Posted on 08 September 2011, 12:16 UTC by: just om3ga
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Last time, the 00th chapter isn't leveled enough.. and the both has many bad english.. so this time, it's repaired.. with help of oliver from hentairules.net.
Posted on 08 September 2011, 12:42 UTC by: just om3ga
Score +17
If there's something wrong with it, i would edit it once again.. so please comment..
Base +8, DJ_Puchuu +9
Posted on 08 September 2011, 13:49 UTC by: Sera404
Score +32
Just posting about tags - while incest tag is valid (sort of, in the threesome), the sister tag is wrong. Hiru/Hiro (translation alternates between the two spellings) and her mother are next door neighbours of the protagonist.
Of course, unless there's a chapter later on with incest pairing, then it's valid again, haha.
Base +12, Therin86 +7, Hyoros +13
Posted on 08 September 2011, 13:58 UTC by: MADARA-TAKA2
Score +5
Grammers perfect nothing to change very clear TL.(side note) storywise good but all business men should be given a note stating:Your wife will proably or most likely cheat on you(in hentai)while your gone.So fuck as many women as you can and have a good trip.