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Language "English". Just fucking barely.

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We get signal. Someone set up us the bomb.

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Your base are belong to us.

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If it wasn't for the grammar, this story would be excellent! It holds a lot of potential, I think.
I'll rate it at 5/5 because I like the artwork and content of fetishes so much !

But as the others suggest... Please clean the grammar even though you can read it for fun. If segregated from the gallery.

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God damn, this is great, I'm always up for seeing some bound prisoners being sexually tormented, so yeah, great stuff indeed, thanks a lot :)

For tagging purposes, please don't tag this as "poor grammar" (again), this is an OEL and is exempt from that tag as such.

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What a beautiful Duwang.
Chew.
There must be no place as pretty as this town.
This feels like a picnic

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Honestly the artwork is great! But yeah, english is not....great.

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I could tell yout this was be so much fun ..

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This is some Backstroke of the West type shit that we're on here

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What is OEL and how does that make this exempt from getting the "Poor Grammar" tag?

Does it being OEL mean this is good grammar? "The story begin when our ship get attacted by highly advance alien battle ship"

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Feel free to add "poor grammar " Tag.

I would be appreciated if you could help me on grammar correction.

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When will the next page come out?

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This is great if only the english was actually not terrible... if someone could translate it from shit english to actual english, it would be great.

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Absolutely one of the sexiest things I've seen when you put it out. Been checking each month or two since then for updates. I really would love to see more.

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For a sequel I'd love to see the girls managing to escape and struggling with their situation. They'd be caught between disgust and humiliation on one hand and temptation and pleasure on the other hand, resulting in sweet anguish and a full identity crisis. Also, what would they do? Report back and risk being disappeared to a secret research facility? Try to hide their transformation and start a new life with new identity, hidden from the government? Or give in to the urges and return to the aliens who would give them endless pleasure?

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I don't understand why the body swap.
Perhaps the story would have been improved because Girl A was killed in the fight so they revived her with Boy A's parts. so it made sense to stick his brain in her body.
otherwise it just seems a pointless exercise.

Would also like to see the supposed results of the alien research.

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