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Nice plot twist at the final chapter.

Chapters 1-2:
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As a sovereign nation Japan gets to keep their cultural heritage and identity. If you dislike their male dominant normative gender bias maybe you should feck off and go read some MLP or brony shite. Fecking commie bastids.

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thank you for the translation.

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Link to Chapters 1-2 in English.

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So his superpower is knowing a person's problems.
How does he know how to hypnotize people with 2 sentences?

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Awesome to see this again.

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Page 108: Need to turn the tables on the woman who has you cornered? Just Geogle it!

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I think one can describe the twist and ending to this thing in a single phase, "karma's a Bitch". MC got played big.

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Got 'em.

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Brah DAT plot twist. One of those rare instances in which best grill win, I'm so happy! Any of you guys wanna grab a drank? It'll be on my tabs, as long as you don't order any Dom.

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Let me get this straight: karma, supposedly being a bitch, decides that his punishment after raping a bunch of beautiful women is to have him marry one of them and most likely continue to sleep with the others to keep them under his (well, his new wife's) control? Oh yeah, that's terrible, all right.

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@Elushi: He's essentially a puppet without realizing it, so the irony comes that he tried to control people but ended up being controlled himself. Granted, all he wanted to do was fuck women anyway, so it's not exactly a terrible fate for him lol.

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ending is weak its obvious as can be that she is manipulating him it would have been better if he turned the tables on her that would have been a better story

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I really like the twist it was good. This artist makes too many simple ass endings many in ntr.

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Noice. Not a solid twist but still he already obtained the objective even stated being controlled. I mean, he got all those honey pots by himself.

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@Blackyakuzu94: That's my point; he got exactly what he wanted from all of this. He's not being punished at all, hence the "karma is a bitch" statement being silly here. Sure, he probably didn't want to end up married to the hot nurse that he's going to continue sleeping with, but without her help (i.e. control), he probably would have went for one of the students and gotten himself caught, like she even mentioned. As you yourself said, this is irony, not karma.

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The goal for any MC is to get your mark to believe they already won, that they're right.

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School nurse: "all according to keikaku"

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What a twist!

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Chapter 3-10, page 152 end, Ch 1-2 another

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