Translator: Black_Viper
Editor: lacus1

Raw: /s/2f3edb41a5/1007887-223
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@Hinagiku Katsura
Good catches! Seems like the translator's Japanese needs some work...
Some of it was intentional to improve flow, but there are definitely quite a few mistranslations. Glad to see you did a more faithful translation :)

That was a cute read.

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this is cute
and sweet
I got a diabetes

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>Adorable fang girl with lovingly detailed genitals

It's comics like these where the censorship is almost criminal, Moketa went all-out on drawing those lips on the first few pages.

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please complete the seisyun tank

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This was great, but I hate the lack of bare tits.

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Boyfriend: *considering breaking up because he feels like sex would be wrong to do to his girlfriend and is afraid of tainting her innocence and refuses to make the first move*
Girlfriend: *arrives at his place* Today we're gonna have sex! :D
Boyfriend: NANITHEFUCK?!

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That was both cute and very hot
Kissing at the end... How lewd...

Last edited on 19 November 2017, 18:38 UTC.

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> Page 16
A...a kiss? Get that disgusting lewd shit out of here, guhhh!

*Adds Moketa to the favourite artists list*

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Lads, I'm dying from diabetes.

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I am getting some Aguri vibes from her

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Unfortunately, lacus1, your bounty was completed by someone who used machine translation. Hope you didn't pay much for his "contributions".

I've uploaded my translation in a new gallery:
/g/1144322/0796577d46/

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Some things that are wrong:

The title is already wrong....
The boy's name is also wrong.

みかんちゃんはHに詳しい
Mikan-Chan is familiar with sex

Page 1:

こいつの名前は 赤井みかん クラスメイトで 俺の彼女だ
"Her name is Akai Mikan. She's my classmate and girlfriend." (Akai is last name. Mikan is first name.)

Page 3:

今日は工ツチするぞ!
"We will copulate today!" (The original phrase is: 'I'm going to tackle you today!" Which is an indirect way to mean having sex. I'm opting for a more complicated word here instead.)

友達がね三ケ月も何もないのはかわいそうだって言ってて...
"My friend told me it's pathetic that nothing has happened between us in 3 months."

そんな理由!?
"Such a reason?"

というかみかんはどんな事するか分かって言ってるのか?
"But Mikan, do you really understand what you're saying?"

わたしだってちゃんと知ってるんだから!
"Even I am fully aware of these things"

ちょ...っ
"Wai..."

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