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@Biladsan
Thank you

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God almighty! You just send my future children to heaven! Thank you so much!

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2 words
Fucking Dumb.

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I think this the first time I read Yuzuki N Dash and there is warm feeling at the end...

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Finally, it's like the old story from Another World story.
your silly setsuna .
and fucking Yuzuki N DASH .Haha
just kidding.
sorry for my english bad

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at least she could had make the epilogue a few page longer

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Thanks to crdr777 for translating this manga into english, much appreciated.

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A sad story, Setsuna when she thought had lost the Gin for Tomoe, she tried to fill the void in his heart that is his love of Gin with sex, but she would never be really happy because only the love of Gin can fill the void in his heart She should have taken the initiative with Gin when she thought he was dating Tomoe to get him back.
If the teacher had married Setsuna, she would have been unhappy because she married a man she did not love, only to escape the emptiness of her heart in sex that would only be filled by Gin's love.

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The thing that bothers me is the gap between chapter 1 and the epilogue. What the fuck happened in between that? She has sex with Gin and just decides to leave him to follow the teacher? And Gin randomly decides not to go after her? Or she disappears without telling him which is even worse IMO. Regardless unless it was due to sloppy writing, she chose the teacher in the end due to lust/infatuation even after sleeping with her 'true love'.

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soo uh happy end i guess?
seems like it atleast.

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This story reminds me of Musa and Fork in the road by mashiraga aki

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Page 80 "It's like I'm raping you here" 10/10

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*long comment deeply analyzing the plot and characterizations contained within this Nipponese pornography*

alternatively

I like, was good, thanks translator, that all.

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Sole Male? Setsuna has sex with the Gin and the teacher.

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Wait a second. So in the end she ended up following the sensei instead of Ginto but sensei got arrested because he started sleeping around with other girls? We all know how stupid female characters can be in hentai, but some male characters are really fucking stupid.

This guy finally conditioned the girl to love him and she has his baby at that.
Even a goddamn ape (who are monogamous) would know to appreciate what he's got when he has a mate and wouldn't go and fuck it up.

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Such a dumb story...
Comparable with "When you let go of my hands" by Takenoko Seijin.

Anyway the art is good so thanks for the translation i appreciate it!

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To me, the epilogue confirms the bad writing. I've commented before on the plot holes and the suspension of disbelief you need to read this story, but the epilogue confirms it.

So the teacher catches here sniffing the jockstrap of the guy she loves and blackmails her into sex. Fast forward, she follows the teacher around after graduation and after getting pregnant. She finds out that the teacher is fucking other high school girls, so she turns him in. Why does she grow a pair of balls at this point? The entire story up to that revolves around her being dumber than dogshit and not willing to do anything about her situation. What changed the character? When she realized that the teacher is not going to support her and the baby financially?

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I found scary the Satsuna's attitude of if behave relatively docile with the teacher, never seek help with Tomoe or Ginta, never report the rape to the police or even refuse to go to school, her simply obeying the teacher. The professor was stronger physically, but had alternatives for her to face him like calling the police or asking for help, she behaved like a lamb with him.
In hentai "Itazura Senyou Hanahira Seitokaichou" by Inomaru, the girl reported the rape to the police.

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I need a tall glass after finishing this cuck tier shit. Good job Setsuna. Ya did it champ.

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:/ poor sensei. When will the NTRguys get Healing?

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Yuzuki N Dash's full translated tank.... A glorious thing to find....
Thanks for sharing!

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@Danman It seems she left Gin without telling him anything because she didn't want Gin to know about sensei's baby.

So Gin's probably just really fucking sad because to him, the love of his life disappeared after having sex with him without explaining a damn thing.

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Wow look at the ending she went and looked for the sensei. This girl was fucking retarded I hope the white knights can see it now. I hope she finds Gin only to have him with another girl he doesn't need this girl's bullshit in his life. Only good thing about this was the art.

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I've been skimming through some of these chapters as they were being posted, till I finally gave this entire thing a read. Now done going through the whole thing I feel so unsatisfied in every way possible...

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And now everyone can agree this is Yuzuki's worst work so far managing to even outclass Another World against my expectations and hopes which I thought to be impossible.

Sucks to be Gin being left in the dark like that by both his childhood friend and first love and by his friend that crushed on him.

However, he can move on, there is plenty of fish in the sea and in a way he avoided a bullet if he had to be with a terrible person like Setsuna and Gin even as a kid is more of a man she ever deserves; I pity her child's future with such a mother, can't choose your family goes the saying.

The worst part of all this is that the author had 3 years long to do this story yet still failed to make a simple but decent plot and a compelling main heroine character.

The inconclusive ending AND the tankoubon exclusive yet inconclusive epilogue is just the icing on the cake that further proves the poor writing leaving the art of this work as its only salvageable part.

Edit

Forgot to thanks the hard work by Triple777, I know it was quite the ride for him as much as it was for me.

Thank you very much 777!!

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I force ones liked the ending, "im such a stupid sow, ill better disappear from the life of the poor boy a love without causing pain and try to start a new life"

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I cant believe Im going to say this.... but twilight was better than this garbage and that's says a lot! It is THE WORST insult any literary work can get.

