I thought there weren't many Momo Kyun Sword translation so I thought I'd take up on this one.

Sorry for ruining page 8 with my crappy editing. I'm not exactly a retouching master.

Artist's Pixiv: https://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=3549044
Gallery's Pixiv: https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=51144701

Note: Please do not add or upvote the Incomplete tag. I will make sure to remove it as soon as I'm done. Someone has already ruined one of my other galleries because I couldnt downvote that tag hard enough :/

Update 1: All text bubbles are translated now. I might update with some quick texts over the effects later.
Update 2: Removed the tsu at the end of most text

Untranslated version: /g/828801/0165cbfab8/

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Looks good so far. Looking forward to the rest.

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>Please do not add or upvote the Incomplete tag
Well people do it because this IS incomplete. But there's a way to evade this tag, and I'll tell you how. Just follow these simple steps:
1. Don't fucking upload it until you completed it
2. That's it

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a Metapmorphose Guy translation? Yes please. it's looking good, q91. Please continue.

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mad_noodle: Heh, maybe, but I gotta love the out of order tag instead. That is literally the first page as listed on pixiv...

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loooooooooooool

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Futa Futa no Mi

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You're translating the "small tsu" wrong. It's not meant to be them actually saying "tsu". If it's before another syllable, then it's going to double the syllable's consonant (いっぷん -> i_p_pun). If it's put at the end of a dialogue/word, especially if there are hyphens before them, it means "continues to say the last syllable's vocal". So what she's really saying in that third page as "Momoko—!" or "Momoko!" or "Momoko~!".

It always jars me when I see it actually translated as "tsu". So much that I stopped my fap session for this.

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This is actually the first time I translated っ literally as tsu. I mostly did it because i wanted to "spice up" her dialect, but I guess I screwed up more than making it look nice.

I will probably edit these out, and will definitly not continue doing it

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well, I couldn't help but read her lines in Arnies voice

Get to da choppa' ~JA?!

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