'll find someone I will love more than Yuichi. I might have a baby from someone other than Yuichi."
"Having Goda-kun as a boyfriend is definitely more pleasurable in terms of sex, no? My body would definitely be happier if I had Goda-kun as my boyfriend."
"Yuichi, practice a lot and get better. So that you won't lose to Goda-kun at sex..."
"Once you send us out, it's over..."
"From now on, I might do all sorts of naughty things without Yuichi's knowing"
"The cock I wanna mate with one day... It has to be thick, long and hard"
"If you ever let Genki-kun take me away from you again... You might have to be prepared for that."

I'll finish with a music recommendation for the next, possibly last, chapter. 光輪 - tenniscoats.
https://youtube.com/watch?v=qlpuGl7_A6Y
Let's go home Hinako.

See you in two weeks.

META

NNT is fed up. He wants to draw something else. Drawing sex and even going as far creampie sex back to back is a genie that cannot go back in it's bottle. It's the NTR death rattle. Of course it's possible to go on but it would be so difficult, but I'd love to see the attempt at going back to NTS.

The bad ends are full of ideas that he's reimplemented. Look at the Takeshi scenes, lemon-sucking defeat rape, pleading for Yuichi's help, fucked into retardation. So if we follow these practice runs then we can see where we're going. Pregnancy. It's happening, I don't think he can help himself.

Baconpie, I've absolutely loved your comments. I've been greatly looking forward to them the past few releases. When I work on my own projects some more I'd like to get your opinion on them sometime.

>"Everything for Yuichi.": NnT essentially retcons all of the previous chapters
He could be saying he was doing everything for the reader, (Yuichi's insert), and has decided to do everything for himself from now on.
I think that it is a message to readers, I would regard the "You can't have a happy ending anymore" as significant proof if it carries the same meaning in Japanese.

>In my mind, Hinako already wants to break up with Yuichi and become Goda's woman
I'm not sure, aside from the dicking, she doesn't seem happy at the beginning of this chapter, more like annoyed. At least three sighs. It's strange. Look at the facial expression from p61-62. It's like she doesn't care about anything except the sex. The guilty expressions came later.
>she's just staying with Yuichi for now out of obligation
By Yuichi's own words while on their dates she was acting the same as she was before, I don't think she would fake that.

I would reply to more comments since I enjoyed them all so much but it's getting too late.

It feels so strange being so attached to a porn series for so long, I started reading since School Infirmary and it captivated me. There's something about the character archetype and mannerisms of Hinako, the framing of the narrative through Yuichi, the boiling frog NTS and the tiniest details that NNT sprinkles in. It's special. The only other work that has hurt this good is Wailing Guignol. Being able to read comments while being actively released helps too. The last few releases have been the best for this. I can see how many readers have been disappointed about Hinako's development, the early NTS chapters are almost self contained and quite enjoyable on their own. I can only guess NNT was bored with the status quo and wanted to test himself with a prolonged developing story with more stakes. But even with the NTS to NTR pipeline it could've been executed differently. It accelerated so quickly and half of it has been through a phone over a few minutes.

Thank you so much for translating Kusso.

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