Hello all, this is a gallery that combines NT00's works for Yumi in the "There's Something Loose In Her Head" series that incorporates the Complete Edition alongside works that occur later in the timeline, as the order of events can get confusing to follow. Note that this gallery replaces the original 30 chapters with the Complete Edition and will be updated with new Yumi content.

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Page 1-702: Complete Edition
Page 703-1194: Continuation from 2021
Page 1195-Current: Continuation from 2024

Note on canonicity in this series: After messaging with NT00, he has stated that the new Yumi/Yura chapters in 2024 are omnibus chapters that are loosely canon in the series but do not strictly follow a timeline. This is so he has the freedom to do new scenarios, new characters, as well as possibly reintroduce Jun-senpai into the series. However, these events have loose continuity which fills the gap between Complete Edition and Epilogue as well as leads to the Epilogue of the Complete Edition.

03/30/24 - March Update
04/27/24 - April Update
05/28/24 - May Update
07/01/24 - June Update
07/31/24 - July Update
08/31/24 - August Update
10/01/24 - September Update

we only got chastity cage scene for february? i was hoping we could get more jin and yura...

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@bakahaito

No, that's from January. February was just an update for Mina-senpai. NT00 said we'll get Yura (maybe with Jin) in March but NT00 said for monthly updates he'll either update Yumi or Mina.

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NT00 really went: "now that the vanilla route is complete, time to do what I actually wanted to do and continue the NTR route"

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Yumi is too hot! 5 stars and favorites for this delicious cover, and 1200 images must have been a lot of work, thanks man.

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judging by how quickly this shit makes me cum I'll finish reading this series by next year

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@DatMedBre
Honestly no idea if he plans to do more stuff with Sena. Sena never really played a big part even in the original 30 chapters but coming in for threesomes with Yumi and Haru in the 2021 spinoff/continuation but he might not want to do more stuff with Sena after backlash from Christmas chapter in 2022 where lots of fans were angry about it just ending with a threesome with Yumi and Sena with Jin escalation/creampie only in an IF timeline.

@Aniimey
Nope still ongoing, next update will be something with Yumi at end of March.

@GenerationKamenRider
Read the uploader comment for a full explanation for this gallery. NT00 never made an official compilation. All material in this gallery is official by NT00, I just ordered it into a timeline so people are not as confused when they see “complete edition/Kanzenban” that is only the remake of the first 30 chapters but do not know where all the content from 2021-2022 fit in. That’s why this is a “Complete+” edition where we’ve got complete edition + all the other stuff that should come later after the first 30 chapters without people getting confused with multiple galleries.

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Why would people get angry about them having a threesome for Christmas? Its Christmas. Haru already missed one with Yumi, and for standing up for his himself and setting limits on his enjoyment of cuckolding he gets two creampies! That's like the best ending one of these stories could ever have, AND the NTR lovers still get the art they want too. What does it matter if it wasn't real? This story isn't real in the first place.

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@EHCASUAL

After messaging with NT00 more, he says that he plans to make these future Yura chapters "omnibus" chapters where they are not fully canon but allow him more freedom to write about various scenarios, introduce new characters, perhaps bring back Jun-Senpai. So in one way, readers could interpret all future chapters to be their own separate thing and not a part of any timeline at all. However, he also said that it's likely these new omnibus chapters fill in that gap left in the epilogue which I assume to be the gap between Christmas 2022 and the Epilogue.

This latest bathroom stall chapter if it had to fit in any timeline - it would be the one after the Christmas chapter in 2022 as there, Haru did not let Yumi have a raw creampie with Jin. Why? In this chapter, Yumi does not have raw creampie with Jin at all and only does so in a delusion - following the Netorase pattern we've had this whole series. You could argue "but that doesn't mean it's after the good timeline" sure, but narratively that makes less sense, and you would expect Yura to straight up get the creampie and try to cure Haru of his netorase fetish if this was after the IF ending, not doing more acting to satisfy his fetish as well as having normal, loving sex with him in the stall after she revealed she was acting.

