My second completed translation.
This took me multiple weeks to make...
I hope anyone will appreciate this at least a little bit.

My first language is not english so feel free to point out any mistakes I made.

I took some liberties while translating this which made this story much more hardcore NTR than the japanese original was if you don't like that then wait for a better, less amateurish translation or translate it yourself.

If you don't like the NTR genre then please just leave. Nobody forces you to read this.

Here is the japanese original:
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The hell? The bitch tells him to kill himself and Pansy-kun jacks off to it anyway? Truly a...

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>they are not yet a couple
>the girl already has boyfriend that she likes

>netorare
>cuck

picture of bronze greek statue thinking.jpg

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The visual of the girl getting her head stuffed in the dude's underwear in one swift motion is perfect.

Last edited on 30 June 2017, 14:58 UTC.

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This is not your usual netorare, this is advanced netorare.

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Weird that you decided to take creative liberty but whatever.

Just for those who don't know, there's just some added text in some places. I haven't compared it fully but the last 3 bubbles on pg. 24 are;
"Oh I forgot to say this but..."
"I don't want you making the mistake of thinking I'm your girlfriend again, so don't ever talk to me again."
"Bye byee."

Most of original text is still there, so... is this a rewrite...?

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One day I'll read an ntr h-manga where the dude bitchslaps the hoe into submission.

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Another girl who has been brainwashed into becoming a whore addicted to the penis of her rapist / blackmailer.

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I read this before, this was pretty dumb. Sanagi can do better NTR than this.

I gotta say, I don't like the liberties that were taken with this translation, either.

Last edited on 30 June 2017, 02:37 UTC.

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Why didn't he just walk away?

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So he dodged a bullet and got some fap material out of it all?

Happy end?

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Knock, knock, knock. Who's at the door? Why, it's the Pulitzer Prize committee knocking on OP's door to congratulate them for this fine example of literature.

Last edited on 30 June 2017, 13:56 UTC.

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l'm more offended by the file size than the ntr lol

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translate erect erect next!! by same arist

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Wouldn't you just use the tape she sent you at the end to blackmail her into dumping him?

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that is a lot of tag for a 25 pages of manga

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I laughed to be honest

Pansy-kun btfo

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Can someone confirm if this is a rewrite?

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What kind of twisted love story is this...?!

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How is this NTR again? I did fap a bit, but just got confused at some point. What a dumb whore.
Also, the filesize is stupid high for the amount of pages. Fix that.

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Wait, what? The guy who's NTRing the MC is MH's boyfriend? This is a nonstarter.

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they do not have to be in a relationship for it to be NTR...

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Kinda surprised she even had to tell him to never talk to her again. Soon as the jerk boyfriend appeared and she happily accepted his abuse, all conversation should have ended.

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It was said million times already
YOU DON'T HAVE TO BE IN RELATIONSHIP TO BE NTR'ED.
NTR is feeling of betrayal in general, so you can be NTRed by your mother, sister, crush, childhood friend etc even if you are not in sex relationships with them

This manga is NTR, cuz MC is feeling betrayed but it's not cheating cuz they were not a couple

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There are more fish in the sea, hang in there Pansy-kun.

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Like KazeSpirit say, the girl don't call him Pansy-kun and she never tell him to commit a suicide.

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good thing is they gave you the vid
so you can ruin their life for revenge LOL.

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NTR is when there is something getting taken away from the MC this can be a wife, girlfriend, mother, sister, childhood friend etc.
It's about the feeling, not the state of a relationship.
Jesus Christ how many years do people have to keep explaining this shit.

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I thank you for your hard work and I'm not saying I'm personally capably of doing a better translation, but I think it's better if you try to keep the flow of the original dialogue intact because it creates a situation where we as readers don't known if what the characters are saying is accurate to the original, like KazeSpirit has said the female character never tells the guy to commit suicide.

Last edited on 03 July 2017, 22:01 UTC.

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K i think there may be something wrong with translation, she calls his penis a tiny little peashotter, but unless my eyes are wrong he doesn't have a small penis at least when compared to the other guy. Yeah sure there may be a difference but it's not a enormous like it's in other ntr.

Oh one thing more her dialogue at the end has been completely pulled out of ass :p

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Okay, so if I'm understanding this: NTR doesn't just mean a set couple. But rather the feeling of being betrayed.

So any loser can imagine himself having an imaginary relationship with someone and then declare themselves as NTR'd if they then find out later that person they liked had/got a lover in the meantime?

Holy. Shit.

That is far more pathetic than what I understood it to be.

This is Elliot Roger-level shit here.

But! I finally understand NTR! YAY

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lol page 20
"ah i messed up"

DOH I MISSED

Last edited on 30 June 2017, 18:49 UTC.

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It's NTR because if there's one thing that all those galge and harem stories have taught us it's that all women should be pure untouched virgins up until the point that they fall in love with the MC. And it goes without saying that they're all required to fall in love with the MC eventually. Rivals are unheard of!

So obviously when we find out that the girl that the MC was one-sidedly fantasizing about already had a boyfriend that must mean she's a filthy bitch! That's not how it's supposed to work!

