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[Merkonig] B-trayal 1 (Fate/stay night) [English]

[Merkonig] B-Trayal 1 (Fate/stay night) [英語]

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Posted:2017-10-17 13:48
Parent:None
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Language:English  
File Size:10.29 MB
Length:9 pages
Favorited:476 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.42

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Posted on 17 October 2017, 13:48 UTC by:   taiko101    PM
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Posted on 17 October 2017, 15:34 UTC by:   Granten    PM
Score +75
I suppose it's English by some definition. Pity, since the art and story aren't bad.

Edit

The creator tried to translate it themselves? Still not going to call really bad English good, but I'll respect them making the effort.
Last edited on 18 October 2017, 03:55 UTC.
Posted on 17 October 2017, 20:51 UTC by:   svines85    PM
Score +123
Great stuff, thanks a lot for sharing, I do love me some bbm on hot babe to sex slave and mind break :)

And I don't believe "translated" is right, this is done in English on the artist/author's site, so I think that makes it OEL / the "poor grammar" tag doesn't apply, it's just kinda engrish is all :D
Posted on 17 October 2017, 22:47 UTC by:   Yepperoni    PM
Score +61
It's always nice to see an author go out of their way to try and translate their own work. A+ for effort.
Posted on 17 October 2017, 22:59 UTC by:   Johannessilentio    PM
Score +64
As if that fat garbage could dominate Saber, and even Gilgamesh did not get it.
Posted on 18 October 2017, 04:01 UTC by:   mercurial008    PM
Score +6
I enjoyed it! Thank you for drawing and translating Merkonig.
Posted on 18 October 2017, 04:07 UTC by:   Shades of Blue    PM
Score -1
y'know, it would be less misleading upon reading the title to simply have in brackets (Engrish).

I don't mean to make fun of this attempt mind you, it just needs to be edited/proofread before release.
Posted on 19 October 2017, 05:54 UTC by:   *lesigh*    PM
Score +6
Semen choke, that is all.
Posted on 19 October 2017, 15:11 UTC by:   Fallen_Fridge    PM
Score +6
I have a sneaking suspicion English is this person's forte... Art was pretty great, though.
Posted on 24 December 2017, 06:01 UTC by:   Ilyia    PM
Score +7
Feels like the translation was intentionally bad. If it was a Japanese person using a translator or something, why would a word like "story" become "stroy". No, this is probably a westerner pretending he is a Japanese person with poor English.
Posted on 31 January 2018, 00:56 UTC by:   Evyy    PM
Score +6
99% ntr doujins are about girls being stupid, as shown by the narrator's (here being the girl Saber) being mentally retarded. The author captured the essence of Japanese ntr doujin like a champ.

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