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(C92) [S.S.L (Yanagi)] Rider-san to Natsumatsuri. (Fate/stay night) [English] [Shuten Doujin]

(C92) [S.S.L (柳)] ライダーさんと夏祭り。 (Fate/stay night) [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2017-09-16 18:34
Parent:1114769
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:131.9 MB
Length:27 pages
Favorited:1516 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.66

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Posted on 16 September 2017, 18:34 UTC by:   Kuperman    PM
Uploader Comment
Ayy we in bois. Right after Ban's Martha book this was another doujin thanks to which we started translating, one left on our wishlist.

Make sure to help the artist by buying the book if you have the opportunity to do so!
→https://www.melonbooks.co.jp/detail/detail.php?product_id=272865
→http://www.toranoana.jp/mailorder/article/04/0030/55/94/040030559450.html

Feedback and general suggestions are welcome. Hope you enjoy it!

Edit: V2 out, fixed resolution problem, typeset tweaks and cleaner cleans, enjoy!
Posted on 13 September 2017, 15:32 UTC by:   Algester    PM
Score +58
Mmm a fast translation of yanagi's c92 rider doujin.... Mmm yanagi Rider...
Posted on 13 September 2017, 15:42 UTC by:   kargarok1    PM
Score +119
-Could have used a little Level touch up
-Text could have been smaller
-Text could be centered better
-I don't know why people insist on using this ugly font
-Could have translated the sfx inside the bubbles cause I mean it's inside the bubbles - fair game
+Translation itself seems ok

Gonna get "downvoted" to hell for the above but I'm sure they're the same people who contribute ZERO criticism period
Posted on 13 September 2017, 17:53 UTC by:   the13thArcana    PM
Score +31
You guys are crazy fast! THANK YOU!
Also umm.. Usually I don't really ask for request can you guys translate Yuran/Moonphase's new Fate Doujin?
/g/1111194/a4b722929f/

I'm such a sucker for his artstyle.

And it also had a spanish version for some odd reason (since you guys mentioned you guys translate in Spanish too) /g/1112308/0939c04d49/

Bless your rolls for Okita and Hiji. Though personally I'm aiming for JK/Gozen.
Posted on 13 September 2017, 21:16 UTC by:   Refyrsen    PM
Score +41
The image size is inconsistent. You seem to have used sample images for the translated pages while the rest is at original size.

e: thank you for updating. :)
Last edited on 17 September 2017, 01:45 UTC.
Posted on 13 September 2017, 23:05 UTC by:   Nestor0070    PM
Score +51
SSL Yanagi? Rider?
Instant download. I don't even need to read it to know it's good.
Posted on 14 September 2017, 00:08 UTC by:   warellis    PM
Score +33
You know looking at this, and that last page with Saber, I have to wonder if the others know about Rider & Shirou's relationship here.

I mean how jealous would Saber get if she knew just how much they fuck? :P
Posted on 14 September 2017, 04:18 UTC by:   haseo0408    PM
Score +26
Rider sure is cute when she puts her heart into it.
Posted on 14 September 2017, 13:17 UTC by:   yetsun    PM
Score +45
>Rider
>Glasses
>Kimono
>Sex at matsuri

Downloads at the speed of light
Posted on 15 September 2017, 05:00 UTC by:   Red_Piotrus    PM
Score +61
Thanks for the speedy TL - much appreciated, this is a great series :)
Posted on 15 September 2017, 08:29 UTC by:   dap00    PM
Score +21
@warellis: Given how often Shirou shouts out Saber's name for no reason at all? And with his luck, at the worst possible moments? Probably not that jealous.
Posted on 16 September 2017, 21:55 UTC by:   Ancient-Alien    PM
Score +18
Thanks for the fix. It looks much better now.
Posted on 17 September 2017, 02:09 UTC by:   kargarok1    PM
Score +19
MASSIVE fucking kudos to actually taking advice. Way better. Only thing I'd still say is text could still be centered better. Really good example on Pg. 6 bottom right. Text width should be as uniform as possible and there should be a pretty good amount of space between the text and the border of the bubble. Being picky at this point though. Nice job
Posted on 17 September 2017, 05:39 UTC by:   the13thArcana    PM
Score +19
You guys are amazing for fixing and taking everyone's advice! Good luck in the next Gacha.
Posted on 12 November 2017, 04:37 UTC by:   dokedoke    PM
Score +6
isn't that saber Alter? I don't see her ahoge
Posted on 13 December 2018, 09:34 UTC by:   smartz118    PM
Score +7
Saber stuffing her face is comedy gold, as always.

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