Please tell me if you have any further confusion because the canonicity of this series is just thrown up in the air a lot of the times and many readers have the same questions of "Wait where the F are we in the story". I've updated the gallery comment to reflect NT00's comments so readers know more about the state of these new chapters.

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Short but interesting chapter.
For May and June, this is what NT00 said on Patreon:

In May, there will be no posts with dialogues due to personal reasons such as medical checkups
In June, only the Yura series will be uploaded

I like how there is at least a progression despite the length and am hopeful that June's Yura-Only month will have more development.

Last edited on 27 April 2024, 18:50.

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Good update, but loses its impact knowing that this might not have even actually happened thanks to the ambiguous canonicity. Big mistake taking this direction imo.

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Why was this changed into the webtoon category? It's not and never has been.

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It does disappoint me that we don’t have that solid canon but at this point maybe NT00 just said that so he can play around with more ideas/have more freedom. Maybe I’m just coping but the extra chapters themselves after original 30 chapters were also always meant to be “extras/not canon” but the progression/Yura and Jin plot points sure felt story-driven and canon. I’ll just say it’s loose canon that CAN happen, doesn’t mean it never did. Plus he still has to connect it to Epilogue which is canon (might just be me inhaling copium, lol).

@valesauce
Thanks for the kind words, appreciate it. Been working on this series for a long time and I’ll continue to do so until the end one day.

@Kileraa
Correct, this has never been a webtoon. Someone mistagged.

@xilero3 @woolcat
Ironically, you could say it’s character progression for Yumi who’s getting more comfortable doing the whole netorase play and getting more corrupted. Real life answer: We’re getting these mini chapters because NT00 is basically working on multiple things each month: 3 fanarts, a Mina chapter, and a Yumi chapter. If it was JUST Yumi like we had 2 years ago like for the curtain play or interview chapters then we’d get way more development. Silver lining is he will focus more on Yura in June so MAYBE we get a longer chapter then.

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@steveyolo80
As far as I know it seems NT00 only (or mostly?) releases in JP & KR. If so, are these 1200+ pages fan-made translations by you, alone? It's such a clean translation! You even translated the sfx as well :D Thanks for releasing this!

Oh, if it's alright could I ask some questions?
- This complete edition is essentially a rework of those 30 chapters yes? are there any big differences between them or just a smoother artstyle?
- Are Yumi & Yura the same character or different people? I've only took a quick look at everything, haven't read everthing in detail yet.
- It seems some of the scenes are haru's delusions number x. Either I missed something or are there some scenes missing? (like, it jumps from 9 into 14 suddenly?)

I wish more artists make recurring OC and story arcs rather than one-offs or parodies and done. Such a lengthy series allows for more story and dialogue, for us to get invested in the characters. Makes it all more memorable.

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@JJroger

Yep, been super dedicated to translating this series since I discovered it 3 years ago always nice to help new readers discover this gem.

- Overall the Complete Edition's plot is largely unchanged, just the art. Very subtle differences in Yumi's characterization and the glasses/megane senpai was retconned out such that the only sexual partners Yumi had were Jun-Senpai and Jin before Haru. I would still check out the original if you have time but plot was largely unchanged.

- Yumi and Yura are the same character. Yura was originally thought up by Jin as an alternate persona for Yumi to "act" like a girl that was Jin's sex friend and not Haru's girlfriend as a part of the netorase play to make Haru more jealous and excited at the same time.

- The delusion scenes are numbered based by chapter, which is why you can see jumps as some chapters just don't have delusions and then they pick up on a later chapter. No missing delusion scenes.

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@steveyolo80 I noticed that NT00 has been including English translations in his Patreon posts ever since he released the first Yura update after the Epilogue. Does that mean you've been helping him directly since then?

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@Hurray456

Yes, that’s correct. I offered to give him English translations to post for his Patreon supporters since it seemed like the fair thing to do as well as many of his Patreon supporters being English speakers.

