-Update: After my 3d software crapped out and my finished renders library getting wipe I am slowly making a return.. I am currently testing out LuxRender.
I still have a long way to go - I've been switching up the genitals and trying to smoothen out areas here and there. First line and a bit don't have backgrounds as I was more focused on fitting the chracter's clothing correctly. lol
These haven't had any post-work on them yet.
@MarMist- Thanks for the kind words! I actually have already finished around 5-6 more images (2-3 with creampies - No internal views yet (I am not that good yet!) will update once i've finished more. I want to add 15-20 images each update. :)
I'm posting this because I care and would love to see you improve. I am also pointing out things while not always knowing how you can really fix them. So don't get mad and I hope it is useful input :)
Zoom out more in pictures 1 to 8 and make the images a higher resolution instead. Cut-offs like that make it harder to estimate their actual size, but that is part of the enjoyment in these. In 10 her balls are also hanging outside of the camera frame, in 11 it's hardly enjoyable at all anymore because now both the face and dick are mostly cut off.
I think you should work more on some of the faces. Some of them are good (30), but others... Pics like 28 are more disturbing than enjoyable due to the combination of creepy facial features and a very dumb-looking expression (for lack of better terms...). The lighting is also weird, as if a spotlight is being shone down there. But it's not reaching any of the background, so that is all black. The hair here also looks very fake ans plastic-y (in 12 too). Try not to stretch hair texture. In 12, try not to make the hair clip right through her boobs. It should be laying on top of the boobs. But in 21 it should be hanging straight down and not lay on the boobs.
Untextured nipples like in 27 look very unnatural, add some pink around that and add a bit more detail to the nipple itself. It also looks as if the nipple is actually a point pulled out the rest of her breast, it would look better if it were like a clear separate bit sticking out. And her skin looks grey and dull, like she's risen from the grave. The reflection in the eyes are also too high (same in 35), they would not shine like that unless they're looking at something bright, but the room is clearly dark.
The semen in 29 looks more like mercury, it is too reflective. The semen in 41/42 does not look like any liquid at all, but a piece of hard plastic. The teeth and tongue in 43 shine too much and the teeth have a very brown color here. The skin textures are much better though.
Her right boob in 35 is flattened. 37 is a very unclear angle that does not quite show enough of anything. 39 is kind of the same.
45 is lacking some liquid or wetness and it also looks as if two loose elements are kind of going through each other instead of getting the feeling that she is penetrating her. Blur/merge them a little bit maybe.
Hope you keep making them and improving. There's some duplicates in here btw, better fix that :)
I also have a personal request in case you feel like it: a girl with a tiny dick growing enormous over the course of a year? Maybe with constant comparison to friends who stay the same size. I love things like that but they are rare.