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(C91) [Hokkebain! (Halcon)] AH! MY MISTRESS! (Fate/Grand Order) [English] [UCW]

(C91) [ほっけばいん! (はるこん)] AH! MY MISTRESS! (Fate/Grand Order) [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2017-01-22 08:49
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Language:English  TR
File Size:28.72 MB
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Posted on 22 January 2017, 08:49 UTC by:   Vatrix23    PM
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Posted on 22 January 2017, 08:55 UTC by:   PescaroloOreca    PM
Score +34
I feel like being watched nutting to this doujin

10/10 keep it up proud of you
Posted on 22 January 2017, 09:20 UTC by:   arialinnoc    PM
Score +55
http://www.doujinshi.org/book/974635/AH!-MY-MISTRESS!/
http://www.melonbooks.co.jp/detail/detail.php?adult_view=1&product_id=198615
Posted on 22 January 2017, 10:22 UTC by:   xvnnn    PM
Score +27
halcon is a god
Posted on 22 January 2017, 11:33 UTC by:   Larequirem    PM
Score +77
you master is super virgin ?

get rid of it with your mouth and BELLY BUTTON
and next time with your anus
Posted on 22 January 2017, 13:11 UTC by:   japanese_porn    PM
Score +16
i 2 require training
Posted on 22 January 2017, 14:24 UTC by:   A0_    PM
Score +16
needs some editing.
Posted on 22 January 2017, 15:10 UTC by:   Noreally    PM
Score +85
>Belly Button

Ahh, I see. So he's a fellow of fine taste as well.
Last edited on 22 January 2017, 17:07 UTC.
Posted on 22 January 2017, 16:45 UTC by:   Ice_Cream    PM
Score +35
Anal sequel, when!?
Posted on 22 January 2017, 17:00 UTC by:   Ravenbane    PM
Score +24
Some of the wording feels off, in terms of sentence structure that is
Posted on 22 January 2017, 19:48 UTC by:   ShadowKlaw    PM
Score +71
o lord it got translated. Didn't even realize I was waiting for this. Might need some fixing though.

That said:
p.5
"[...] no resistance against women, right>" > -> ?
"I have only moves [...]" moves -> moved
" [...] are handful" -> are a handful

p.9 "[...] queen and gatekeeer [...]" gatekeeer -> gatekeeper
p.12 "pack with a pervert" pack -> pact? unless this is slang i dont know
p.14 "in numerous occasions" in -> on
(also "how did it even", unless this is intended?)

finally, p18 preapered -> prepared

idk about phrasing stuff however.

(one may question why i did this... i do not know.)
Posted on 23 January 2017, 09:27 UTC by:   FireShark    PM
Score +15
Shishou, train me too!

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