Posted on 30 September 2017, 01:43 UTC by: nowittycomment
Score +51
I loved this, but I'm not sure why. This plot has been done a thousand times, but there's something almost perfect about this one.
Last edited on 30 September 2017, 05:09 UTC.
Base +12, floraider +6, FO-Bakayarou +10, Kinights +23
Posted on 30 September 2017, 03:03 UTC by: dirtyhairry
Score +17
Where in the world is his wife lol? Why are there only 2 of them in the house?
Also, his mother-in-law doesn't look appropriately old to be one, the author could change her character to pass off as his wife and none will give a shit lol.
Base +17
Posted on 30 September 2017, 04:55 UTC by: bakalicious
Score +12
Freehand has also done a story with mother-in-law. Different pacing, but if you like the theme... /g/516799/7cc4d5b5ad/
Base +6, log1sk +6
Posted on 30 September 2017, 13:46 UTC by: abhasundi
Score +21
@dirtyhairry - stepmother not mother in law. father remarried.