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So yeah, the May update is just the one page. NT00 said he had less time this month because of a medical checkup. Next month, he said only Yura so perhaps it will be a focused (maybe longer hopefully) chapter.

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FYI this update was community voted, where the other options were bunnygirl and a scene with senpai. I was hoping she'd actually be wearing the black dress in this version since that's what the poll said, but I guess it makes sense given the little time NT00 had this month. I hope he does end up making a bunnygirl Yumi one day, though.

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So would it still be an omnibus chapter then I'm assuming. I do hope that it doesn't go too far as it seems like we have gotten a lot of very aggressive Yura and not as much softer Yumi scenes or seeing where the characters mind is at. Like is Yumi fed up with the Netorase at this point or just teasing Haru (although if it is an omnibus story it wouldn't really matter I guess).

Also has NT00 said anything about the continuity yet or is it still up in the air. Correct me if I'm wrong but the only things that are canon are the first 30 chapters or has that changed or have you heard anything?

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At this point I doubt we're ever gonna see more of what Yumi's thinking anymore, since it seems like NT00 is kinda done with that story in general outside of these essentially omake chapters and putting in more focus on Mina's story now. It's disappointing, but I've come around to accept that. I do miss seeing more of Yumi's teasing, too, so I hope we can at least see more of that.

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@Watertellers
NT00 has said nothing further on continuity yet. Just assume it is loose continuity, but to be fair all those Yura chapters after the first 30 chapters were also at the same level of canon in that they didn't strictly happen but you can tell from reading it is meant to follow the first 30 chapters, and we even now have an epilogue that is 100% canon that references some "incident from last year". So...it's not canon but it feels like canon, at this point I'm just here to see any interesting storytelling as long as it's not lazy.

@Hurray456
Yeah, it's a bit of a shame that Yumi POV was only in the first 30 chapters, seeing her thoughts would add more depth, but also it's understandable why it's left out to leave the reader in suspense and experience the uncertainty/excitement that Haru feels. However, I sincerely hope he isn't thinking of "phasing out" Yumi because that's what a majority of his fans want to read and if it's not at least done justice, that would be disheartening.

Last edited on 31 May 2024, 14:02.

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Okay everyone, NT00 just posted the first chapter of “Her Netorase Penalty Game” which is going to be an arc the NT00 will update every other month. It is 59 pages! Will take me 1-2 days to translate.

Here is what he posted on his Patreon:
Her Netrase penalty game will be posted every other month. I'm planning to be 「Mina Senpai」 + 「Fan art」 + 「Penalty Game #1 Cut scene」 in July.

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@Watertellers

I actually don't have a good answer for you, as if we strictly go off of NT00's words on his previous posts, these chapters are omnibus chapters. To me, they clearly are chapters or events that lead into each other and I'm ASSUMING DOES lead into the epilogue which to me at least justifies that they are at the very least canon, or as canon as all those chapters that came after chapter 30.

Problem is NT00 never said those were canon either but we clearly see Yumi referencing past events that happened in the original 30 chapters. There are arguments for either side and this is just my take that these are canon since (again, I assume) they lead into the epilogue. Could I be wrong and could you argue everything that came after 30 was NOT canon? Absolutely. So really it's a "read it for yourself and take it how you like" situation. Again, sorry that I don't really have a good answer for you or anyone wondering about this topic.

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Hey at least here, Yumi is actually happy doing what she does, and not a miserable, crying depressed mess like Hinako is in "She is Targeted"

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@EHCASUAL
LMAO, I also love reading Hinako and am waiting for her to pull out a 4D chess move that she was actually faithful to Yuichi all along. I'm not coping at all /s

But yeah, just uploaded "Her Netorase Penalty Game" first chapter as the June update. I'll be honest, this has gotten me super excited for Yumi for the first time in a long time and even though the next big chapter isn't coming until August, we will still get a small scene regarding Game #1 in July, along with Mina content.

