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(C91) [Private Garden (Tsurusaki Takahiro)] Yuudachi wa Teitoku-san ga Daisukippoi! | Yuudachi Loves Admiral-san Very Much, Poi! (Kantai Collection -KanColle-) [English] [Death Usagi]

(C91) [Private Garden (鶴崎貴大)] 夕立は提督さんが大好きっぽい! (艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-) [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2017-01-04 14:02
Parent:1013780
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Language:English  TR
File Size:63.99 MB
Length:21 pages
Favorited:1663 times
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Posted on 04 January 2017, 14:02 UTC by:   Death Usagi    PM
Uploader Comment
"Poi is Love, Poi is Life. Poi"

Greetings, this is Death Usagi, the KanColle Guide on Youtube, Facebook and KanColle Wikia.

Happy New Years to everyone! I have volunteered to translate this Doujin of Yuudachi as this Doujin was so cute and well done. XD

Thank goes to 'tism' for providing the RAW for the community.

This is my 2nd time translating a Doujinshi, so there might be a few mistakes I may have not noticed. If you think there are room for improvements, you can always let me know and I will do my best to improve for future opportunities.

If you are a KanColle Player and in need of assistance, don't hesitate to visit my KanColle Guide pages:

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Or you can always visit our KanColle Wikia or KanColle Reddit.

Thank you for reading!

EDIT: Fixed the mistranslated line on Page 4 (and the end meme because of it =w=...) Sorry about that.
Posted on 04 January 2017, 03:05 UTC by:   Wilfriback    PM
Score +158
You're going to get poi, and you'll like it.
Posted on 04 January 2017, 03:07 UTC by:   Fighnjaci    PM
Score +83
Page 20 tho.
Posted on 04 January 2017, 03:18 UTC by:   Wilfriback    PM
Score +49
Yeah, missed them since the shitty Admiral from Hiten got killed.
Posted on 04 January 2017, 03:39 UTC by:   Death Usagi    PM
Score +32
I don't translate doujins that often that's why.... XD;;

I am translating another one right now. The one with Hagikaze and Arashi :P
Posted on 04 January 2017, 04:09 UTC by:   Larequirem    PM
Score +26
officially stated 12 years old girl
No lolicon tag
character with unknown age and small breast
LOLICON TAGGED to the max
brought to you by EH tagging vote system

RAW:/g/1013368/225dbb3392/
EDIT:isn't "12 years age difference" make it worse ?
as we can see here the admiral is quite young make yuudachi "possibly" younger than 12 years old
wait, it's not the yuudachi the one who older right ?
Last edited on 04 January 2017, 15:29 UTC.
Posted on 04 January 2017, 04:15 UTC by:   nabusco    PM
Score +110
Boy if that Poi's 12 im 12 too.

Thanks for the translation mate.
Posted on 04 January 2017, 04:40 UTC by:   Noreally    PM
Score +55
>Full colored lewd POI

Hell yes. Thanks for the upload.
Posted on 04 January 2017, 04:44 UTC by:   CrossD    PM
Score +56
Nice page 20. POI!
Posted on 04 January 2017, 08:05 UTC by:   Derpchsr0    PM
Score +38
BEASTIALITY???

I'm sorry, it's a joke. Yuudachi is so much like a tiny dog I sometimes see her as such.
Posted on 04 January 2017, 08:07 UTC by:   xestrm    PM
Score +37
So glad this got translated quickly, Poi is such a cutie!
Posted on 04 January 2017, 13:14 UTC by:   greekguy194    PM
Score +67
https://www.doujinshi.org/book/973410/
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=60588244

Artist links:
http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=11277
http://privategarden.jp/

Where to buy:
https://www.melonbooks.co.jp/detail/detail.php?product_id=198359
http://www.toranoana.jp/mailorder/cot/pagekit/0000/00/07/000000072369/index.html
https://doujinrepublic.com/product/product_page_2000465654.html?ref=tag_page&type=tagpage_product

Instead of posting stuff to promote yourself, it'd be nicer if you actually bothered to post stuff to credit/promote the artist whose doujin's translation you've uploaded. Just a tip for the future.
Posted on 04 January 2017, 14:07 UTC by:   Death Usagi    PM
Score +35
Fixed the mistranslated line on page 4. Sorry I must have misinterpreted that line.

