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[Yoshida Killy] Yuusha Auction | Hero Auction [English] [Decensored] [Digital]

[吉田Killy] 勇者オークション [英訳] [無修正] [DL版]

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Posted:2024-08-20 06:58
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Posted on 20 August 2024, 06:58 by:   Reikendar    PM
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I translate mostly as a hobby. If there are any requests, do let me know!
Posted on 20 August 2024, 07:40 by:   Fatesifaeve    PM
Score +220
Other Language or Version
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English digital, decensored, You are here!
Posted on 20 August 2024, 10:07 by:   AhKai    PM
Score +157
>slime trap is super effective against Hero (F)

noted
Posted on 20 August 2024, 12:41 by:   Razorhead    PM
Score +58
I do so love a happy end.
Posted on 20 August 2024, 15:18 by:   Red 255    PM
Score +85
Happy end would have all the slavers killed.
Posted on 20 August 2024, 16:35 by:   SukunaBalsak    PM
Score +27
Words can't begin to describe how happy I am to see that this got translated. @Reikendar, thank you so much! 😊
Posted on 21 August 2024, 00:15 by:   nyuue    PM
Score +58
p3
Since we can't beat her, a slime trap is the best way!
They didn't talk about beating her, they talk about catching her unscathed.

Outside of fighting, this lass isn't much, huh?
They are relieved all she knows is fighting monsters

These country bumpkins only know how to kill monsters
こんなド田舎=in a super rural area like this (i.e. they are not talking about her but the place they are in)

p4
ルルディ = Rurudi
Lilty is a bit of a stretch.

We gotta be in time for the auction!
No mention of the auction yet. They just talk about having to make it no matter what they have to do

Maybe use her tits
Made up. He's talking about using her as fap material

p7
Maybe as a concubine...?
He wants to make her his son's concubine

p8
Look at the supple skin, the sexy curves! And of course, we can guarantee its virginity!
Super liberal translation. Basically saying she has a voluptous body, no health issues and not knowing/untouched by men. Also "its"?

As for proof
Literally just says "Also" because it's leading to the line about her golden eyes on p9

p9
you'll be even better than me!
"stronger" rather than better

When Lilty grows up you'll be a fine hero
Made up. She says she'll give her sword to Lilty when that time comes.

dizzy...
more like "so bright..." (because the blindfold is taken off)

It really is a hero!
Again, "it"? This line is more like "(This is) the proof/mark of a hero!"

Magic is binding its strength
her strength. It even says 彼女=kanojo

Even if it's a hero, it can only obey!
Again, what's with the "it" when referring to the girl? Also, missing "obey their master"

p10
My strength...!
She can't move nor muster her strength

p11
Today's winner is the gentleman in box 32
??? He saying the winning bid goes to the gentleman over there.

p12
150!!
The original says 12憶5千. I don't think 憶 is a numeral but 億 is so maybe the artist made a typo? Anyway, kinda funny how 12X 5k becomes 150 (million) all of a sudden.

p13
Compared to this trash I'll buy you better gear next time!
Made up. He's going to buy her lots of stuff that's more suitable than that sword.

That was left by my mother-
A precious thing inherited by her mother, not just left

Not drinking? There's no poison?
"Oh my, what's wrong? There's no poison in it/I didn't poison it or anything"

p16
It only hurts at first!
"Sorry, I suppose it hurts just a little bit?"

My back...!
Made up. "W- what's this?"

It's just to ensure your obedience, don't worry
"It is something like a safety collar"

Stop... Get away...!
"D- don't come closer..."

Those ruffians didn't hurt you you, did they?
He's saying that it looks like the kidnappers fooled around with her (which is why she has those marks)

Don't touch me!!
This text is supposed to be next to the bubble to the right. You're missing a line "Stop...!!" here

p17
Let's see here What a beautiful pink color!
"Here too... Excellent! Isn't that beautiful!"

p18
I thought as a virgin I would have to spend a little effort
You think this guy is a virgin? He thought he had to be more careful because SHE is a virgin

p19
that
Sto-

p20
I wonder how it feels to lose such a thing?
"How does it feel to lose your virginity?"

p21
I will show you... a hero's wrath...!!
There's no way you can defeat a hero...!!

p25
And each time you twitch so happily! Have you no shame?
"Don't you think that's pathethic? Huh?"

It's like 2AM here so I won't guarantee that my remarks are 100% on the spot but this is the stuff that caught my eye when quickly comparing the first half of your script to the raw.
Posted on 21 August 2024, 04:44 by:   kurodaerk    PM
Score +37
I am noooticing that pattern ✡️
Posted on 21 August 2024, 07:28 by:   Reikendar    PM
Score +70
@nyuue, thanks for taking the effort! I do know my translation isn't 100% equivalent to what the raw says. I do my best to make sure the story remains unchanged while making sure the English flows. Japanese and English don't exactly translate one-to-one, especially because the grammar and vocabulary in both are out of sync very often. I don't know if I'm stepping on any toes here, but I find that if I really translated it simply as per what the raw said, the conversation would be really clunky and out of character.

I do admit I took creative liberties with the 'it' during the auction. Mainly because these people don't really see her as a person, more like an object to be bought. I found it more believable that way.
Posted on 10 September 2024, 16:46 by:   K3roL    PM
Score +7
lmao goyim magic

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