My guess is that Game #1 - August, Game #2 - October, Game #3 - December and these chapters would perfectly lead into what was discussed in the epilogue - which kinda feels good for "canon" because it all still kinda ties together and makes sense - NT00 totally cooked this month in introducing this format - though I'll be blown away if those future chapters are just as long and high-quality as this first one.

Also, even better is that a specific event in this latest chapter (Yumi's plan for kissing Jin) is where she talked about how she DID kiss him before, but just halfheartedly and not a "true" lover's kiss so that actually helps to reinforce canon by tying back to past events! (NOT that this is her first time kissing him again). I'll be on the lookout for more of these plot points that tie back to past chapters.(muh CaNOn)

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I feel the conclusion of the penalty game may ultimately lead to the end of the Yumi/Haru storyline if it does tie into the epilogue scene that Yumi referenced. However, Yumi is NT00's main source of revenue and why most people are probably subbed to his Patreon so its a weird situation to be in if I was the artist. It would be nice to go full blast with the Mina storyline or create entirely new characters and start from scratch but this is not my livelihood so idk. Either way Yumi/Haru's story has been going on for over 3 years at this point and at some point there need to be an end or just continue to make random what if chapters.

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We already know this isn't going to turn out to be NTS to NTR because we already know the ending of this story. All NT00 is doing now is filling in the gaps, along with just random scenes with vague canonicity because he needs to eat.

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July's additional cutscene has been uploaded. It is an additional page that references a past scene that also foreshadows the "2nd netorase penalty game". I'm looking forward to the 1st game which will be August. But yeah, otherwise this month is more of a Mina month.

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I really like how I can see NT00's art improve overtime in this gallery :)

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Honestly the teasing in that last chapter is the ideal. Wouldn't actually want any penalty game or whatever but her teasing is what made any of her story good. It showed that she was starting to figure out how he's actually wired when she doesn't make him cum until he's balls deep inside her. At the end of the day all she needs is to understand how to play with his vulnerability in just the right way. She doesn't even need to fuck another guy and let his mind do all the work. She could legit just go out and spend time with some friends or just read a book at home and then act like she did something as yura and say he doesn't get to see idk. Most of his arousal comes from his own imagination and the fear of losing her she clearly thinks the other dudes she's fucked especially Jin are kind of disgusting but she has like no self esteem so she let it happen. With haru at least she could put it to good use to get him off but eventually realizing it's not about her being a slut so much as just him being a sub and her needing to learn how to Dom him.

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Her Netorase Penalty Game Ch. 2 is out! It's 41 pages, will try to translate and get this out asap!

For September:
NT00: Video call scene for「Penalty Game#2」and delusional scene work for purikura

Update: August update released!

Last edited on 31 August 2024, 21:20.

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Also FYI for everyone reading the latest "Her Netorase Penalty Game" chapters, the numbering can be a little confusing:

Ch.1 - Prologue/Setup (06/2024)
Ch.2 - First Penalty Game (08/2024) 2nd half expected 09/2024
Ch.3 - Second Penalty Game (ETA 10/2024)
Ch.4 - Third Penalty Game (ETA 12/2024)

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@Snittzi

This gallery is mainly for story and does not contain all CG variations. For looking at all CG you can find them pretty easily with the Nt00 tag or by the Japanese galleries.

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I'm sick of this Jin guy... Wish NT00 would introduce new characters or have her do stuff with Senpai.

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@valesauce

Hey, different strokes for different folks but I disagree with the opinion that NT00's gotten worse or that he's lost touch with what made his story sexy. After all, his most popular chapters were when he ramped up the netorase plays with Yumi and Jin back in 2022 and fans come for the netorase and possibility of NTR but that ultimately concludes with Yumi's love for Haru. This chapter honestly shows a return to form with Yura and Jin escalating the netorase play.

It seems you overly criticize him whenever the netorase side outdoes the loving/vanilla moments between Yumi and Haru but this really isn't that type of story where it's single frames of nts reporting between pages of vanilla. The after story chapters you mentioned where netorase doesn't play a major part were not engaging to me either because a majority of his fans are into the netorase aspect, not reading 10-20 pages of vanilla sex between Haru and Yumi and then a passing mention or single frame of Jin pertaining to netorase play (now that would truly be boring).

