Honestly, I'm a little nervous posting this, but I put in way too much time on this, so here goes nothing.
Also probably should have gone with Might Makes Right or Out Of Line for my body font. Oh well, it's at least not fucking Felt.

Also I fucking hate typsetting moans. Which this doujin had a lot of. I like torturing myself.

As for the note at the end, I'm grateful that doujins are being translated. Don't take this as a personal attack against Doujins.com, because it isn't.

Also, if there are any spelling/grammar mistakes do not hesitate to let me know.

Good work, great job. Thanks!

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Page 4: "Omae wa mou shindeiru"

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Thank you for Page 20. Not all heroes wear capes.

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Looking good joker

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You'll never see it cumming

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>making out with morning breath

yeaaaaaa...no.

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hmmmmm, skinny Futaba. Exactly how I imagined she be like in the game.

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This place needs more heroes like you, Hunter Nightblood. You're now on my list of instant likes and favs.

If you think Doujins.com is awful, I got it worse with his relative site, Es-Doujins.com. Tons of doujins ruined with bad bad BAD spanish and this edition.

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Bad doujin translations are just crimes. Anything can have mistakes but Bad is Bad.

As for Futaba she is probably thin simply because she is young and dramatized, so those together burn calories.

For the doujin the art is a bit basic by doujin standards, but anything persona get a high mark for just being. Soujiro is a real boss since we believe that his reaction would really be like this
if it happened during the actual timeline. Fun thought, what happened if the MC hooked up with Futaba during the early game? (hard we know since she doesn't leave the house) Wonder
what Soujiro's reaction would be then?

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Where do I learn image editing to the point where I too, can complain about it?

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The hero we need, but not the hero we deserve.

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