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Next time I will have to read it the whole way through first to see if it's worth working on.

Raws from /g/800065/ed9753c4a6/

EDIT-Fixed errors

There is no Yuri; I was lied to.

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Are you sure you know what yuri is, 25tolife?

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p15: "I thought you were still I thought you were still mountaineering"

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>pg 15 "I thought you were still" said twice
>pg 16 "repelnish" should be "replenish"

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Yeah, Hikari does seem like the type who drinks a lot of protein supplements.

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the errors are still there

pg 15, "I thought you were still I thought mountaineering" should be "I thought you were still mountaineering"
pg 16, "relplenish" should be "replenish"

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I was about to make a new torrent, but upon checking:

p.12: "uneasesed"
I think you were going for "uneased." At any rate, contextually it should be "uneasy."

p.15: "I thought you were still I thought mountaineering"
Makes no sense whatsoever. "I thought you were still mountaineering"

p.16: "relplenish"
Yeah, it's still wrong. "replenish."

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