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(Fanartistincts) The Eclipsed.

Western
Posted:2016-01-11 09:37
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Language:English  
File Size:3.09 MB
Length:20 pages
Favorited:32 times
Rating:
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Average: 3.46

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Posted on 11 January 2016, 09:37 UTC by:   CrimsonCock    PM
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Made by GlaringDream90 in Tumblr.
Posted on 11 January 2016, 13:14 UTC by:   blagblag    PM
Score +18
Bleh, self-insert OC. Eh, whatever. Can't have everything.

Also, minor nitpick, the final panel is kinda skeezy, especially since *he's* saying it instead of Luna/Celestia. Obviously *he* wants to do that again; it's hotter if the *girls* want to do it again.
Posted on 11 January 2016, 17:36 UTC by:   l4chuga    PM
Score +5
No person in their right mind would run away from a threesome with hot chicks, especially if they are single.
Posted on 11 January 2016, 18:23 UTC by:   Derpy Doo    PM
Score +5
I'm pretty sure I'm not the only noticing this, but this art looks a bit... off, in places.
Posted on 11 January 2016, 22:27 UTC by:   somnophile    PM
Score +6
The one thing I do love about this is that it's just such pure self-indulgence. Written to please the author and no one else. The fact that you think it's hot can make it hot.

The fact that they made an entire comic on their own is great, and if they keep at it, I bet soon they'll start to be good in other ways.
Posted on 12 January 2016, 00:22 UTC by:   blakfayt    PM
Score +25
@somnophile: Only if they work on improving the writing. Page one was an utter dialogue disaster. OC insert is obvious, Luna is suddenly a cowardly child because the boy she likes is "a chick magnet", and a dozen other problems. Sword Art Online had less Mary Sue, and Kirito's middle name is "Plot convenience."

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