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Oooohhh! Now I understand the epilogue. I remember when everyone thought it was some kind of yuri ending. XD

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"Well a man's gotta impregnate girls."

^ Reasoning on point, yo.

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Manga theme. anyone?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KUfzMDryA94

Fuck that shitty sow. Don't fail me now with a shitty "true love" ending, Yuzuki

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How could you rage about the ending? Most NTR stories would end like this, if they didn't cut off once the girl has fallen completely. Or do you expect the rapist suddenly thinking "Now that I've broken the girl, I'll marry her, shower her with love for her whole life and never even think about touching another woman"? And if you expected Gin to somehow solve all her problems, your obviously new to NTR, that's not how this genre works. It's a terrible love story, but that's the point.

Actually, it's quite intriguing, that it's about Setsuna's feelings and not just "He has such a big dick, I'll never be able to live without it". She even realizes the mistakes she made herself in the epilogue.

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The most idiot stupid story. made the dumbest woman.

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I knew NTR always had retard logic but damn, teacher use her smell fetish to blackmail her. she got blackmail because of THIS!!?? damn...

she should not write anymore NTR. I never read any good NTR from this author.

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you guys are so dense about women and reading too much ntr. Get of your computer and face reality

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Such a good character design wasted on NTR (and not a very good one at that). Do yourself a favour and stop at page 37, the art is great but not enough to make it worth reading through the story.

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What the fuck was that story. Stop reading the moment the first scene is over. The rest of it is absolute fucking garbage.

Whoever wrote the story needs to find something new to do.
The art was nice but theres so many pages of shit that it takes away from it.

Also the ending was so bad that I was more satisfied when I was missing the last few pages of the download.

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Stopped after chapter 3, the first sex scene with the teacher is painfully slow, I almost fell asleep.

@nhoctu97 I have no idea what you're talking about but there's a 100% chance you're a virgin.

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So if I got this right--

setsuna gets banged by sensei, still against it
setsuna sees what appears to be tomoe confessing to gin
setsuna then chooses to be with sensei
we find out tomoe actually is in love with setsuna
gin then decides to confess to setsuna, they have sex
tomoe then chooses to abandon gin, go with sensei
sensei gets arrested for sexing other high school girls
setsuna at this point already has a child and confesses her past to tomoe

...jeez talk about a confusing story

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Disappointed to be quite frankly honest. At least the art is hot.

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Sensei's the dumbest NTR antagonist. Reeled in prime teen pussy (delicious tomboy at that), make her like you enough to propose marriage, impregnated her, and then got arrested for sleeping with other high school girls. Jeez, quit while you're ahead...

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It seems a lot of people get read differently
She never sold sensei to the police
Sensei got caught by the police duh

I really don't understand how some people here hated the girl =_=

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There's a missing page from Chapter 6.

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The story is so bad that got a 3rd restock, thats say much about people tastes, well w/e.
This confirm again that NTR its not for her she should go back to her genre, but since she is working for mujin i fear its not the last one, good thing she is now busy working on mangas.

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So many guys here don't understand the story at all. Here you have a girl who is a tomboy and is never seen as girly by anyone. The Sensei is the first person to ever treat her like a woman, and even though he raped her at first, she becamse obsessed with him because he treated her like a woman and desired her, something Gin did not do until much later.

Why did she follow Sensei after he transferred? Because when she had sex with Gin, she found out he only realised his feelings for her after she became conventionally attractive, Sensei found her attractive when nobody else did, so she decided to follow the guy who loved her for longer.

Ending is a bit shit for Gin, his best friend and crush leaves mysteriously and will return back to you with some old mans baby. Cucked for life

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Im guessing the prologue in the beginning is the true ending?

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HornyTiger stop writing nonsense. This girl was naive and like many young girls got used by a teacher. The only reason why she kept quiet is because she had no idea what to do, she was afraid of reality and that her family would abandon her, that the boy she loves would find her disgusting. There are many women who get used and molested, raped and they're afraid to do anything because of society they live in, they choose to remain silent until the times comes. Why do you think many rape victims only report after a long time, some even in ten years? Do you think she had choice when she got pregnant not to follow the teacher who impregnated her? It was not about loving teacher over boy, tomboyish girl or girls in overall don't accept being raped just because they require attention or lack love ,nor they sleep with anyone who find them beautiful GOD! why would someone want to get raped by a random teacher especially one who already loves someone else? she followed him because she knew that with child she's burden to her childhood friend and disgusting she accepted being with teacher because she carried his child.. but in the end teacher was found being rapist and raped more victims so he got jailed and even that plan couldn't work for her. She ended alone and used, shatterd, even disgusting teacher couldn't remain with her. Even now after all you see she cries and remembers her love to a childhood friend who she loves still. It's you Horny tiger who doesn't understand story. IT's a story that's fitting for young girls to teach them, like JOSEI genre, similar to Shindol's work. It's very useful material for teen girls who might end up in similar situation and not know that crime is about to happen that they have to openly speak their mind and not be afraid until it's too late...

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