@greekguy194. Noted. Will do that next time. Thank you.
Posted on 04 January 2017, 14:08 UTC by:   shakuganaexa    PM
Score +28
Thanks for the translation! You'll get better with experience. For those insulting him, how about giving him constructive criticisms? There are already a few English translators that are willing to translate for free. Perhaps you could get off your ass and actually try to translate something.
Last edited on 04 January 2017, 14:32 UTC.
Posted on 04 January 2017, 14:55 UTC by:   greekguy194    PM
Score +27
@Death Usagi Good to hear. Also, altho this is mostly just my personal gripe, it's best to avoid using "I am" "You are" etc. and instead just use contractions "I'm" "you're". It looks especially weird when you use contractions for other stuff like don't and can't. Using full forms is something you use in formal documents and such (or I suppose you can get away with using it on characters who have a very formal manner of speaking) which looks weird when reading a doujin, especially when it's used with a character like Yuudachi who personality-wise is anything but formal with the Admiral :P

Overall it was a pretty good read. I do like the choice of fonts. The only eye-sore I noticed outside of the "I am" bit was at page 4 top white bubble. Feels kinda weird for the sentence to break between "any sorties" and "anytime soon" when there's a comma right after. Personally I'd propably try and fit the text so that the part after the comma ends up on the 2nd part of the bubble (tho you'd propably need to reword it a bit so that you don't shrink the font too much, another thing that's best to avoid).
Posted on 04 January 2017, 15:43 UTC by:   Xero8420    PM
Score +6
OH, NO!! Why you do this to me?! HNNGGG!! Now I got heart attack!
Posted on 04 January 2017, 15:56 UTC by:   Death Usagi    PM
Score +4
@greekguy194

Thank you very much for your input. Will try to improve for any future translations I do. XD
Posted on 04 January 2017, 17:05 UTC by:   Hakrei    PM
Score +29
Lots of poi~ and in full color... whats not to love?
Posted on 04 January 2017, 17:45 UTC by:   Speed Racer    PM
Score +0
@Death Usagi Hey, I like your attitude guy. Thanks for the tl
Posted on 04 January 2017, 18:15 UTC by:   Mrsuperhappy    PM
Score +71
@Larequirem.

"officially stated 12 years old girl
No lolicon tag
character with unknown age and small breast
LOLICON TAGGED to the max
brought to you by EH tagging vote system"


Age has nothing to do with it. If a character looks like a loli or not, that's how it works, what exactly is the issue? You aren't of course suggesting that a character who looks nothing like a loli gets tagged and a character who does look like one but are said to be 500 years old (for example) doesn't are you? Because I'm going to assume you aren't an idiot who is suggesting that visual tags should be based on dialogue. Obviously Yuudachi in this does not look like a loli at all.

If you think a character who is tagged loli does not look like a loli and should instead be tagged with small breasts (which cannot be used on lolis) or if you think a girl does look like one and is not tagged then vote accordingly.
Posted on 04 January 2017, 18:37 UTC by:   leoanon    PM
Score +13
I love me some full color.
Posted on 04 January 2017, 20:42 UTC by:   Death Usagi    PM
Score +18
Poi is definitely no loli... Much to Fubuki's demise =P
Posted on 04 January 2017, 21:39 UTC by:   Rouge・    PM
Score +26
@kusanagiryu I too, wish that whiny entitled easily offended babies that have never contributed to anything in the community such as yourself would learn to just ignore the things that they don't like. So I agree with your second sentiment.
Posted on 04 January 2017, 23:35 UTC by:   svines85    PM
Score +38
Great stuff, thanks :)
Posted on 05 January 2017, 03:48 UTC by:   Untamedtaco    PM
Score +0
Whenever I see the term MP used, I can't get MA out of my memory at least until there is an American loli. Anyway great stuff Death Usagi:)
Posted on 05 January 2017, 08:14 UTC by:   dandan550    PM
Score -25
Calling Yuudachi a loli when she is taller than Fubuki and had bigger chest? Is the translator stupid?
Posted on 06 January 2017, 00:53 UTC by:   tentengu    PM
Score -46
@dandan550
Yes, yes he is.
Posted on 06 January 2017, 08:22 UTC by:   theterribler    PM
Score +6
Huh, I thought 一回り以上年の離れた would mean something like "more than one stage (of life) younger", but according to yahoo answers jp it does seem to mean 12 years.
Posted on 09 January 2017, 11:52 UTC by:   TheGreyPanther    PM
Score +56
https://www.doujinshi.org/book/973410/
https://www.doujinshi.org/book/973943/Yuudachi-wa-Teitoku-san-ga-Daisukippoi!/
RAW: /g/1013368/225dbb3392/
Korean Translation: /g/1013393/9b9252e3bb/
Chinese Translation: /g/1014765/6a52900e44/

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