just gonna copy and paste my advice below.

List of things you need to learn to be better, I am no editor but just giving you some general advice

1. Use suitable font, wild words is usually acceptable.
2. Make sure to have someone to proofread your/someone translation , by hiring or some other way.
3. Make sure to use proper size and word alignment when placing the text in the dialogue bubble.
4. You can ask for someone advice in the forum on Cove of Scanlator.
5. If able, for courtesy sake, link the raw and official store page, for people who want to genuinely support the artist.

follow these and you re golden.

Base +7, gathink -11, Vivi1993 +22, Blue_Shift2000 +7, Fofotron +19, incogna777 +10, 0Geus +2, Hamjameter +6, jessica702 +13, Gwweemar +6

Japanese (RAW): /g/2432146/e557f88504/
Chinese (Translation): /g/2408400/ef711d0b8f/
Russian (Translation): /g/2745155/8aac95f08e/
Italian (Translation): /g/2614527/baa596bb65/
Spanish (Translation): /g/2526330/b7fc6d9e8d/
Korean (Translation): /g/2419137/0ac5310453/

Base +45, jessica702 +13