Hypnosss here! So this is the first chapter of my new comics Brainwashing Eye with heavily mind control theme, this storie is about David a loser who want date his teacher Mrs Jessica Sstar.
For more visit :
www.patreon.com/hypnossscomics

hmmmm, seems promising

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Yeah, sorry, the english is just too bad for me to take seriously x)
You should find someone to translate it for you, good luck

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Try https://www.deepl.com/ for translation. It will help you a lot. Thanks for sharing!

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just 1 suggestion, Hypnosss, I think it's better you have someone else working on the English, there's many enthusiasts on Hypnohub would willing to help you

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Man, your work is very good. Interesting progression and good visual.
I'm really looking forward to the continuation

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什么写轮眼

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Jesus Man the translation is atrocious

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Very good XD

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Everything is great, I could even put up with the English. Do have someone else help you with translating, though.

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@Na240
·-·-·-·-·---··--·-·-···-·-··
不是邪王真眼？

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Reminds me of Code Geass

But with no mechas

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use chatgpt or claude to fix your grammar.

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This is, like, non-english speaker's idea of english.

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Can people stop doing the "English" This and "Grammer" That!

It is spam

Talk of proper things like, The Eye being similar to Code Geass or some stuff that reminds you of something or plot

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The "english!" isnt spam
Its not fun to read something like this if i have to constantly guess and/or mentaly correct whats being said.

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