(I shouldn't have to say this but I will just in case: The above is all sarcasm)

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Damned good stuff.........heh, "majestic cock", I fuckin' love it.......Here's hoping our pathetic little MC is scarred for life, he deserves it :D

And no, this doesn't meet the EH definition for the NTR tag, he's just some shmuck, it only counts if it's a spouse or partner.

https://ehwiki.org/wiki/netorare

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难道丁丁不大就真的只能左右互博了吗(✘_✘)心疼asai kun努力找gf吧！

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How is making another guy watch you having sex proof of not having an affair with that guy? Anyway, MC should have walked out on page 10 and never look back.

@CronaBaka/GGWPEZEZ: Contary to what NTR might have thaught you, having proof of two students having a sexual relationship doesn't mean you can force them to do anything you want or ruin their lifes.

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Rewrite is defined as "Someone has filled in their own text either in place of the original text or where there was none." If the "translator" added text, that makes this a rewrite even if it is 99% a translation.

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To reiterate what svines said.

This does not meet the definition of NTR for this site. The definition states that they have to be in a relationship. In other words, Husband/Wife, Boyfriend/Girlfriend.

It does not include mother, sister, brother, son, childhood friend or father.

DO NOT APPLY Outside definitions to say it is NTR.

If NTR is in the title or the author says it is, does not count either.

Last edited on 02 July 2017, 05:13 UTC.

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She clearly does not have any feelings for him and they don't even have a long close relationship. She was also already in an official relationship with the other guy long before the MC came into the pictue so its definitely NOT netorare. However, with the dipshit moderators of this site and their anti-NTR crusade, even if they were childhood friends and like each other but can't spit it out (by far the most common NTR setup) but she gets cucked by the big, the NTR tag would still be phased out.

@scooter1171

That is a stupid ass definition of NTR considering most of the stuff advertised as NTR have the two characters clearly liking each other but not in a official relationship. You dipshits just phased out 70-80% of all NTR with that definition. For fuck sake, True Blue is like that and it is one of the most well-known NTR EVER! 80% of the ENTIRE FUCKING BLUE SERIES (which revolves ENTIRELY around NTR) is like that. Jesus fucking Christ. You people must like watch anime and such cuz the romance there always revolving the leads clearly liking each other but never getting together until at least the end.

Having people who don't even like NTR or know shit about NTR define what NTR is is fucking ridiculous.

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Holy Fuck! This made me feel a little sad about the guy :(

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fuck off ntr!

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Wow so many of you guys defending a hentai genre even though ithe shouldn't be one to begin with. Any netorare has become so diluted over the years that apparently even hardcore fans can't tell what's NTR or not, it's in the name to have your lover taken from you is it really that hard to understand not to mention that NTR now is becoming boring with absolutely no changes to the formula and that's sad, NTR fans make fun vanilla cause is boring and predictable LOL, really predictable have you guys ever read vanilla it's constantly changing and adapting NTR at the other hand it's still the same, same story, same characters, same world, and same ending, guy looses girl, girl becomes a slut, and guy ether likes it or not. Hell the one change NTR is trying to do is to reverse the roles were the girl looses her boyfriend, but even that comes out wrong ether the boyfriend looses girlfriend as well as the girl that was stilling him away, or the girlfriend wants her boyfriend to do it with other girls because she likes it, in other words is consensual. Vanilla isn't perfect it has bad ones in an ocean of stories, in comparison to NTR's bucket of stories and droplets of good ones but hey that's just my opinion on the matter.

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Anti-NTR crusaders remove yet another netorare tag.
You know, just because you remove the netorare tag dosn't mean this stops being netorare.. This is still NTR.
Removing the tag only makes it harder to find/filter this.

Tags that have been forcibly deleted by the mods can be found by selecting 'Search Downvoted Tags' in the Advanced Search options. Especially when searching for netorare, use this function. There are a lot of NTR works hidden due to the this sites definition here.

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It's funny how butthurt vanillafags write walls of texts just to prove their boring vanilla is better than ntr. Oh btw, this is most definitely ntr, only retards and vanillafags would think otherwise.

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This is like Friendly NTR, beginner NTR

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This sites definition of NTR is batshit stupid. This is 100% NTR. Fucking tag this shit properly.

I went and took another look at the wiki.
Right fucking in the definition:

"Also acceptable for when the story is clearly meant to invoke jealousy or sympathy on behalf of the person being cuckolded."

What the fuck is the tag doing vetoed then? IT FITS THE FUCKING DEFINITON IN THE WIKI!

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Whether or not it's NTR aside, I'm pretty sure the NTR tag should be "Female:netorare", not "Male:netorare". Such as with Sanagi Torajirou's Dosukebe Encounter. Male netorare is when the man is the one making the rounds. But, it's the woman in this one.

Correct me if I'm wrong.

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The fact that so many people on are unclear about which tags to use makes it impossible to avoid this garbage.
There are people out there that will go looking for specifically what male:netorare is supposed to be while filtering out female:netorare, and will instead run into the exact opposite because of these brainlets vetoing the correct tag and adding the incorrect one.

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