Translated by HentaiHarvester. He isn't an experienced translator, so a better English translation will probably come along eventually.

lmao the sfx on the censorbars is retarded

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I laughed heartily. This was just too much.

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these futanari stories seem to get better and better. shame this genre is still scarce in anime :(

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Well, English is sure as fuck not this guy's first language.

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This translation is fuckin' wack. Whose idea was it to keep the Jap grammar articles in English?

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Couldn't fap; too busy laughing at the sfx.

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Should I take it that your typesetter isn't experienced either? Holy fuck this is horrible.

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I was gonna say "Holy fuck it's been ages since we got a translated Behind Moon work, bout time!"

Instead I'm forced to just say "Holy fuck."

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I am HentaiHarvester (I can confirm this here if you doubt that for any reason: www.reddit.com/r/futanari/comments/3ivt5a/kancolle_chinshufu_q_behind_moon/).

Thank you for your feedback, I can now see my own folly, particularly that I lost the essence of the original Japanese by going for too literal of a translation. I will take this into consideration if I ever translate anything in the future, but I can't honestly make any guarantees I ever will; I generally have more important things to do (but my priorities can tend to get rearranged when I am feeling too horny).

To answer some questions that came up:
- I consciously chose to keep some of the Japanese grammatical constructs (particularly "desu") in Kongou's speech because she misuses it and it is spelled with Katakana when she speaks it; furthermore, the things she says that I rendered in the Impact font were originally English words spelled in Katakana (for anyone unfamiliar, Kongou's Japanese speech is eccentric, to say the least).
- I did the typesetting myself, and I am not experienced in that area either.

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mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm yesssss............................

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@BlueRingedOctopus I would be glad to proofread for you. I have proofread for scanlation groups before (not going to use my name from there here), and have some experience with fixing 'too-literal' translations.

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