I'd never thought my last translation is considered to be not bad, I'm honestly surprised.
I know it's not a perfect translation, but hey at least you get the point of this doujin like
I always wondered years ago...
Sorry for page 16, I'm not yet capable of redrawing over the japanese texts.

In case you didn't know, Aeba's sense of Death isn't exactly means losing life.
He always puts it in Grey area... even in the sequel, actually you're not technically dead.

Sequel: /g/744003/1158ea8ba6/
Sequel after the sequel: http://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ189145.html

http://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ102214.html
RAW: /g/525315/c18689bd36/

To be honest your first translation was better, but the effort is still very much appreciated.

If you want to keep improving I'd highly suggest browsing around the Cove of Scanlators board on the forums for help with things like phrasing, font choices (the girl's in this can be a little hard to read sometimes), proofreaders, etc...particularly this thread.

LoL, I guess if it's not technically "death" I'd be fine with this amount of "torture".

Last edited on 12 July 2017, 07:03 UTC.

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Thanks man, so it's better to have something clear to read rather than focusing on its aesthetic points. Got it.
I have to admit though, I was having reading problem too when I first aplied the font,

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So, a Vampiric(?) Oppai Loli femdom-paizuri's a premature ejaculator into submission. Simple. Neat.

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Nice job, thanks for doing another translation for everyone! Yeah, the girl's font is a little harder to read, but not too big a deal. Keep up the good work.

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Page 5 looks like a loli but the rest are all normal?

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A quick little Lore here for those who find this kind of doujin unsettling:
1. You got lost/kidnapped/arrived to some japanese village which inhabited by busty lolis.
2. This girl likes you for some reason and wants to paizuri you to death...you die...
3. You wake up again, wondering how'd you get here and get paizuri-ed but not dying this time (The last page hinted you've already died once, something about you lacking warmth ).
4. In the sequel, you got paizuri-ed to death (again) by bunch of busty lolis.
5. In the sequel of sequel, you found out each time you die you revive again but having little memory as of what have transpired.
6. Turns out the Loli in Red wants to keep you here so you can experience bliss of paizuried to death as much you like.
7. Ending: Repeat the cycle over and over... Or marry one the lolis and do paizuri with them everyday. (Doesn't seem to be much different, but preferable if you dislike snuff)

Last edited on 12 July 2017, 22:42 UTC.

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Judging by the artwork, the faceless victim ejaculates not semen, but purest spider silk. That girl's gonna be rich as TITS.

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MC: "Whats happening?"
Me: "The lucky dreams of others, THATS WHAT IS HAPPENING, YOU LUCKY BASTARD!!!"
Really? you wake up and then a big breasted loli just gave you paizuri? Even if they will chop you in little pieces, i think after the paizuri, you can go to heaven gladly.

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YASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS One of my favorite artists.

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@IND3Xfr5ut
You mention that the girl in red resurrects the guy again and again for death-by-paizuri. Is there a limit to how many times she can resurrect you? Are there sideneffects to dying all the time, like you start to lose all your memory or something?

If you marry one of the girls, can you donly do paizuri with that one girl or more like they'll still allow paizuri with the other girls and all that?

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@warellis
No actually, the loli in red knows you'll revive each time, but it doesn't get explained who revives you or if you revive according on your own accord or maybe I'm just missing some dialogues in the game.
The game just explained you're back to life some hours or minutes after you hit death. And the good news is, there's no limit how many times you can revive back. (Implied by marrying demon loli which makes her confine you in your own room and paizuri you to death for hundreds... even thousands years to come,

Side effect: NO, but each time he dies, he slowly starts to remember what happened, though only in form of dreams and bits and pieces. So it's the opposite.

Marrying one of the girls: I don't know about this. The game just ends with you tit fucking the girl of your choice and that's it.
Although... once the game gives you the option to marry one of them, they start becoming quite possessive. Take it as you see fit.

Last edited on 19 July 2017, 07:16 UTC.

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@IND3Xfr5ut:
>7. Ending: Repeat the cycle over and over... Or marry one the lolis and do paizuri with them everyday. (Doesn't seem to be much different, but preferable if you dislike snuff)
>And the good news is, there's no limit how many times you can revive back. (Implied by marrying demon loli which makes her confine you in your own room and paizuri you to death for hundreds... even thousands years to come,

By "demon loli" you mean the loli in red?

And also there seems to be a contradiction in these two statements from you. Do you mean that when you marry one of the lolis, the paizuri, on screen, will not result in a death but will result in a death uh off screen I guess?

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@warellis
>Demon Loli is the chick with white hair, only appears in game. You can see the CGs for the said game in the description.
>Marry one of lolis does not result death, and it never mentioned in the endings at all. (Exception for demon loli and Pharmachist Loli)
Death flag only appears if you ACCEPT to be paizuried to death by every lolis at once. Again, "ACCEPT",
The game actually gives you the choice to embrace death over and over or deny it by marrying the girl of your choice,

Here's a list of endings, what happens after you can dechiper on your own,
Loli in Red: Paizuri everyday, anytime, and she'll gladly do it without second thought.
Loli with ponytail: Explore the world together while doing PAI here and there,
Loli with glasses: Doesn't care what you do to her... she will just keep reading her book.
Loli with yellow twintails: Was a prostitute, now that you marry her, she'll PAI you for FREE(?) whenever you want
Fox Loli: First reluctant, in the ending she'll say she will do her best as your partner
Cat Loli: Usual PAI everyday with a slight robot-like personality for those who like raping unanimated object.
Blue haired Loli: Husband and wife playing ejaculation management that grows longer each time you do PAI
Pharmacist Loli: Makes you as cum producing machine till you die/old age for... medicinal purposes. (mentions you should've died by harem ending instead of choosing marrying her)
Demon Loli: Transforms your room into outer dimension and trapps you there while PAI you to death forever,
Harem ending: All lolis except for Demon loli PAI you to death. Cycle continues...

I kinda went overboard with these comments... since this is the first snuff-esque genre that I first read and gets me startled... (the art does a little bit too)

Last edited on 30 July 2017, 05:56 UTC.

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woah. this is the rare stuff that Aeba Fuchi draw.
i mean, Paizuri+Fellatio

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