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Before anyone asks, this is the true original English version. All of the other versions are rewrites, with grammar so bad, I couldn't understand what was going on. I know it's a little redundant to upload this again, but I think it's worth it to see the original dialogue.

Edit: After page 12, some rewrites have the original dialouge. This is not a rewrite.

Genuinely appreciate the upload.

But I don't know. The dialogue in this original is fairly bad on its own. At least the other version was so laughably bad it was funny.

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I kind of wanted to see alistair fuck sona. Sad, but at least we got some lulu action.

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“Makes you choke harder than CLG in the playoffs” Lulu is savage.

Edit1: after page 12 is the same rewritten pages.

Last edited on 06 December 2017, 04:46 UTC.

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BEAR A CHID!

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>I'll report you
Why would anyone rewrite this? This version is better.

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Thank you for this, the rewrite was so bad.
EDIT: didn't notice you changed only the first few pages. meh, still better thatn nothing.

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It's a little bit odd Lulu still wanting to make Sona pregnant with her child so that she'll produce milk, even so after it became known when Lulu beforehand transformed Sona into a cowgirl and she began to lactate from then on. Nevertheless, it's quite a good comic.

Last edited on 07 December 2017, 21:56 UTC.

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哈哈皮克斯好惨

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well

i appreciate the references at least

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P R E G N E N T

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Someone translate this to Japanese

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Can't fap.Too busy laughing.

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First 12 pages and the last part still seem vastly different. I can hardly believe they are both the original.

Even just considering the loaded humor in the beginning compared to "Do your Anal feel good?" at the end. . . .

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it's so cute

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This gave me autism

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