"3 days of effort" is honestly kind of disrespectful because the original Yumi chapters or the early After Story chapters had an average of 10-20 pages per chapter but now Ch.1 of the new series had 60 pages and Ch.2 has 41 pages, all with improved art. You might say that most of those are black screens or rehashed frames but a better indicator is by number of PSDs (main poses/art with variations) and older chapters maybe had 1-2 PSD at best and the past 2 chapters each had 5 PSDs. It may not be your cup of tea, but most of your criticisms seems directed at the genre of NTS/NTR not appealing to you and then criticizing him for not portraying Yumi the way you want, assuming he's ruining the character when this story is 90% NTS/NTR and 10% Vanilla and Yumi is acting perfectly in line with giving Haru what he wants with netorase play with "out of character" moments just her acting and hamming up the Yura personality.

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First of all, thanks Steveyolo80 for the translation as always you re awesome. A lot of people lost their patience with NT00 after the long reboot which honestly apart from the good drawings were very much giving us nothing.

Someone on NT00 s Patreon was complaining this new chapter are doing stuff we already saw in 2022 and they wanted the Christmas follow up. But I disagree 100%. The issue with 2022 was with that Yumi and Haru regressed. They were as lost and not communicating as before they were a couple. The Netorase Penalty play and the teasing from Yumi (it s not Jin sending the messages but her). This is what I wanted. This is the evolution of their kink in a way that don t send them back . Jin is probably still pushing for some stuff and getting a very good deal. But at the end he is just a dildo. Even in the dialogue Haru is not hesitating to ask for more.
I just hope that Nt00 will not go back to his old bullshit and keeps with this concept.

Also Yura is so fucking hooot in this outfit. I wanted more scenes of her doing naughty things dressed like this. Nt00 drawing is so much better than before it s crazy!!!

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@melumisium at this point idk if NT00 will ever wrap up the series considering Yumi is his most popular OC. Mina doesn't seem to pull in the numbers as much, and even if he wanted to retire Yumi and focus on Mina, I doubt his patrons will stop asking for more Yumi content.

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@Kuuderere Jin's face really is annoying, and I can't shake off the feeling that he doesn't deserve any of this, he's too much of a real character with a backstory to be "just a meat dildo", but doing it with Senpai or other guys wouldn't make much sense by now, this is just filling the gap with "maybe-canon" stories (they are canon don't bullshit us NT00), so introducing Senpai again knowing Jin would have to come back at some point would just bloat the story with cheap NTR-bait

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New update today is Past Yumi with Senpai.

Update TOMORROW for Penalty Game #2 Additional Scene!

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@Aniimey

At this point you should probably stop waiting then, RIP bozo.

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I feel like this series was either really poorly planned or they need to milk the ever loving crap out of it after it got popular

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@Tintern

At this point I just hope it goes out with a bang and Yumi is not just abandoned after the netorase play chapters. I will complete the new chapters translation in a couple hours.

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I admit I can't put my finger on it exactly why, but for some reason I find this rebooted version less enjoyable than the original comic.

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Pardon the wait, just released the second part of Chapter 2! NT00 will release Chapter 3 (2nd Penalty Game) at the end of October. The way this is shaping up, the next two chapters have the potential to be some of the best in the series! It's a great time to be a Yumi fan.

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I noticed a really nice detail, when Jin asks if Yumi can stay overnight, she instantly takes her hand off his neck and tells him "It's all for the play, so no" but then she looks at Haru and goes insta Yura mode, she puts her hand on his neck again and agrees. Very well made, NT00 maybe slow but he delivers.

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Not bad. She focuses on eye contact with haru and breaks character when Jin tries to get sassy. She makes it clear her focus is on doing what makes her boyfriend happy and that it's an act, and that's hot. She's clearly not yura, but has a good idea of how to act like yura, for haru.

