Nice work on the translating! There is actually some good x-ray views hidden in here, on p. 12 and 27. Thanks for this upload!

Base +26, Pafrog -18, unknownshadows +5, Bobangock -6, ranoya +6, finnick8 -7, Fofotron +6, funk_u_up -13

Oh my God yes!
Thank you so much, I was waiting for someone to translate some of Midori's works and this is the second one in about 2 months.

Hopefully someone will translate the rest.

P.S. I know people dislike CGrascal because of his grammar but there's some improvement. Hopefully someday you'll have your grammar up to snuff and I guess this one was understandable overall so I won't complain about some obvious mistakes.

Base +11, Bobangock -6, ranoya +6, Arandir Moratar +6, warellis +7, finnick8 -7, Kiranta +6, Silver_Kirin +6, Fofotron +6

Typos on page 11, should be 'remain', p14's 'beting' to 'getting', and p16 'fighting'. Overall great read, it's rare to see Yakumo family doujins translated. Much thanks.

Base +13, primeemu16 +7, Bobangock -6, ranoya +6, Nameless Spectre +6, finnick8 +7, Kiranta +6, Fofotron +6

This guy is just casually fucking some of the most powerful beings in existence. *thumbs up*

Base +6, Kazuar +7, DOIHI +6, ranoya +6, Arandir Moratar +6, warellis +7, InnerCookie +8, finnick8 +7, mizzigianni +6, Kiranta +6, DOIHI3 +3, Heyhoy +7, Silver_Kirin +6, and 5 more...

Good job!
You are improving!

Base +7, ranoya +6, warellis +7, Fofotron +6

Reminder:
Chen is Ran's shikigami, so she can basically feel everything that Chen's experiencing and vice versa as long as Ran allows it. While Ran is Yukari's own shikigami and so the same principle applies to the two as well, and thus Yukari could, through Ran's filter feel what Chen's experiencing as Ran is feeling it.

Basically. This lucky SoB is fucking not just three women, but three independent aspects of the same woman who could feel what he's doing to the other two at any time they want or allow.

Base +6, Fofotron +6