First time in forever I've had something good to say about nt00s work lmao. Now to see what happens with the next chapter and if he keeps it "pure". I really wanna see yumi step into her femdom role and actually take charge with him so she can start dictating their sex life on her terms, which I'm assuming she eventually does when she realizes he's an addiction and that she needs to also be responsible sexually for him so that it isn't all on him and so she doesn't feel like she's constantly degrading herself and their relationship. I like the idea that she doesn't like it beyond just the physical sensation of a dick entering her and how she's been ducked by strangers enough to not be bothered by it and just have it be a physical thing, but I also like her not liking it in her heart and having it be something she sacrifices to pleasure haru. It's true to her character how she let senpai take advantage of her so long so she grew accustomed to seeing her body as something to exploit for a man's pleasure, and she continues it for haru where every time she does nts she is letting haru exploit her body out of genuine love since she likely understands if she doesn't then she doesn't deserve him since he treats her better than senpai therefor deserves to exploit her more than he ever did, which comes down to not only fucking him however he wants(which unlike with sensation she enjoys), but in basically becoming a porn star that records private porn for him as an actress, for free. It's a sexy angle for me cuz it shows her sincerity but it's also a sexy angle that when she's had enough she will take more charge in her relationship so they can have a healthier sex life that doesn't revolve around her degrading herself or harus addiction.

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This is more of what we've been needing, actual story direction and properly written characters. It's always nice seeing Yumi put Jin in his place whenever he tries to assert himself, which we've been sorely missing. Haru actually seeming into it and willing, and wanting to push it further to a reasonable measure. It finally feels like Yumi is doing this for Haru again rather than her doing it for Jin and herself.

Yumi even said, "Sex without love is only a simple physical act for a small amount of mutual pleasure." I'm glad to see that the author is actually caring for plot and characterization again, because even the curtain play and following Christmas were lackluster in terms of writing. Here's hoping we continue like this. Nothing better than a healthy, realistic NTS relationship with a communicative and happy couple.

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Really good chapter this time, I don't quite get the penalty game still... He's going to let it go to the end anyway, that's not a mystery, or maybe not, because that would interfere with the Christmas creampie plot, who knows.

@valesauce Femdom could be a nice direction to go, it's not ALWAYS a good thing to add because what's the point of femdom if the author is going to make her lose to cock, but since that's not the case here it would be a fresh take since after the unprotected sex we're getting next chapter all they can do is creampie really and that won't happen until after the christmas chapter on that one year time skip where she probably did it, it would explain why they stopped too, Haru clearly will just keep going if Yumi allows it, so I can only see them calming down if she's the one making the call.

Base +6, Halexis578 +6

In terms of sexiness and netorase, the chapter was very good. But there's no hiding the fact that he used the final CG of August, made a bunch of variations, and called it a September update. I very much enjoyed the update, but still, he very obviously didn't create any new cgs outside the delusion one and flashback one. Maybe netorase penalty game is just, procedural for him? He already drew the October CG and we've already seen it. So I have a feeling he'll do this again.

Take a CG we've seen before, add some variations to it, add some dialogue, and call it a month.

That said, if the Nov/Dec update is incredible, he can do whatever he wants in October.

Base +10, Halexis578 +6, chikoritaex +6, SadMookz +5, Shallfallen +6

I kinda hope she ends up vetoing him and realizing she wants to keep like raw and cream pie and the rimjobs to only haru. It would cheapen her too much for me. Would be better if the risky stuff happening is her realizing earlier on to deny him and the contention around it, maybe a falling out with jin on her and harus end since she never liked him to begin with but he was safe and easy and harus choice as well, and knowing he's gonna mostly be a good boy because she has an absolute monopoly on the pussy he gets, let alone her being yumi the campus queen. I'm interested in seeing how far the author goes to satisfy the nts fans to the chagrin of ntr fans or corruption fans in general.

Base +6, Halexis578 -6, 44inf +6, Shallfallen -6